@The ghost in black No. Its not that simple.
@VKAllen
The age rule is not something I'm going to bend with. Drop two years from the sheet.
@DarkRecon
Drop the barrier/shield use for the energy manipulation.
@VKAllen
If you could change it so it's in line with the others, thank you.
@LHG100
Like I said, it's not that big of a deal. People are still going to be surprised by the weapons and tactics once they see them in battle, even if they've read about e'm, so I'm content. Also, I love the big brother thing Koehler has going for him.
@VKAllen
Pilot's age needs to be between 14 and 16. But I gotta say, the field procurement is an interesting addition.
@VKAllen
I'm going to assume you're describing a historic event with the mention of Earth. While I like seeing flavored text like the one in the background section, it doesn't include any background itself. You could describe the world she comes from, what she did there, if she was a victim of a Cruxi attack, the reason she applied for the Framewerk Project, that kind of stuff.
You will either have to remove the leg boosters or replace the shoulder cannons with kinetic weapons. The Armor Type section needs to mention if the armor is Light, Medium, Heavy, or something in-between. And considering the amount of firepower you described and the speed you are implying, it's going to be either Light-Medium or Medium depending on how you choose with my earlier demand; former if you choose booster removal, and the latter if you choose kinetic weapons.