Spriggs27

Chasers: Boundary of the Crimson Sky

Wait what's going on I haven't been paying too much attetion.

永花城学園 - Nakkashiro Gakuen/Castle of the Eternal Flowers Academy [Closed]

Just did

永花城学園 - Nakkashiro Gakuen/Castle of the Eternal Flowers Academy [Closed]

As the fish broke free from Dana's bagging and fish juices gotten onto Alice's legs before sliding onto the floor and forming a large puddle of fish juices under it as it laid on the floor, Alice tried to wipe her legs off with a napkin trying to get the fish stench and juices off of her leg, Alice then glared at Dana." The hell is wrong with you ? Going around carrying around a fucking tuna in your bag, you one fishy bitch !" Alice yelled at Dana while another little girl groped her.

Suddenly there was another girl that appeared with some hair covering one of her eyes, Alice didn't know who she was, or see where she even came from, when she stood up for Leagsaidh, and even came to the Irish girl's aid, she then spoke to Alice saying that she wouldn't allow Alice to continue to hurt Leagsaidh, Alice stood up and crossed her arms." Heh I give you credit, most people would wait around till I left before helping their friend out, you got some real courage coming straight at me, so before I break your fucking nose and send you straight to the nurse's office, I'd like to know the name of the bitch I'm beating the shit out of them."

" Eh, I can learn it later after I beat the shit out of you." Alice cocked her arm back and was about to swing on her, but before Alice's fist could touch her face, something or someone stopped her. It was Seika, she stopped Alice's fist and looked over to Touka." Is this the girl that your attracted to Touka ? " Seika asked. Alice tried to pull her fist back yelling." What the-- ?!"

Before she could continue speaking Seika interrupted Alice by delivering a punch to Alice's face." Touka I don't know what kind of people you hang out with, but you should probably make better friends." the Brazilian woman recovered from the punch and went in for a sucker punch on Seika and hit the blue haired girl in the eye and almost made Seika fall onto Touka, but the president caught herself and went in for another attack, Alice did the same. But before either of the two could get into a real fight they both were paralyzed and stopped before they could land a punch on each other, right in between them was the Security chief, she was holding both of the girls by their shoulders and was holding them back.

And before either of the girls could react to her or say anything, several of the women guards entered the lunch room." The Lunchroom is usually your free time away from your classwork and school duties, and it's also my lunch time, but since you both want to cause trouble I will allow the principle take care of you this time." The security chief told the two, the security guards took the girls to the principle's office dragging them out of the lunch room.

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@The Slenderman If I may interject here, the issue with your character as I see it is that your character submission seems as though you strove to make Gula the absolute cream of the crop, almost as if you were striving to make him the de facto leader by way of being unbeatable by the others. This would ultimately mean that the plot would be railroaded to focus around your characters feats rather than the actions of the group as a whole. Now, this isn't always a cardinal sin and can be done tastefully if you do it right and ensure everyone has their time to shine, however you also went and made your character some sort of "I will destroy the world and everyone on it" type in what is otherwise a rag tag team of warriors with backgrounds that, while not all tame, aren't all that dramatic either.

Pink's character Satchi is someone who started out following in her father's footsteps and ended up achieving greatness of her own, Dan's character Xalam's is a somewhat rough and tumble sort who's story is reminiscent of both Piccolo jr's and future Trunks': A warrior who started out with a bad hand dealt to him looking to spare a home not truly his own the atrocities of his own home by growing stronger, Chev's Vekon is just someone looking to survive so he can become strong enough to find a way to escape the hostile land he's trapped in, Spriggs' Sinthe is someone who's had greatness more or less forced onto him due to a prophetic belief, and due to his upbringing believes this himself and is actively pursuing the completion of this prophecy, my character Dimitri is essentially a rank and file soldier from a totalitarian world who occasionally struggles with what little of his humanity remains as he's sent to dispatch his predecessors, and Op's Winter is a noble from a powerful family who attempted to resist a coup despite being met with overwhelming odds.

All of these characters can fit into one troupe or another. All of them can be related to in at least one way and can reasonably be made to work with one another with the right incentive. Your character starts off with a decent background, however it takes an abrupt turn when Gula goes from "i'm cool with all of this" to "kill all humans because of the ineptitude of police officers in one incident". Mind you, his saiyan programming should've had him trying to kill everyone on earth from the day he landed, however you chose to have him inexplicably ignore it, which honestly shouldn't be possible considering that it's a subconcious thing that is countered with a sharp blow to the head during infancy (a la Goku). I'm really not trying to be an asshole here, but it just comes off as unnecessarily convoluted.

@MonsieurShade

Well said Shade.

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Sinthe

Name: Sinthe
Gender: Male
Age: 22
Race: Earthling

Appearance: Sinthe stands at the height of six feet and weighs around 250 pounds, he has long raven colored hair on his head that stops just past his shoulders, Sinthe has two bright blue eyes that sometimes glow, he has light brown skin, he has a small nose on his face and no facial hair on his chin or jawline. Sinthe has a mesomorph build looking like he's at his physical peak with his muscles and strength.

Sinthe wears what he considers to be simple clothing, he wears a black sleeveless martial arts gi uniform with bright white bandages wrapped around his forearms, knuckles and fingers, on his feet he wears simple boots to protect his feet from debris that could be sticking out of the ground, wrapped around his neck he wears a simple white scarf that some times covers his mouth.

Moves:
-Traveler's spear: Sinthe throws a beam of energy in the shape of spear.
-Destruction blast: Sinthe fires a large amount of ki into a front blast with both hands.
-Rain of destruction: Sinthe fires several ki blast into the sky and makes it rain with smaller ki shots.
-Destruction combo: Sinthe unleashes a barrage of kicks and punches at high speed and ends with a powerful blast.

Personality: Sinthe can be a quiet guy who only speaks when he feels obligated to, he's the type of person to call another out on their faults and admit to his own without being a hypocrite, unlike many others he feels weapons are useless and his hands and feet are the most suitable weapons he should use in a fight, he's very opened minded towards others, but when it comes to people who act prideful, he instantly loses all respect for the person with the prideful personality.

Sinthe isn't the type of person to talk about himself too much, and doesn't like too, he's apart of a secrete group that taught him how to be a strong combatant, and doesn't talk about the secrete group at all. Sinthe's fighting style is mostly a mix of Ki attacks and melee attacks, but it's mostly melee attacks, and when he's not in a fight he's not too bad when it comes to directing others in a fight, giving orders and warnings to the person he's helping.

History: Sinthe was born apart of a group that worships The Lord of destruction, Beerus, he was born on a full moon and on the date Lord Beerus arrived on earth for the second time, the group believed that he absorbed some of the god's energy when Beerus arrived at their dojo. After being birthed, Sinthe was forced into an intense training regime with almost no breaks, before he reached age nine the training nearly broke him down but Sinthe put up with the training and soon adjusted to it.

When he reached age fifteen he was stronger than most of the professional students in the dojo and strongest within the entire group, when Sinthe realized this he began to journey away from the group and the dojo to search for Lord Beerus for better training without telling anyone about it, and during his travels he beat several people weaker than him using his martial arts alone, but most of the people he defeated were ones without Ki attacks or proper martial arts. When Sinthe finally thought he found a lead, he oddly was transported to another place or world all together with a giant green dragon, and the rest is just history.

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Daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaang I thought my idea was OP.

@Alan Hawke

Yeah and the Idea I had before was probably just as deadly or stronger.

@The Slenderman

In order for this rp to be, well equal, I would say you would need to be a little more weaker, he can work to being stronger, but having that type of powerlevel in start seems oped, if not then I'm making a major change to my character, but on a real note, being this strong before you get wished is very oped.

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How does he know those moves, when they're the moves of different NPCs?

@Dirty Dan

We can't use moves from the game ? Might as well change them then.

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My Hider

Name: Sinthe
Gender: Male
Age: 22
Race: Earthling

Appearance: Sinthe stands at the height of six feet and weighs around 250 pounds, he has long raven colored hair on his head that stops just past his shoulders, Sinthe has two bright blue eyes that sometimes glow, he has light brown skin, he has a small nose on his face and no facial hair on his chin or jawline. Sinthe has a mesomorph build looking like he's at his physical peak with his muscles and strength.

Sinthe wears what he considers to be simple clothing, he wears a black sleeveless martial arts gi uniform with bright white bandages wrapped around his forearms, knuckles and fingers, on his feet he wears simple boots to protect his feet from debris that could be sticking out of the ground, wrapped around his neck he wears a simple white scarf that some times covers his mouth.

Moves:
-Traveler's spear: Sinthe throws a beam of energy in the shape of spear.
-Destruction blast: Sinthe fires a large amount of ki into a front blast with both hands.
-Rain of destruction: Sinthe fires several ki blast into the sky and makes it rain with smaller ki shots.
-Destruction combo: Sinthe unleashes a barrage of kicks and punches at high speed and ends with a powerful blast.

Personality: Sinthe can be a quiet guy who only speaks when he feels obligated to, he's the type of person to call another out on their faults and admit to his own without being a hypocrite, unlike many others he feels weapons are useless and his hands and feet are the most suitable weapons he should use in a fight, he's very opened minded towards others, but when it comes to people who act prideful, he instantly loses all respect for the person with the prideful personality.

Sinthe isn't the type of person to talk about himself too much, and doesn't like too, he's apart of a secrete group that taught him how to be a strong combatant, and doesn't talk about the secrete group at all. Sinthe's fighting style is mostly a mix of Ki attacks and melee attacks, but it's mostly melee attacks, and when he's not in a fight he's not too bad when it comes to directing others in a fight, giving orders and warnings to the person he's helping.

History: Sinthe was born apart of a group that worships The Lord of destruction, Beerus, he was born on a full moon and on the date Lord Beerus arrived on earth for the second time, the group believed that he absorbed some of the god's energy when Beerus arrived at their dojo. After being birthed, Sinthe was forced into an intense training regime with almost no breaks, before he reached age nine the training nearly broke him down but Sinthe put up with the training and soon adjusted to it.

When he reached age fifteen he was stronger than most of the professional students in the dojo and strongest within the entire group, when Sinthe realized this he began to journey away from the group and the dojo to search for Lord Beerus for better training without telling anyone about it, and during his travels he beat several people weaker than him using his martial arts alone, but most of the people he defeated were ones without Ki attacks or proper martial arts. When Sinthe finally thought he found a lead, he oddly was transported to another place or world all together with a giant green dragon, and the rest is just history.

永花城学園 - Nakkashiro Gakuen/Castle of the Eternal Flowers Academy [Closed]

I'm not sure who I need to respond to.

@Crimmy

Who was the last person Mami interacted with, wait, It's lunch time, you could have Mami go to lunch

永花城学園 - Nakkashiro Gakuen/Castle of the Eternal Flowers Academy [Closed]

@Crimmy @Unfortunately @LowKey123 @Vee Come on guys we didn't even get past the first day.