@Pie Flavor Hey great! Looks really good but before I approve Im slightly confused on one thing. Where did the him touching the others and inflicting pain come from? That's not part of his abilities...
YoshiSkittlez
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9 yrs ago
You are the puzzle that I will never be able to solve and somehow, that's okay.
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9 yrs ago
I'm sorry... I can't keep going like this. I need solidity. Figure out what you want and why... and then talk to me. I will always love you. And yes. even she knows that.
9 yrs ago
I'm not asking you to forgive me. I'll never understand or forgive myself. And if I die, so help me, I'll laugh at myself for being an idiot. There's one thing I do know and that is that I love you.
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9 yrs ago
Kind of just came out to my family and Facebook that I'm getting a sex change... so yeah... dealing with that. Be back soon.
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10 yrs ago
You are my heart. You are my Once upon a time.
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@YoshiSkittlez
You know what? I'm gonna drop that from my guy. I only had it because I needed a better trait for him. But I don't need it now that I have the PTSD. So my guy is not gay anymore.
Sweet, thanks. Diversity and little traits like that are great for characters, but in hindsight there are plenty to chose from other than being gay. Race and religion are two big ones and only two characters have really touched on that; Yukiko being from Japan and Erik being Jewish... Again, I have no problems with gay characters, I just don't want an over-abundance that turns into everyone being gay lol
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Thanks for the feedback! I was wondering if I should do some more elaboration with Erik but I wasn't entirely sure. I did want to kind of see what you were looking for before I just started adding useless information. I'm just getting off work now so I'll work on him later.
Yeah go crazy. So long as you stick to the basic information I gave you, you have every right to explain in further detail in how you took it as well as taking your own liberties with any other useful information you would like to give him. Sorry if I wasn't clear on that before.
Haha it's okay. Thanks for letting me know.
@Shadowcatcher
Great job on Iris, being as she was poor to begin with, there wasn't much that the war would have done to affect her noral day-to-day life, so for that, Iris has been accepted and will be placed into slot number 7.
For Erik, just a few small things. One, could you elaborate on Erik's abilities? Separate out what he can do now and what he will be able to do later? That just makes it easier on me. Also, this deal he made with Logan (since Logan is my character, I would like to know about this beforehand) I'm assuming the deal was for Logan to teach Erik to fight in turn for Erik not using his powers on the metal in his body, am I correct? I was hoping that you would go through the backstory I initially gave you and flesh it out a bit, make it sound like you wrote it and fill in some gaps that might appear. Would that be alright?
Great job on Iris, being as she was poor to begin with, there wasn't much that the war would have done to affect her noral day-to-day life, so for that, Iris has been accepted and will be placed into slot number 7.
For Erik, just a few small things. One, could you elaborate on Erik's abilities? Separate out what he can do now and what he will be able to do later? That just makes it easier on me. Also, this deal he made with Logan (since Logan is my character, I would like to know about this beforehand) I'm assuming the deal was for Logan to teach Erik to fight in turn for Erik not using his powers on the metal in his body, am I correct? I was hoping that you would go through the backstory I initially gave you and flesh it out a bit, make it sound like you wrote it and fill in some gaps that might appear. Would that be alright?
As for everyone else, I have a pressing feeling that I need to address what feels like an over-abundance of gay characters within the RP. A few characters are fine, and I have no problems with the whole idea of gay characters either I just feel that with the time setting, an abundance of gay characters is just way too much. It was a very, VERY touchy thing back then and in all reality, the characters we have that are gay wouldn't even so much as mutter a peep about it because of how it was viewed back then. So please, lets keep this to a slight minimum? Please don't make your characters gay for the sake of being gay. Have a plan (this goes for all the already approved characters who have been deemed as gay already too).
Sorry for the rant, I just want an equal, realistic balance of characters here.
Sorry for the rant, I just want an equal, realistic balance of characters here.
@Revans Exile Okay... so... I'm really not sure how I feel about 'gender bending' a character that was considered canon in the verse, so I'm going to ask you to do one of two things if you want to keep this specific skill set. The backstory, skills and abilities are all fine and I have no problems there, so I'll ask you to do one thing for me.
Either drop all association of 'summers' from the CS (including the alias Cyclops) and have her have her own name and alias as though she is entirely original...
Or just make it Cyclops and change her into a male.
Either drop all association of 'summers' from the CS (including the alias Cyclops) and have her have her own name and alias as though she is entirely original...
Or just make it Cyclops and change her into a male.
Nallore, always a pleasure to work with you. Sophia is accepted and has taken up spot number 6 :)
Oh yah it is not all that much. Just like fighting and that one thing they learned. He most likely would have seen Logan once or twice. Alright! Added the personality and it is time for me to sleep! Good night all!
Thanks, looked it all over and it's all good. Good night! Sleep well!
Oh! @Avanhelsing one more thing real quick, think you can embellish on his personality a bit? His time in the war would have affected him a bit in that area. Thanks!
@YoshiSkittlez
It will not be as long but it will be concrete and explore PTSD in the period and have more about how the war hurt him.
Hey thanks for making the edits and PM'ing me that you were finished. The backstory looks A LOT better and hell, if he was involved with the war it wouldn't surprise me if he ran into/saw Logan a few times...
I would keep his 'training' with his adoptive father down to a minimum. It would be a rare thing that his dad would be so accepting of these powers but hey, some people are just able to cope with that kind of stuff and can be supportive, so I dig it. Anyway, I don't have a problem for you making him gay if that is what you want, but like I said, you need to be REALLY careful with it because of the time period. Thanks. He has been approved and I will update him on the number 5 spot.
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