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Ludmilla watched the chaos unfold as her filthy nonmagical plebians and the apparently also nonmagical lizard duked it out. Judging by the apparent seizure it was having as it charged, partnered with the utter lack of tactical reasoning or any reasoning at all for that matter... Was it one of the lesser drake species? Ludmilla briefly regretted devoting so much of her time studying the world's plants rather than its creatures, but hindsight was 20/20.

Whatever the thing was, it was certainly dragon-like, and that could only mean one thing: A hoard. Deciding that she'd already done enough anyways, Ludmilla flew past the dragon and came in low, swooping down into and through the forest's canopy. She followed the large, obvious tracks and bloodstains which their recently-deceased Imperial and soon-to-be-deceased lizard had been so kind to leave in the rich loam, mud, and occasionally on the sides of nearby trees throughout the forest.

After several minutes of flying she came across her first objective: The battered, chewed, half-eaten corpses of several Imperials- from the looks of things, about ten or fifteen soldiers backed up by a pair of mages- or maybe just one mage? Two mage halves, anyway- and a mostly-intact priest. The latter was particularly relevant to Ludmilla's interests.

Touching down, she kicked the corpse over unceremoniously. The man's stole indicated that he was a priest of Galven, the Bladefather. Trained swordsmen to a man and capable of calling upon powerful divine miracles that were nonetheless not as cool or interesting as Ludmilla's magecraft, they were a force to be reckoned with. It was common knowledge that the Empire's close working relationship with the priesthood was the driving force behind their many campaigns.

More importantly, all properly ordained priests of Galven carried a ceremonial sword forged from white iron and studded with topaz chips the size of a man's thumbnail along the fuller and pommel. Such blades were ugly, lacking in serious craftsmanship, of very little practical use and- now this was the important part- were spectacularly valuable.

Sure enough, the poor old bastard had one strapped to his belt. Odds were he hadn't realized the scale of of creature he was dealing with until it was too late- the creature's bizarre ability to contort itself around trees and spindly, malnourished frame meant its burrow might have resembled that of a much smaller beast. Tugging a couple of rings off the man's cold, dead fingers- the signet might fetch her a pretty penny- she grabbed the man's ceremonial sword and moved on. No time to strip them clean; Ludmilla had a lizard to rob.
@CrystalCHTriple Tinctures are just alcohol and plant extracts, though. If you want magic potions you should put "magic potions" so everyone understands from the outset what they are. When you do this sort of thing it feels like you're just pulling stuff out of your ass.

Also, just as a side note, a small axe is just a hatchet. "Wood axe" implies your character is hauling a felling axe around with him.
Hoshizora Aiko steps out of the way so that she is no longer blocking the door. She looks the woman up and down. Two-piece. Belt. What kind of loser wears a red shirt with a black suit. What must be color contacts. A black tie.

Nice hair, bitch. You dye it just for me? Oh, and that undone tie looks real fucking professional.

"Yes, I'm Hoshizora. Nice to meet you, too.", Hoshizora Aiko replies with a stiff bow. She reaches out and grasps the woman's hand in a weak handshake befitting a timid schoolgirl. The woman explains before letting go of Aiko's hand, drawing her eyes to the box.

Did you seriously go out and buy a brand new coffee machine as soon as your old one broke? You probably didn't even research it first, did you?

"O-oh, it did? I can come back tomorrow if this is a bad time."

Is this the previous assistant? Is this woman's manner of dress some kind of bizarre challenge to Aiko? A confirmation that she's been found out? Maybe she simply chooses to dress like a C-grade thriller extra. Aiko clutches her bag tightly and holds the door open for the woman, the aroma of burnt coffee grounds washing over her.

"I guess Mr. Sasori isn't in... You wouldn't happen to, uh, be related somehow, would you?"
Alright, I'll get on that...

Or maybe I'll just see what happens first, Sakura isn't a very violent person...


Maybe do a post about how Sakura feels conflicted due to not being a very violent person?
Actions can still be meaningful even if they don't make any progress. That's why JRPGs give you a Guard command.
Ludmilla strolled out the back of the tavern, using it as cover so the dragon wouldn't see her right off. She was a bit put out at the creature's apparent ability to phase through trees, seeing as it would make her plan that much harder.

Saddling her broom, she kicked off into the sky, out of the dragon's reach. Unsure of how large the creature's breath range was, she simply rose high enough that she had ample time to dodge should it aim for her. Satisfied, she conjured a batch of head-size pumpkins and allowed them to drop onto her thankfully large and easy-to-hit target, aiming for the head. They were hard, hearty vegetables, and magically reinforced on top of that. Altogether, being hit with one at terminal velocity would be like taking a hit from a biodegradable orange cannonball.

She watched patiently as they descended, landing several seconds later and tragically cutting short the lives of a trenchcoat-wearing teenager with two katanas, a man dressed in nothing but a green tracksuit, and some sort of hairy, axe-wielding barbarian-type person. Yet another caved in the tavern's chimney. Ludmilla stuck a finger into her mouth and held it up.

"Oh, a headwind."

Well, that was three less people she'd have to pay when this was all said and done. She moved forward, hovering directly above the dragon's center of mass and conjuring another vegetative barrage.
I feel obligated to ask why you were talking about "time to prepare" two pages ago, and you said "what took [the dragon] so long" which implies the dragon actually took time to get to the inn, but you really only gave us what amounted to a couple of IC minutes. What was your exposition going to be in the first place anyway?

You also seem to have flat-out ignored what preperations there were and on top of that the 40-foot-tall dragon has apparently stealthed past the paladin and the ent or teleported into the clearing or something given how nobody saw or heard it coming until it was already practically in the clearing.
@Crimmy Alright well I've redone my intro for a third time then.
@ImportantNobody So should I get a basic description of the dragon's appearance from you or should I just make shit up as I go?
@CrystalCHTriple But then your character didn't investigate or ask anything?
Looks like he just kind of bailed.
About that detective thing.
What's the agency called? I assume it can't be "Shikatsu Detective Agency" becuase there's like five or six private detectives in this game who are all directly related to PCs and presumably lived and operated in this town at some point.

Also their hours and maybe phone I guess since I assume my character would have probably picked up an ad in the classifieds if she's here for a job.
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