Vilageidiotx

'resumptive pronouns'

As a working class Midwesterner, i'm not required to speak in a way that is grammatically sound.

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'resumptive pronouns'

Resumptive pronounce seem like total assholes with no valid use among good writers, and they should be banned.

@mdk

These are the consolation points of grammar. Things you can technically do, but shouldn't. They might be allowed, but grammar was always the main focus of immature writers anyway. The big boys worry about syntax, and the syntax of sentences that use resumptive pronouns seems to be pretty goddamn awful.

The writer who uses resumptive pronounces, sounds like yoda does he.

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@Whiskers

This isn't the place to ask. We're being petty right now, and if you are not careful we might not like the color and general disposition of your shoes.

Do The Eagles Circle The Mountains? - A Eastern "Middle Ages" Fantasy RP

OK, so this is my two cents about the culture thing.

There isn't anything inherently wrong with borrowing from a Scandinavian/North European setting. It would look bad on us if we required all the cultures in this world to be carbon copies of specific eastern cultures that exist in the real world, since that sort of rigidity makes us look incapable of actually understanding how culture works at a very basic level. I read your app and it didn't feel like you directly ripped everything from the vikings. That is good.

However.

Your app does seem to suggest (if I read it right, and I might not have since I just woke up), that your people have been around a while. I take this from their supposed connection to the tunnel-building Visha. This does make their cultural uniqueness somewhat suspect. If they had been tied to a monolith such as Visha culture, and they have been in the region for the hundreds of years required, there should be some cultural diffusion. You should probably read all the other apps, particularly Vos and Daria, to get an idea of what life would be like for your neighbors, and be aware that the more general Visha culture would have been absorbed by your people in some way.

One possibility, I would think, is that they come from across the sea and raided up the rivers until they settled and made some sort of pact with the Visha. Maybe it was simple colonization where the Visha wanted people in that region who were strong and capable of governing it properly, or maybe the Visha employed them as a sort of Varangian guard. Either way, once they are there you would see their culture start to mix with the natives. They would still retain their boats (since they are practical), their Gods (though perhaps the added twang of Visha philosophical religion would cause mystery cults to become vogue amongst some of your people), and hints of their style would still be present mixed, just in amongst the native.

Do The Eagles Circle The Mountains? - A Eastern "Middle Ages" Fantasy RP

I read Vilage's sheet again to use as reference as I write my own, and I realized this bit sounds like it was pulled from a vampire dating website:

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@Pepperm1nts

"Athletic, loves to have fun, wants a man for long walks on the beach on quiet, intimate bloodlettings."

Do The Eagles Circle The Mountains? - A Eastern "Middle Ages" Fantasy RP

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Excellent. Hopefully I shall have my application composed by the end of the day.

I might have missed information regarding technology (vehicles, weapons, tools, etc.) in the OP. Are these open for the writers to invent? Are there any guidelines that should be adhered to?

@Maavoimat

Vehicles

Weapons

Tools

Precipice of War - We Write Under The Sign Of The Goat

That's what happens when you make your child soldiers into child pilots.

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We could always remain independent but make an equal trade that works for the benefit of all of us. Britain can teach us how to do healthcare, and we can show them Mexican food in return.

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