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Okay..?


Well I thought you might not want spoilers.
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I'll get to them when I can.


Okay then. So far Discord is great. And he sort of has--well, you'll know what it proves from my story when you see it, although it's not quite the same.
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Yeah. Oh well; I can find them online.


Yeah. Equestria Daily will have all the high quality recording links once they're put up on Youtube and Dailymotion.
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It's fine.

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I'm not caught up yet.


ohnoes
New episode today at http://cinemaquestria.com as usual.
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I'm sorry, it's fanfiction to me. I can tell you that it's coherent and has good elements to it, but not whether it's the greatest thing in the world, because I have no reference point.


But I mean does it sound good? It doesn't need a reference point; it just has to sound good to the reader. A reader may have read no other sci-fi books by which to base their opinion of Ender's Game on, but if they enjoyed it, they enjoyed it. So, that said: Do you enjoy the way I wrote the montage segment? Does it give off a sense of grandeur? Completeness? Resolution?
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Look in the spaces between paragraphs. There are two instances.
It's fine.

Endermen are the best mobs.


that's not very reassuring

yiss
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Two formatting errors, but that's all.


where
Yay. Did you like it?

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Reading more fanfiction?


Well, actually, I'm trying to come up with a design for an efficient mob farm that can farm Endermen. I figured out a plan to make a three-layer farm, two layers of which will not spawn Endermen, but the third and highest of which will. Because Endermen will not teleport farther than 32 blocks, if we allow them to spawn at the top, they will not be able to teleport anywhere but within the structure. The two lower layers will only be two blocks high, except in the areas where the mobs are moved to the drop. And we can use conveyor belts instead of water so that the Endermen won't teleport in response. I'm also considering making the bottom of the drop itself 32 blocks higher than our base so the Endermen can't teleport while being killed by the punji sticks.
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Anything going on?


Just writing. Well, not writing right now, since I don't want to continue until I have confirmation it's good. So I'm reading instead.
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I'll have to check it in a little bit.


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