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Thanks! I shall get working on a post.

@Shyri, do you want to do a collaboration post (in the future) after I have posted a couple times on here and after you have posted yourself?


I'd be fine with that, once I finally get the Cape Town post out. Recently scrapped all twelve pages and started over because it didn't look as good put together as it did in my draft version. I may just start a second storyline in the meantime, since this one is taking so long.
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1: Having an "Let's launch an invasion in the first post just because" is sort of anathema in Precipice now. We like shit to build up at least a little.


Wait, that means I did something right!

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1. That's why I am delaying the invasion. What I mean by several weeks could be several months or years. I am not rushing to invade the country so early. The next posts will give detail about the planning of the invasion and the operation's history.

2. Then, I must of forgot about it or mistaken for another battle. I am referring to the battle, where the Pan-African navy was mostly destroyed. If it's old news, then I just edit it in and remove some words.

3. Mozambique and Tanganyika are allied to Pan-African Empire (according to the lore summary on the first page). Unless I am wrong, then I will look like a dumbass. I also know that Ethiopia will declare war on France, to protect their ally and all of that.


1: What I mean is this; that you need to make sense of the thing. PoW has wars, and in the past we have had nonsensical wars, but at this point we want everything to make sense to at least some degree. That post made it seem like France's invasion is just this flippant thing. Like, your leaders are deciding to get involved in a war with a neighboring super-power over... what? You need to be more subtle, work up through the politics and intrigue, that sort of thing. Because otherwise, if you start right out of the gate with a war coming from nowhere, that conflict will seem silly and convoluted.

2: The Battle of the Mandeb. That was at where the Red Sea meets the Indian Ocean.

3: Ah. I was confused at your intentions because you forces were in Madagascar.
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"You read the entire thing?" The Chinese corespondent interrupted.

"I have read it three times." The Persian pulled a thin green book out of his pocket and waved it around. "It is small, and reading is not that difficult if you try." Everyone who understood the exchange laughed, and Yaqob smiled.


Hahaha.

By the way, no Steam for me for the time being. If you needa holla at ya boy googs then send an IC for now.
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Hahaha.

By the way, no Steam for me for the time being. If you needa holla at ya boy googs then send an IC for now.


You mean PM?
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No no, we have to RP all our conversations with Googer from now on.
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I'd be fine with that, once I finally get the Cape Town post out. Recently scrapped all twelve pages and started over because it didn't look as good put together as it did in my draft version. I may just start a second storyline in the meantime, since this one is taking so long.


You have officially reached Hugs-status procrastination. I'd say congratulations but this is a horrible thing to accomplish.
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You have officially reached Hugs-status procrastination. I'd say congratulations but this is a horrible thing to accomplish.


I'm getting there senpai
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Gugghhfrggglll feeeiiin I'll poooost. Cranky Cadet is cranky.
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Gugghhfrggglll feeeiiin I'll poooost. Cranky Cadet is cranky.


CLEAN THOSE LATRINES.
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WITH A WAD OF YOUR OWN PUBIC HAIR
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WITH A WAD OF YOUR OWN PUBIC HAIR


MASSAGE THE CO'S FEET

WITH LAVENDER MASSAGE OIL
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AND PAINT HIS TOENAILS WITH NAPALM.
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AND PAINT HIS TOENAILS WITH NAPALM.


HE. WILL. BE. BEAUTIFUL.
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I'M USING ALL CAPS
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In other news, I bought dog tag silencers and they're the best investment I've ever made.

JINGLE JANGLE.
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In other news, I bought dog tag silencers and they're the best investment I've ever made.

JINGLE JANGLE.


He's got tags and they jingle jangle jingled
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He's got tags and they jingle jangle jingled


As he goose-steps merrily along!
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"We can use Madagascar."


Spain vs the muthafuckin' world!

Anyway, i'm about 1k words into a Hassan post. I'll get that done... when it is done.
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I too am already starting on the next post. I've wanted to get to this one for a LONG time and I'm excited that it's time.

Also, Grey ought to expect a "who's your daddy?" call from tacoland.
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