Vicier

[This Roleplay Is Closed] - The War Begins

-cut-

[Closed Thread] - "Tomorrow When the War Began" based roleplay.

Awesome, just pop on into the ooc page and write up a bio :3

[This Roleplay Is Closed] - The War Begins

Geoffrey Silt said
Fixed *I think* Once again REEAAAALLLY SORRY... I was just a bit hyped to get in I skipped ahead to the CS because my device was on low battery. And as stated just now, doing a picture would take a long as time. As I usually can't find any pictures. And I am on mobile so it is almost out of the question. ALTHOUGH I CAN TRY! BRB. Add glasses I guess?

I understand that a lot of those factors can be a pain in the neck when it comes to posting and creating character sheets, I myself have come across some of these issues; however, so have a lot of others. The best thing to do is take your time. Express your interest an explain that you need time to write up a CS instead of trying to rush it like you have. I have given you constructive feedback as well as fair warning, and even though you have changed your character when it comes to the timeline and adding a picture in another post all together, I am afraid that I will not be able to accept your character at this time. I'm sorry for wasting your time.

Spartan023 said
This was made in my free period at school so it was assembled with whatever resources I have on hand, so tell me if theres anything that needs to be changed.

That is fine, your character is well written and I'm curious now about why he left Russia. Your character is accepted.

With five characters that have been accepted I will start working on the IC , any others who wish to join and get accepted will be brought in as the story goes on. I cannot wait to roleplay with you all and I hope that you enjoy this roleplay.

Starting Over - OOC & Profiles

Morning!!!!!!

Starting Over - OOC & Profiles

I MANAGED TO POST AND AFTER ALL THAT THE DAMN POWER CAME BACK!!! FFFFUUUUUU AUSTRALIAN HEAT!!!

Starting Over - OOC & Profiles

-cut-

Starting Over - OOC & Profiles

Okay, so I WAS posting and the power went out! My post is on my laptop not on my phone! I'm copying it over as we speak!!!!!

[This Roleplay Is Closed] - The War Begins

Actually living in Australia, I'll help with weather and settings and stuff hun, and akela, your character is accepted.

[This Roleplay Is Closed] - The War Begins

Geoffrey Silt said

Just a few things about your Character sheet that you may want to look over before I make a call:
1. Your story line is completely off. As I stated in the introduction to this OOC page, the war has not yet begun (see quote below)

Vicier said
The story begins, like she says, at the beginning. Before anything happens to the country. The young group of teenagers planning and then going on a camping trip to finish off the summer.

2. Your description of your character as well as your biography do not flow; I would suggest you rewrite them so that it works better with the story line; which can also be found in the first post on this page. Or adding a picture of your character instead; instructions on how to do so are listed below in the Code Cheatsheet.
3. And please, I do not intend to come across as mean in anyway, but if the style of what I have just read is any indication of your roleplaying style then I would like to let you know now that this roleplay may not be for you unfortunately.

[This Roleplay Is Closed] - The War Begins

Yeah, it doesn't matter if they don't know them well; you just have to at least know one person enough that you talk to them