Vesuvius, I haven't read through the whole thing yet, I will when I have time. However, I'd like to just point out a quick thing. In the power section's "Abilities", I need you to give us a description of your power and what it can do, how it can be done etc. Say how long it takes, how it affects you and so on. Include the voice change, too. As of now, it doesn't really tell us anything ^^.
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If anyone has any questions, run them by me. I will try my best to answer them.
I won't be able to discuss things with Tyler so you might only get half answers, but don't hesitate to ask if you want ^^
I won't be able to discuss things with Tyler so you might only get half answers, but don't hesitate to ask if you want ^^
Yes, post your character here in the ooc
I am so happy to see everyone expressing such positive energy! ^^
I am looking forward to RPing with all of you.
@Tearstone
Also, Tearstone, head over to Skype and Tyler and I can have a private convo with you. I believe that will be much more effective. Tyler already said this but eh...I want to be part of the conversation too xD
I am looking forward to RPing with all of you.
@Tearstone
Also, Tearstone, head over to Skype and Tyler and I can have a private convo with you. I believe that will be much more effective. Tyler already said this but eh...I want to be part of the conversation too xD
We will post a collected response soon ^^.
Tyler is writing a response to y'all. Meanwhile, I'd like to tell everyone that I changed my character. I decided to go with a character I had in another RP.
It does, thank you for the explanation ^^. I will talk with Tyler later today.
It is completely fine that her transformations are rather instant given the fact that her power is more of a visual illusion than anything else. I personally do not see much of an issue with her voice changing, but I will discuss it with Tyler and one of us will get back to you.
@Liriia@He Who Walks Behind
I've read through your sheets now and I am very happy with what I've seen, well done both of you. I am very positive to your sheets, but as Tyler said, we will discuss it together before making a decision on anything. Either way, I want you both to pat yourself on the shoulder because you've done a really great job.
As for Lynn, I can really tell from the way you've written that she knows that she is being informal and doesn't 'give a shit'. I love that you added her therapists notes to it as a 'saving touch' to get her into the school. She obviously needs some assistance on formality and professionalism. I like how you wrote this, well done.
I will discuss this with Tyler later today and if there are any changes to be made, we will inform you ^^.
@World Traveler
I like that you've added the bullets, it makes everything easier to understand. I have one question concerning your explosion power. How powerful is it? Can it blow a metal door off its hinges or is it more of a "force push" kind of thing. Can it blow people up or does it push them back?
I've read through your sheets now and I am very happy with what I've seen, well done both of you. I am very positive to your sheets, but as Tyler said, we will discuss it together before making a decision on anything. Either way, I want you both to pat yourself on the shoulder because you've done a really great job.
As for Lynn, I can really tell from the way you've written that she knows that she is being informal and doesn't 'give a shit'. I love that you added her therapists notes to it as a 'saving touch' to get her into the school. She obviously needs some assistance on formality and professionalism. I like how you wrote this, well done.
I will discuss this with Tyler later today and if there are any changes to be made, we will inform you ^^.
@World Traveler
I like that you've added the bullets, it makes everything easier to understand. I have one question concerning your explosion power. How powerful is it? Can it blow a metal door off its hinges or is it more of a "force push" kind of thing. Can it blow people up or does it push them back?
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