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Appearance: Agnastus stands 5 foot 11 inches. He is in great shape from the training from home. He has a nice appearance and has a long scar going down the left side of his face.

Name: Agnatus XXI (Twenty-First)

Age: 23

Gender: Male

Sexual Orientation: Heterosexual

Occupation: Owner of a moderately sized thievery guild.

Weaponry: 2 stabbing daggers, good for stealth.

Apparel: Has light weight leather armor with a cloak, has one knife sheath on his chest, another on his right-hand side hip.

Equipment: Basic supplies,(Food, water, etc...)has his pet parrot,(Not magical this time) and his weapons

Skills: He is good at stealth, dodging and parkour. He is trained in using a sword but prefers daggers for their speed. He isn't very good at cooking. Has very high intelligence.

Magical Abilities: Has a minor illusionary spell that lets him make a shadow appear for a few seconds.

Personality: He grew up being taught to fight, not love. He can be a bit harsh in even basic communication, but he tries his best to say the correct thing for the situation. His intelligence almost matches his lethality with daggers with the training in his village with his master. The only thing he loves more than money is his parrot, he doesn't even speak to the parrot very often, they already know what each other think. But overall he enjoys money sometimes more than contact with other creature.

Backstory: He grew up in the southern part of Ecen on the beaches. He was part of a richer family and never had problems with educational fees. To take it a step further he even studied with his mother (Who too was intelligent). His father was part of the Royal Guard and was slain during the civil war. After his father died he switched from studying during the nights to practicing with a sword. Soon his relationship with his mother started to diminish. After two months of backyard training, he signed up for the local training group. He started way ahead of the group and was transferred to advanced training. He slowly progressed enough to graduate from the club at 19 and went off into the world with his high intellect and amazing sword skills.

After a year of wondering, Agnatus started to get into thieving. He started small with pickpockets and stealing off the bread cart, but it turned into full on break-ins. He started up his guild of "sword training" when he was 20. He recruited the people who he taught in sword combat for his underground thieves guild, and took the best in the classes. He met his pet parrot when he was looting a village early on, it was just sitting on a fence with no one around. He befriended the parrot and now his parrot and him travel together. His guild now has 15 members and sort of "own" a city by having the ultimate influence over it. The influence mainly comes one of the guild members blood line. A young women by the name of Lisanne is in direct relation to the lord of the city. Anytime a guild member is caught, she asks that they are excused, usually it works. Only once was it bad enough it didn't, One of the guild members killed someone, which was against the code of the guild, we threw him to the wolves. The lord asked us if he was with us, but we told him no, he was executed the next day. Suspicion came over the town on who ran the thieves guild and who was in it. He just kept on training with his students and he was left looking innocent. Nobody else knows that he owns the thieves guild of course, but some could assume.

Other: Loves birds and has lots of knowledge about most of them.
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I'm really sorry, but I've lost a lot of inspiration I had for a character and thus am probably going to have to drop this game.

I wish you all the best of luck.
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Been interested in a classic med-fantasy adventure for a while, I'll have a character prepared soon.
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@Jpp188 Several things are off with the character sheet...

Weapons and clothing can't be magical. I probably should've added that somewhere on the first post. What do you mean his race? The only race in this RP is humans. I don't like the invisibilty, that's a very powerful thing especially to a character skilled in stealth likes yours is. Parrots was hatched in a lab..? There aren't really any laboratories in this RP's world, it's a medieval-ish fantasy setting. Science isn't very far along nor focused on by many unless it pertains medicine.

Sran? Elf? Again, only humans in this RP. Think like Game of Thrones.

The CS is denied, make some changes that I addressed before.
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This is pretty much the gist of the character I'd like to enter.

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@MelonHead Looks good! Is it finished?
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@Heat

My bad, somewhere in there I missed the memo of only humans, I will write a new one. I will have it up tomorrow.
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Well, not my best ever, but here goes nothing

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Name: Korvo Volkot

Age: 25

Gender: Male

Sexual Orientation: Heterosexual

Occupation: Guerilla Fighter, Hunter

Weaponry: Father's Curved Swords (One shown in picture), Bow and Arrow, throwing daggers.

Apparel: As pictured, with shirt occasionally

Equipment: Lucky charms, bag of money, various hunter's traps.

Skills: Hunting, Fighting, Surviving, Guerilla Warfare



Other: Korvo has a companion, I say companion because pet is not a good word for the relationship the two have, named Menina who is a dark black wolf, the two are partners, comrades, and friends, Menina accompanies Korvo wherever he goes and vice versa.
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@Rex Piratum The backstory confused me. Did Korvo fight in the war? It ended ten years ago.

@Jpp188 Is it still a WIP?
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The backstory confused me. Did Korvo fight in the war? It ended ten years ago.


No, he was rejected for some reason by the King's army, probably because, at 15, he was too young. But he packed up and put his skills to work, taking to the woods, eliminating any enemies he found there and protecting it from being torn apart by war.

If that's too much I can attempt to scale it back a bit, or make him older or something.
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@Rex Piratum

Scale it back a bit. Kind of crazy that he would manage to kill so many trained soldiers at such a young age.
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Oh, I forgot to take it out, and no its not. Sorry about that.
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@Jpp188 It's better but I still have an issue. Him managing to establish a thieve's guild that "owns" a city by having the ultimate influence over it at age 22, that's a huge thing for someone so young. Maybe age him a bit or reduce the guild's power?

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@Jpp188 It's better but I still have an issue. Him managing to establish a thieve's guild that "owns" a city by having the ultimate influence over it at age 22, that's a huge thing for someone so young. Maybe age him a bit or reduce the guild's power?


Or you can have him inherit it in a way. That's how I'd do it.

Anyway, I'm going to conceive a character for this here RP because I can't find the bliss of sleep.
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@Rex Piratum

Scale it back a bit. Kind of crazy that he would manage to kill so many trained soldiers at such a young age.


On it
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<Snipped quote by Heat>

Or you can have him inherit it in a way. That's how I'd do it.

Anyway, I'm going to conceive a character for this here RP because I can't find the bliss of sleep.


That works too.

Sweet, cant wait to see what you come up with!
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Also, I plan to start the IC tommorow. Feel we have enough people, and I will be accepting more for a time after the IC goes up.
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Changelog on CS: Added age, added backstory to make the guild influence problem more believable.
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To be honest I don't think there really is much to be added about Jobe, his inexperience and lack of interesting adventure is a fundamental part of his character. Might as well call the CS finished unless anything necessary is missing.
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@Jpp188 Alright it looks good now. Accepted!

@MelonHead Also accepted!

Make sure you both post your sheets to the Characters tab.
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