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Current The wheel of time turned once more as bombs burst in the sky and the world rose anew.
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It's an illusion of life. All the same. One and all. All in one. One and all.
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Caught between the angels and demons. Pulled apart by heaven and hell.
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Always in the process of becoming.
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The dead have risen. The dead can dance.

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The carriage ride is uneventful but notable for the tension hanging over in the air. Egil travelled light, with only a few retainers of persons trusted deeply and known to be loyal. A gloomy overcast hung over much of the carriage ride, along with a grim quiet that made everyone appear stone faced, gray. and mute.

Marya, one of the last shield sisters from Illemania would tap the resting Egil on his shoulder.

“We’re approaching now, milord. Look sharp.”

Egil’s party had arrived later than most in a carriage with a lousy left wheel and tatters and scars on the right side from weather. The shabby and furred mule like horses of the Mistlands were scoffed at by their higher bred southern cousins.

“Are you prepared for this? It has been some time since Engelhardt visited here.”

“You mustn't speak to me that way. Not anymore. After today, I am a ruler and no longer a child.” Egil scoffed as he stood from the wagon, landing on his feet on the dry ground below.

“Do not forget your humility in power, my knyaz.” Marya smiled, glad to see the boy’s fighting spirit.

“And do not forget I have read all the books your whimsical proverbs come from.” Egil cocked a grin back at his lifetime companion. After this he would walk to the front of the wagon and made sure his gathered party could see and hear him about to speak.

“I will go the rest of the way with a small guard. The rest may stay and set up camp. The ceremony will go on for some time. Be prepared to leave at a moment’s haste however.”

“Why’s that sir?” A man spoke up. “Fraid somethin gonna happen?”

Egil felt a rage at the tone of the question. Still now his men looked at him but he was a mere child. They would’ve never acted like this to his father. Though that comparison brought with it a maelstrom of sorrow as well. Weight of expectations as Egil struggled to see himself as half the man his father was. He dare not voice such bottled up aggression. Marya looked intently at the lord, with eyes like that of a hawk. Be calm.

“No. Of course not. I just want to put miserable louts like you to work, now go on then.” Egil waved and dismissed the gathered men. Unceremoniously they’d turn to their given task and return to the baggage train for supplies.

Not the best encounter. Need to be better. Can’t have men second guess my judgement so openly. Maybe a punishment is necessary.

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These thoughts weighed on Egil’s mind as he moved on with his entourage of Marya and two other armored warriors through the castle gates. Servants and envoys would come to receive his gifts for the deceased’s family. Several hundred bags of coins and furs from a great gray wolf. The gold was pitiful compared to other donations and many didn’t understand the significance of the wolf hide, putting it along with the other miscellaneous junk.

Egil braced himself outside the cathedral doors, a sudden melancholia gripping his heart. He’d stare upward at the graceful marble statues hanging overhead. With wings outstretched and sword held high, they looked too serene and beautiful for the gloom that staggered him.

“Something wrong?” Simon, the foreign steward asked in a polite tone. Egil had been standing motionless for several moments.

“There was no fanfare such as this here, for my family. My family gave everything for the old crown. When they were hunted and killed like dogs…they were not remembered by the crown. The very same held by that madman who killed them.”

“Sire. This isn’t the time and place for this. You must collect yourself.” Simon insisted. “This is not their day. The Crown Prince’s death has had serious ripples across the entire kingdom and the situation is tense.” The servant feared for his master’s reputation with such outbursts.

“And mine did not? They were not important in the scheme of things?” Egil spat.

“Egil. This is not the way.” Marya again stepped in, standing in front of the boy and towering over him in her plate armor. “You want to go in there and demand justice? With the situation as it is? Do not be foolish. Such recklessness will get you killed in these times. Contain yourself, and preserve for the next battle. There will come a time, young knyaz.” A firm steel gauntlet clasped the lord’s shoulder as Marya straightened him out.

Resentment built up in Egil for a moment, but came to pass. Marya’s words carried too much truth, but he would push his loyal maiden aside.

“I will go in alone. Wait here outside.”

Thinking deeply about the previous exchange and letting the doors close behind him, Egil stepped into the gathered crowd He would blend in wordlessly in the back of the group with no fanfare and a solemn look on his face. Other than some glances, the other lords paid him little mind as they focused on the ceremony. The claimants would give their speeches. Egil noted that Anyamara’s speech was full of passion and bravado, and genuine grief. It made Egil respect her much more, though it was undeniable there was a certain aura of malice in her actions. Something he could only detect since often he felt such malice too. A promising young woman but the tyranny of the mad king was not forgotten, least of all by the knyaz. Egil preferred a weaker king to rule. It would be a good remedy after the previous tyranny and inviting yet another person with Colyt’s blood seemed disastrous no matter what honeyed words she said.

Sharles seemed like the weak king to be. His speech had a tough act to follow up and to say he surpassed his rival would be a lie. Egil would politely offer his applause among the crowd, for political concerns than anything else. His gentle calm tone was reliving from Anyamara’s passion, though his strengths were mostly what he was not instead of any positive accomplishments. In these times perhaps that would be good enough.

After the funeral, Egil would gather up with other Sharles supporters. He’d peer over the stone casket at least once, staring over the beautiful effigy of the fallen prince proudly posed with his sword in hands. His avatar to represent the crown prince for rest of eternity.

There too will be a stone casket for you, some day. As one for your father, as for Daymian, as for you too.

The cold hand of mortality crept over his back. A panic that if he did not accomplish his goals, himself and his ancestors would be doomed to obliteration. Egil quickly turned and faced away from the casket, feeling a strong need for a hard drink. Hopefully discussion with the other lords would ease his mind, but that came with troubles all of its own.


@ShadowSunRisen In the name of the Twin Gods and by judgement of the House of Loyce, the Archdukedom of the Mistlands is bestowed upon the Great House of Engelhardt, Counts of Nassau and Lords of Okenovo! May you rule with justice and serve with loyalty.

(Only two things that need to be changed is their recent adoption of the Adandion language and their neutrality. All great houses known Adandion for purposes of pure practicality and have since they were given their titles a few centuries ago, just like how French or Latin was the language of diplomacy for most of Europe regardless of where a king or noble came from. Although there is a solution that only recently there's been a push for Adandion Language in the wider populace of the Mistlands, especially in the more remote places. The second is a lot more minor but there is an expectation that a Great House is going to declare support for someone. You can keep it neutral if you really want, the main point of it is so that OOC starting out there's less hemming and hawing about whose on whose side.)

Also, everyone whose posted ahead of you also have been previously discussed, the second review here is since that the sheets were made before I had everything properly laid out so its here to catch things that might have otherwise slipped as well as generally taking another look.


Sure, I'll get on those changes after I eat dinner. Thanks for the acceptance.
@ShadowSunRisen You didn't read the rules did you?


well whoops, thought my place was already reserved there since we discussed it previously and there was a mention in the text above. Oh well.





Summary: Weak wolf king of a poor and desolate land in a bad position. A land with its own culture and language that is not widely accepted Must accumulate power for itself through diplomacy and potentially warfare to make the best of their desolate position.

Upped my character sheet finally. Picture hunting took forever.





Summary: Weak wolf king of a poor and desolate land in a bad position. A land with its own culture and language that is not widely accepted Must accumulate power for itself through diplomacy and potentially warfare to make the best of their desolate position.
Sure. Salt to your taste on my ideas to suit your own plans. I don't mind it only being a 'curse' on the bloodline itself which is a superstition either way. I like the King in the Mist concept, maybe an ancient holdover from a bygone era that one could claim the mantle of for prestige.

Also of course he wouldn't have a vast criminal empire or anything, just contacts enough to give him some tools to make moves if needed. I'm fine with a few packs of brigands and it might even just be some flavoring to suit his personality. Maybe not even criminals now that I think about it, just pockets of like 'forest brotherhoods' that made small enclaves to shield themselves from the Mad King's tyranny and they operate as bandits and rogues.

Would you want a character sheet?
@ShadowSunRisen Ideally they would be an Archduke since the Mistland still lacks one. The North overall isn't that wealthy and most of your family could have gotten the axe from the Mad King leaving only the prince behind so right there is the hard times and falling from grace. Still if you really want to pull a Littlefinger go ahead.

I would say try not to go too magical with the supernatural or at least have an OOC explanation of what's really going on (like how the "dragons" in the Dragon's Graveyard are actually dinosaur bones).

An idea I just had before posting this is that it could be the Mistland right now has no Archduke actually, the Great House having had the gall to try and say no only to get killed by the Mad King for it. The first step to power for your character could be trying to become Archduke of the Mistland.


I like the angle of most of the family torn apart by the mad king and no one daring to claim the mantle of Mistland. There could be a ton of curse superstition about the title which would give anyone holding it a mysterious aura. A cursed prince who uses that legend to his advantage to intimidate others is fun. I'd like to be a count in Mistland conspiring for the archduchy then.

I was also thinking of having my character be a sort of thief lord. Isn't shy about using brigands and has extensive connections in the underworld. Obviously, it's more of an open secret thing and he'd deny any associations he has with criminal guilds. Has the situation in the kingdom fallen enough for that to be appropriate? Would definitely make shady dealings easier.

I'm pretty interested in this setting. I have a prince character in mind I have been meaning to use. Just wondering where I might fit into this rp. I'd like to be a count/duke rank noble that's unassuming at first but can make some big schemes to make the bid for the throne. Ideally from a family that's been on hard times and has fallen from grace.

I think the best fit for that from the map is the Mistlands? If that's been taken or not. Makes me want to do some supernatural themes though.

Best of luck to the OP.


Riku had gotten a rough sleep. She twist and turned constantly in a measly 5 hour nap that left her groggy and exhausted when her eyes peeled open at the end. A sleep without any sleep, more befitting the deaths that she had suffered through in her past. The princess made her way out to the center of the camp once getting her early bathing and grooming done. She'd kill for a proper bath, doubting this lousy floor had such luxuries. Now changed out of her usual adventurer gear, instead wearing a casual professional look

Thomas and Runa got her attention immediately and she'd head to them straight away. That whole business with Nephy felt like a dream, but seeing how Thomas glared at Runa told her that last night was very real. Akiko too was there with Kanbaru, it seemed Runa and her were friendly. Katie had warned her about that one. Though on the surface, Akiko seemed charming. Kanbaru was threatening and as scary as ever and the princess was sure to keep her distance.

"Okay, everyone. Chill out." Riku naturally took to the role of peacekeeper. "I think we all made some mistakes but we got out with no issues. And Thomas learned something about himself. I'd call that a success!"

Although she didn't fully believe her words, she expressed belief and wanted to help put any bitter feelings aside between Runa and Thomas. Maybe deep down she'd admit she was motivated by her own guilt in the situation as well.



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