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"I feel like I could eat the whole world raw."
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When one of us goes to war. We all go to war.
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Here's a limmerick There once was a team out of Haven with an outlook as black as a raven they were meant to fight BANK but our hearts all but sank WHEN WE HEARD THAT THEY'D RUN HOME AND TURNED CRAVEN
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When you realize you gotta make an IC intro post and just '...'
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Big things are coming! Stay tuned ~
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Hey guys! I was perusing when I noticed that the application status of this RP is 9/10 and set to apply! Before working up a CS I just wanted to make sure that information was still 100% accurate, thanks!
So I just threw up a contest, be sure to check out the rules when you get a chance and if you have any further questions feel free to shoot me a PM or just mention me here and I'll get around to checking it out ASAP.

As a heads up I will be making a list of characters that are free to use (like the child contest). So once again PM me or mention me if you'd like yours on that list.
#26 –Relationship 101


Judge:Write

Type: Written Entry

Deadline: February 29 at 11:59 in EST

This is partially – exactly what it sounds like. Valentines Day is just around the corner and what better way to channel your inner romantic then to write about your OC’s having a blast on this romantic occasion. Okay subtly sad premise behind us I did say this is only partially what it seems like. This entry will be a maximum of 3000 words and a minimum of 1000 – small confines I know, but I like to make people really consider their content. All I want from you this time, is the making (or breaking) point in your character’s relationship with another character.

1) Before you start brainstorming – there are a few important things to note before you start.
Relationship does not have to mean romantic anything. You could be starting a new friendship or what have you – anything goes as long as it only involves your character and one other. (Though other characters can be featured – they shouldn’t be the focal point).

2) Some points my grading will be based on: your ability to capture the humanity of a relationship, how much you can sell me on said relationship, do I fell emotions while reading this, and yes as usual – was there a suitable soundtrack provided to this entry?

3) If reading the end of that last point made you feel negative (often times violent) things about myself; talk to me, we’ll see if we can’t work something out for those who hate adding music to their entries.

4) Finally, yet most importantly – really, and I mean really, think about dialogue. In a scene quite like this – about relationships, communication is key. I will be above all considering how natural the dialogue is both in flow and under the realm of believability.

Best of luck you kids!

- Love your Valentine, Write

P.S. Any questions hit me up fam.

List of characters whom you may use (just let the creator know beforehand):
1. Bianca Nuit
2. Estelle Nuit
A Friend in Need

----- Gratia Mindaro -----


“Welcome to the Dodici Cosca regional bank.” The receptionist chirped gleefully meeting the steely gaze of Gratia Mindaro. She looked her up and down, there was a notable lacking of tastefulness in the way she did it. Ogling everything from Gratia’s physique to her weapon. She blinked and seemed to be processing the look upon the young girl’s visage. She then raised her arms in defeat and looked over at one of the men to the side of her. “Another one for you.” She said as the man walked forward and put a meaty hand of Gratia’s shoulder.

“Doesn’t she look a little young for the other stuff?” The merc grunted releasing his grip on Gratia. “Whatever, I don’t make the decisions, that’s the big man upstairs. All we need is a small proof of concept and we’ll take you right to him.” The man said leading Gratia to a door located behind the receptionist. She mouthed the words ‘good luck’ with a playful wink as Gratia walked by her.

“Just be careful of Sonny today, he’s in a bit of a mood.” The man spat out opening the door revealing a back lot with some vehicles parked. There was a man in a white dress shirt stubbornly allowing what looked to be his assistant attempt to remove a deep red stain from the collar. In his right hand he held a steel bat and in his right a small knife.

“This the new recruit?” Sonny asked swatting away the hand of his assistant and standing up, he seemed to tower over even the man who was escorting Gratia.

“Yes sir.” The man replied to his superior.

“Name’s Sonny Dodici, yours is?”

-----VGNB-----


While Gratia went in to the bank and was escorted out and behind the building, the rest of VGNB would notice the receptionist begin to close up, waving goodbye to the last bodyguard in the building and proceed to take an elevator up through the building. The bodyguard locked the front door and immediately went out the same door as Gratia was lead out, leaving the team alone with their thoughts.
@Lugubrious

Apologies for the semi late entry, but if I beat you then I guess I'm not too late. Can't wait to hear what you think!
Team HERO

Members:
Holly Cerise, Esmeralda Willow, Rowan Regal, Ophelia Aster

Themes:
Norse Mythology (weapons), Poverty (Overarching narrative), Heroism (Goals and concept), Theme SONG





@Lugubrious

An entry of mine will be up in about ten minutes.
In Happiness 10 yrs ago Forum: Casual Roleplay
So how is everyone doing? Important for everyone to stay positive during downtime, real life can totally get in the way sometimes but if everyone stays around then there shouldn't be a problem!
@Raijinslayer

We eat premium Atlesian steak. Not 'Noodles.'
Noel du Acier - The Penthouse


“Welcome Mrs. Acier.” A man said in a very-Vale tone of voice.

“Oh, darling are you proposing?” Noël said with an audible and somewhat demeaning laugh.

“Excuse me Mrs?” He said, most certainly in the tone of voice that confirmed the proletariat in his genes.

“There you go again, I swear there’s something in the water with you Valians. Ma’am will do quite fine thank you.” She said pulling out a clutch from her coat pocket and handing the man a bill. “I expect my bags in my room in two minutes.”

“Ma’am, I just hold the door.” The doorman complained.

“Look at the bill dear.” Noël chided.

“Right away ma’am.” The doorman said lunging towards the vehicle that took her from the dreaded airport in Vale to this godforsaken hotel.

Noël’s walk through the lobby of the hotel garnered looks from passersby. She laughed inwardly as she thought about the kind of looks the rest of her team would garner given the fact that she was by far the poorest of the three.

Noël opened the door to the penthouse suite with a sigh. They just didn’t make them like in Atlas anymore. She decided it didn’t really matter, she’d roughed it in worse conditions then the ones she currently bore. She immediately began walking towards the kitchen putting her hair into a messier bun than what was typically acceptable in common society – she found herself thanking god that wasn’t where she was. She examined the stove, oven, and other dispensaries and gave them a nod. They would do.

Before long her doorman-promoted bellhop arrived with her bags.

“Ma’am, if you don’t mind me asking, why are half of these food?” The simpleton asked her.

“If I don’t make them a nice dinner, I don’t know who will.” Noël said aloud – a hint of something genuine colouring her phrasing. “Thank you bellhop, you may make your exit.” And so he did.

Noël immediately reached into her bag of clothes and found her 'Don’t tell the chef to shut up.' Apron that Brennan had bought her when she finally made a steak he liked a couple months back.

Afterwards Noël quickly took the bags to the kitchen and took out her knives she made in her smithy. She pulled three pans out of one of the larger bags and placed them on the stove, igniting the contraption with a seemingly stone-aged dial.

She took a smaller sauce pan and retrieved a bottle of bourbon from the fridge pouring it into the sauce pan and letting it heat up. Watching the bourbon carefully, Noël knew when it as time and removed the sauce pan from the stove – took a match and struck it against the counter top. She carefully ignited the bourbon and let it flame for about thirty seconds. She then covered the sauce pan and took it off the stove.

Quickly three slabs of meat followed onto the pans each taking up nearly an entire pan, certainly no one pan could hold the two steaks. They sizzled as Noël hummed a tune to their melody as she quickly grabbed a small stick of butter and shaved a small amount off into Albert’s pan. He liked some butter, but not much. She reached into the same bag that had carried her slabs of steak and retrieved a pepper shaker and cracked some pepper onto the steak while it was cooking.

She quickly and skillfully diverted her attention to a group of red potatoes chopping them up quickly into fine yet not chip-sized portions. She threw them in with Kek’s steak in order for them to both fry and salivate with the steak. She produced quite a few more potatoes for Brennan, he always wanted more than everyone else. She chopped his up and added them to his pan as well. She dug a little deeper into her groceries in order to produce a few Portobello mushrooms – Kek’s topping of choice. But before dicing them she took Albert’s steak off the heat and quickly dipped into it with a knife in order to insure that it was as rare as he liked it.

Delighted at the sight of the blood, she placed his steak back on the stove and set the heat to very low, in order to keep it warm. She then turned back to the mushrooms. Dicing them up into perfectly sized portions she laid them out one by one atop Kek’s steak, his cooked the longest so she knew they would glaze into the meat perfectly by the time he would eat it.

She took Brennan’s slab of meat of the heater second and gulped. She knew that her partner was very particular about just how medium rare his steak was. It was the first time Brennan raised his voice at Noël. The moment when Noël truly dedicated herself to mastery – of the medium rare steak. She made the smallest incision on the side of the steak in order to check it’s perfection and was happy to find that she was right on the money.

Finally she took Kek’s medium-well done steak off the heater, his was the easiest and she knew she had perfected his first – so she didn’t bother checking. She also decidedly guessed a long while ago on one eve when she had messed up his order that he wouldn’t argue about it or raise any concerns, he was nice in that way.

Noël immediately began plating the dishes, she knew her team would be arriving any second now. She placed Brennan at the head of the table because otherwise he may implode rather violently, herself to his right as it was closest to the fridge to reach for condiments, refills and other needs. Across from herself was Albert, Brennan’s left hand man and at an easy vantage point to discuss things with both Brennan and herself. Across the table from Brennan was Kek, an intellectual member of the team and the happiest eater.

Before making sure everyone had their drinks Noël retrieved the bourbon sauce that she had created for Kek and lightly drizzled it onto the meat making sure to use everything that was available in the small pan. Content with her work she placed all of the cooking utensils and dishes in the dishwasher.

She quickly fetched three glasses from the kitchen. She filled one with milk, another with with a cocktail she had named the Tarik River Cocktail consisting of a 20 year old Atlesian whisky, Créme de Cacao and peach bitters, and finally for Albert a flute filled with the finest Schneelager – a lager filled with golden dust that enhances the taste.

She sent out a text and wiped her brow upon finally finishing her task.

From: Noël du Acier

To: Team B(etter than you)ANK

Dinner is served. In the penthouse – see you soon, lots of love. ヽ(≧ω≦)ノ
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