Nice sheet, I like the formatting. You can put that into the character tab. One detail I'm unsure about is the recent marriage. Leoric's been off fighting in the war for a few months now; the RP will kick off with him coming back to Castle Tarrow for the first time in a while. If you want them to have been recently married, how about that they haven't been wed yet? She could have arrived for the marriage not long ago, while Leoric was away, and she meets him for the first time at the start of the RP? That or they've been married for at least a year.
By the by, can I just say that you guys have done a bang up job in character creation? Yes, yes I can, because I'm the GM. Internet cookies for everyone.
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Also if you're looking for more players, I'd try posting a new fresh Interest Check.
Well, I'll take the suggestion halfway and refresh the IC, but I don't want to make a new one just for the fresh tag. That feels like a scummy thing to do.