Wraithblade6

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@RedNightHunter

Here is a link to your app, so people can read it: http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/92419-the-world-of-blood-compact-accepting-apps-in-oc/char#post-3428308

The changes are much better. I noticed you said the females of your vampires can get pregnant. In that case, I have to classify your vampires as half-vampires. They are clearly not fully dependent on blood, and they are technically still alive enough to procreate naturally. Therefore, they are not going to have as powerful abilities as other vampire bloodlines, sorry. I'll allow that Nia has developed some resistance to their Iron weakness, but overall Amethyst vampires do not heal very well. Also, because they can reproduce, I think they should be long-lived, but not truly 'immortal.'

As far as their behavior goes, they seem to me to be quite feral, almost werewolf-like, in the way they roam and have territories. Perhaps you should completely switch them to a class of werewolf instead of vampire, since werewolves can procreate naturally as well. Up to you if you think that is too drastic a change.

The foul-breath ability that the female amethyst vampires have is probably not going to be as useful as you think. There are some vampires that do not need to breathe. Foul-breah power would certainly work on living things though.

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@Rusalka Your chars are pre-approved, but I think Grey has some requests of you. Also, your proposed history with Mithais is fine by me.

"Old man... Ha."

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Keep your shirts on kids. I just got in from work. I'll start approving characters.

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@Remipa Awesome I yes of course. Let me link them to page 1 of the Chars tab. You can also move them over to the chars tab proper.

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Eventually, I'm going to organize the chars page by species/faction.

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@Remipa Awesome She's totally cool. I'll post her in the Chars tab. Feel free to make modifications and flesh it out a bit more and remind me to update it later.

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Alright @RedNightHunter, let me address your app.

I like your bloodline, the Amethyst vampires who originated in Scandanavia. That's a nice part of the world. You'll have to be the spokesperson for that lineage of vampires in the rp, but they can exist. I just have to ask you to make a few small changes....

We can't have vampires able to conjure up more vampires out of clay. Perhaps you could have them steal a human infant and do some blood ritual that turns the baby. The baby would still be "alive," to be able to "grow up," but at some age it would have to become immortalized somehow... Perhaps it lives life as a kind of human thrall to the Amethyst vampires before finally becoming fully vampire. Elaborate on this.

Your other method of turning by biting is ok, but does it just take one single bite? If so, do amethyst vampires always have to kill their victims in order not to overpopulate? Is this why they prefer to feed on criminals and the dying? What about animal blood? Can they bite someone without turning them? Can they enthrall humans in any way?

I like that you have them preferring to live close to nature. That makes them seem somewhat druidic or more primitive. Since werewolves tend to live in the far North in this rp, do they perhaps maintain a friendship?

I'm going to ask that you keep your Amethyst vampire population to small numbers. There can't be many of them in the world. Maybe have them tend to stay in their own territories and have a stable form of society. That being said, how in hell did Nia end up in China???

Powers: Control of "an element" is ok. I think it should fall under the category of a type of telekinesis. Like, controlling air is just telekinetically producing wind. Same kind of thing would go for water or earth. As for why their telekinesis doesn't extend to all objects is unknown, but because of that, I will let them be really powerful at moving wind. If you want to have them control "fire," well, "fire" is not really an element. It's a chemical reaction with oxygen that produces heat. You'd have to have pyrokinesis, which is not quite the same as moving solids, liquids, and gasses around on a macro scale. I have to reserve the "fire" element from you. (plus, other players might want to have fire be their thing)

I think it's fun and interesting that your vampires can benefit from regular food instead of blood. This kind of makes them almost not real vampires, per se. Perhaps you could put something their backstory about them being born from enthralled babies or something... that would make them like some kind of half-vampires. I really don't want to allow dhampires, but I could see a breed of vampire that isn't technically dead/undead."

Any kind of vampire that is technically still living, will likely suffer some drawbacks, such as needing to breathe and having lesser speed and strength or regeneration powers. Stopping their heart, like with a stake, will certainly kill them. Maybe daylight and holy symbols are less of a problem. I noticed Nia has many scars, so I assume her healing ability isn't very good.

During Nia's training with the monks in China, did her supernatural gifts not afford her an advantage? I want to hear more about how being a vampire affected her training.

Otherwise, she looks very interesting. Which element power does Nia have?

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*re-posting in the OC*

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@The Roman07, edit your CS and I will post it for you.

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@The Grey Dust Ha.