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You know I like it nice and rough so you're just making promises I look forward to you keeping, hun.


If Vellios's antics get everyone killed, he won't be the one keeping promises. Tia will see to that. :)
Duuka is not allowed to drive the ship. Duuka doesn't know how to fly the ship. The only person that would have a chance of surviving if Duuka flew the ship would be Duuka himself.


Would Duuka even want to fly the ship?
We...do have a pilot right? Someone that can fly the thing?


If by "fly" you mean "crashland without killing everyone", we have Ceisstia.
I think you already know where I stand.
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Glad to hear it might have been a bit of a miscommunicated idea. :) My main concern is she seems to get away with killing people who cross her, even in her own organization, and something like Eclipse that would never fly because they're ruthless, but professional. They wouldn't trust or tolerate someone betraying their own, especially in situations where there's no witnesses. It's also better to have her leave them on good terms, because nobody would be too dangerous to go after if they had reason to want them dealt with.

I look forward to the revisions!


Yeah, I envisioned her more as the person who was sent to deal with problems like that, which was ultimately the reason for her leaving: she was tired of being the Eclipse's clean-up person. If there were any issues with her leaving, it would have been more along the lines of that, with gangs like that there isn't really any such thing as "retirement".

@Dervish If "violent psycho" was how she initially came across, then clearly changes were needed. I was more going for someone who does the job she was given and doesn't really care about anything else, unless you try to stab her in the back. Then she'll make sure you don't try it twice. She operates according to her own code, which basically comes down to "if you agree to something, then you follow through, period". That doesn't always agree with her chosen profession.

Looking back, I think I may have misinterpreted something in the character sheet. What I was going for there was that, outside of the security role she was hired for, there are a few other things she could do in an emergency, but if there was someone else present that could do those things better, she would leave it to them. I just have this idea, as a species with such naturally long lives, asari have the opportunity to pick up a wide variety of skills, which would be rather useful for a mercenary. I'll probably be making changes over the next day or two.
@Dervish I made a few changes to mine, to hopefully flesh out her history a bit more. Also decided that the Archon visor probably hadn't been designed yet in the time period you specified, so instead she has a precursor that she took as "payment" for a job.

Regardless of whether or not she's accepted, I would appreciate some feedback on Ceisstia.
Whelp, that may change, since the majority of the Batarian civilization was wiped out. Maybe we'll see some in the new trilogy.
I actually kind of wonder what, if any differences there are between male and female Batarians. I don't think we ever saw any in the games.
Not much. We've finally moved to day 2, and the parade is just starting.
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