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Hidden 9 yrs ago 9 yrs ago Post by Ardent Dawn
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I'm working on a post, trying to work on the lore of the avatars.

From my original design of David, to seeing other peoples characters such as Germaine - I've kinda made it that David was in control, with Regirock slumbering inside of him, rarely if ever coming to the surface - but Germaine woke him up a little.

I feel if the logic process of the more in control the legendary Pokemon is, the more efficiently they can use their powers makes sense. I don't know what you guys think of that though?


Sounds fine with me - as long as you aren't doing anything that the other players aren't able to, then I don't see any harm adding some narrative depth :)

It can also be a used as a retrospective explanation for how Seras used her Dazzling Gleam to help break up the fight - I was considering describing some sort of Death Star II-esque array of gemstones focusing the light as a metaphorical shot at the roof, but I think I'll save that for when she actually uses it during a battle :P

Edit: Englishing better :P
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@Ardent Dawn Nah, my avatar isn't becoming some next level god, if anything the opposite :')
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@EclipseDragon There ain't no brakes on this runaway train :P

Love it.
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I had a LOT to cover, so had to shorten all the speeches, but aside that I think I did okay with the post?

I was originally going to have him trying to be the Pokemon version of a social justice warrior, but I feel after everything that's happened he is less sure of his beliefs already. I mean, the dude was a hermit for ages.

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@EclipseDragon You did wonderfully. Now to wait and see what Wells' reaction to the interruption is.
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Sliding "Don't. Trust. Humanity." into the gaps while registering sold me on the post immediately, so there's that. Really nice technique. The inner dialogue and self-conflict is generally great - you could maybe break up descriptive paragraphs with some inner monologue for variety when he's reacting to the action, but the words on the page are all perfectly fine. Most importantly, you fleshed out your character's nature and started preparing some future drama that I can really get behind without rushing the build-up, so I'd call that a solid post all-around ^_^

Now, I need to figure out whether Seras is a nervous wreck or is still holding herself together after that rollercoaster ride - having a friendly face around will probably help :)
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@Ardent Dawn@Rethel34

Cheers guys, means a lot ^_^

I'm gonna make a point of trying to add some inner monologue next time, just means I gotta add another font type for when he talks to himself in his head. Fml.
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@EclipseDragon You did wonderfully. Now to wait and see what Wells' reaction to the interruption is.


What interruption? He just wanted to hear the crowd cheering, meaning that he "avenged" them by insulting Germaine.

I think he did it!
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@EclipseDragon@Ardent Dawn
Hey guys- just on my phone at the minute, but care to do a collaboration post together?
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I've not RP-ed on roleplayer guild much, and have no idea how a collaboration post works but if you explain it, I would love too

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Work on a realtime document like titanpad and then post the finished result. Allows for quicker and smoother interactions.
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Thank you man!

If that's the case, sure@Leos Klien I would love to do a collab post :)
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@EclipseDragon Just so you an get a feel for what TitanPad is like, here's a link to one I just created.
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@EclipseDragon Jolly good!
I want to involve Diance in this as she struck a cord with Germaine, and is a character most likely here to bring out his good side; plus he wants to make amends.

By the way man, that post was fantastic!
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So many people jumped on TitanPad at once. I always used to have trouble getting people on when I would try collabing.
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Also.
Yay! Colour Coding!
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@EclipseDragon Jolly good!
I want to involve Diance in this as she struck a cord with Germaine, and is a character most likely here to bring out his good side; plus he wants to make amends.

By the way man, that post was fantastic!


Thank you! ^_^

Sorry for disappearing from the collab post at an awkward time - I'm heading back to uni tomorrow, so I've been watching one last episode of Spice and Wolf with them before they sleep. Shouldn't be as much of a problem once I'm working by my own schedule again :)
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Wow. Now that this mysterious collab is going on, I feel like I'm the one who doesn't know the secrets. A little strange for a GM. XD

I don't feel the need to make a crowd post. You guys already summed up how they would probably behave, and I don't want to interrupt these interesting interactions.

There aren't any big plot points scheduled for "Friday". You all can make a couple posts about what you do with your free time, and then we can move on to Saturday when you're ready. @Ardent Dawn There is something minor I want to do while you're at your booth, so I'd appreciate if you left room for that. One or two other avatars can also be around at that time if anyone wants to.
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Will PM you now ^_^ You should have received a link to the collab document via PM - could you hop in so we can brainstorm some ideas? :)
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Not really mysterious. The TitanPad is public; everyone's using the one I made, so if you want to look at Dawn's massive wall of brainstorm, it's available XD

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