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Did you know that Dante's inferno is called a divine comedy because things work out for the protagonist? Back in the day, the only two genres were comedy and drama. The only difference was that in a comedy, the protagonist is better off at the end, and a drama is the opposite. So that's why a story about going through hell can still be considered a comedy, even if it's not funny.

Name:
Broken Promise, BP, Boss

Age:
Old enough to know better, too young to care. (that is to say 30's)

Preferred RPs:
I Prefer to make my own, but will occasionally join something if it looks interesting. I'll join just about anything so long as it isn’t overly edgy/sweet, though it's rare for me to do. I don't do 1x1s too often either.

Preferred Roles:
I tend to play adorable characters everyone wants to befriend or proper assholes everyone wants to stay away from. I try not to play moral paragons or prime evils.

RP Conquests:
I've completed quite a few RP's off site, but most of them are on private forums or have simply been lost to the ravages of server crashes. As for stuff here, I'm sure everyone who sees me post in the off topic sections has seen me find an excuse to talk about Danganronpa: Tower of Carnage. It's a project that took over 4 years to complete and I feel pride not only for myself but all the wonderful people who helped make it enjoyable during its run. Re: Zero: The High Council Is technically my first, but it was just something I kind of took over and ended up ending the story after just six months. It finished, but eh...

Last RP I finished was Symphony of Espers which turned out pretty good.

RP's in progress:
For some reason I can't seem to stay away from Ari's magical girl RP, even if I'm not sure why I'm still in it.

As for my own projects, I'm doing Symphony on High to continue the gigachad adventures of the espers in Pax Septimus.

RP Graveyard:
I've been pretty fortunate on this forum. I think I joined one when I first came on the site that didn't really do anything, and there are a few 1x1 things that didn't go anywhere. It's disappointing when an RP ends before it can be finished, but I've come to look at them as learning experiences.

And then there's that london magical girl RP, and that dark magical girl RP. I think I'm done joining magical girl RPs for a while.

Other interests:
Videos
I watch a lot of educational videos on youtube. Usually as research for something I’m writing or purely because a topic interests me. I like channels like Tier Zoo and Daryl Talks Games, and I’ll also watch things like Critical Drinker or Literature Devil to deepen my understanding of story telling. Though I also like memes and jokes, to which I’ll find myself watching stuff like Sseth, but usually find myself surfing through meme videos. I gotta work on that.

Games
I have a rather long history of playing virtually every platformer to come into existence during the indie boom, as well as quite a few other indie games. I’ve played Meatboy, Binding of Issac, Gunvolt, Cuphead, Princess Remedy in a World of Hurt, Classic Metroid, Warcraft 3, Final Fantasy 7,8, and 14, Left 4 Dead, Shantae, Celeste, Danganronpa, God Eater, the list goes on. What I’ve played is kind of all over the place. I don’t play many games these days, I tend to pick things that look interesting and go on a decent steam sale.

Painting Minis
I do this in moderation. Otherwise, it's a pretty expensive hobby to start...

Music
I listen to everything, save most country/rap songs. I have too many favorites to name.

Personality:
Not one to take life or the internet too seriously. Is only serious about writing well and having a good time.

People to Insult:
Dalton is a Dingus.

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Monokuma tapped his foot while looking at a wrist watch. The tension was building. It seemed to already be too much for Caora, who had started crying before the results were announced. Dr killgood looked up from his watch and raised an eyebrow. “I... I didn't even do anything yet.” A few more seconds ticked by before the bear wiped its paw across its head. “Phew! I don't know about you, but that was the longest thirty seconds of my life! We'll have the results up in just a few seconds.”

Shona looked up from her E-handbook. “No.”

“No?” The bear tipped its head. “That's not a very informative statement. No we won't display the results? No I actually did do something? No it wasn't the longest thirty seconds of my life?”

Meanwhile, everyone turned to the sound of someone running down the hall. There approaching the wall of spikes was Felix. “Hey guys!” he greeted with his usual, overly cheery personality. But he didn't stand still. Felix immediately took to the spikes and ran up them like a ninja. When he started to lose momentum, Felix reached out and grabbed a hold of the massive nails before him. Even without any climbing equipment, he was able to climb the slick surfaces with relative ease. Such an inhuman feet of athletics would have been impossible for anyone but the infinite free-runner. In seconds Felix was already at the top of the spikes.

Nariko looked up. “I-Is that an honest to goodness practical use for parkour?”

Geina chuckled. “I dunno, but he's interfering with our game, which is interfering with us by extension.” She lifted one of her arms to aim at the free runner. But the doll would never get the chance to fire. In the blink of an eye, her bicep erupted into a mess of hydraulic fluid, and the rest of her arm fell on the ground. In that short span of time, the infinite knight managed to close the distance and attack her. Geina barely had time to acknowledge what had happened before Shona's second swing cleaved into the doll's chest. A splash of fluid soaked the side of Calvin's face as Geina lost the ability to stand. “Mother fuckEEERRRrrrrrrrrrzzzzz-” The infinite knight wrenched her sword out of the manikin and let it collapse into a pool of its own hydraulic fluid.

“...Oh my creator!” Monokuma was quick to erect more spikes, this time making cells for the cooperating infinites. He had walled off most of them, but he also wanted to trap the free runner. Felix's agility was proving difficult to contend with. “Don't get any funny ideas!” the bear growled. But the free runner didn't stop advancing towards Calvin, always able to anticipate where the next spikes would show up.

Meanwhile, Nariko prepared to avenge her sister. She gently folded Aleecia's hand over the E-handbook before stepping forward and drawing her sword. “Tennōheika Banzai... Kamakazi!” With her katana over her head, she charged the knight. Shona only needed to back-step and allow a cannonball to blow the samurai's body apart.

“Sister!” Willow shrieked. “She may not have been a princess, but she was still part of our royal family.” The queenly doll lowered her lance and prepared to charge. The knight made a mad dash for the hospital while the doll on horseback pursued.

Dr. Killgood finally had all of the other infinites walled off except for Calvin and Felix. The free runner was still proving to be quite difficult. “I'll tell you why his first and last names are that of cats...” The bear grumbled. “Because he's as agile as two kittens!”

Felix dove on top of Calvin and his chair, knocking them over. “You'll break the rules if you try to attack me through Calvin.” he said to the deranged bear before unwraping Calvin's restraints.

“True.” Monokuma nodded. “It certainly wouldn't be very nice if I hurt Calvin when you're the one screwing everything up.” A spike came out of the ground at an angle and stabbed through Felix's shoulder. “Thankfully, I can angle these puppies a little bit and go in from the side.” when the spike retracted, Felix groaned in pain and sunk down on top of Calvin. “Only being able to go straight up and down would have been a pretty big flaw.” The bear sighed. “You adult types are a handful. This would have been a lot easier if I stuck with my rule of keeping with highschoolers! Anyway, I'll finish up with you later, Willow is going to screw this up somehow.” Dr. Killgood turned around just in time to see Shona ram Willow's lance into her horse. It let out a whinny before falling onto willow, who had been dethroned from her horse. Willow's death cry was muffled by the sound of her horse spewing hydraulic fluid everywhere. “Okay, scratch that. She ALREADY screwed up! Damn I wish I had the camera feed. I'll need to look through the archives later.”

Shona's armor, face, and blade were aptly smeared with the carnage sister's “blood.” The infinite knight was clearly living up to her name, dispatching three carnage sisters in the span of seconds. “Come fight me, bear.” she swung her sword, splattering the wall with hydraulic fluid.

“Uh-uhu!” Monokuma shook his head. “You come at me, bro!”

“Your spike traps are only in the intersection.” Shona tapped her foot on the ground. “I noticed the markings in the floor after you used them the first time.” Shona dragged Willow's cannon across the floor and aimed it at Monokuma.

The bear froze in place. “Well, it's not like you have anything to fire at me with.” Shona wrenched Willow's head off of her dismantled body. After briefly gazing into the robot's lifeless eyes, she stuffed it down the cannon's muzzle. “Okay, okay.” Monokuma waved his hands. “I'm not going to lie, this is starting to scare me a little bit. But um, what say we stop playing around with the cannon and address the real problem.”

“You are the real problem.”

“No, behind you.”

Shona turned around just in time to see something charging out of the hospital. Its silhouette looked like a carnage sister on horseback, but that changed as its body was cast in light. There was no rider. Or rather the rider and horse were one. Its body was pure white with black vein-like seams running all over its chassis. Instead of hair, it had two giant horns that obscured the sides of it's face. It didn't have a mouth or a nose, but massive black eyes with red irises rested in its scull. It carried a spear under its arm, and it was headed straight for Shona. The knight didn't have much time to react. She lifted her sword up to deflect the spear, but the creature's weapon didn't budge and inch. It drove the spear through her chest, and continued running until it slammed into the wall, pinning her in place. The infinite knight was suspended above the floor. She coughed up some blood, but her new opponent stood there, unmoving. Shona's body was trembling as she bled out, her body growing colder with each passing second. Despite the pain in her chest, the knight was able to smile. A stream of blood ran out of the corner of her mouth.“At least I die... a true knight.” The centaur yanked the spear out of the wall and let Shona's body slump to the ground. She had passed on with a smile on her face. The spike cages around everyone started to lower. Davis simply stared at the fallen knight, shocked and totally wide-eyed. Mason had a like expression, and Quill hugged the barista for comfort.

“W-what just happened?!” Davis's voice cracked.

Monokuma approached the centaur. “I'm sorry, I know you'd like to think the carnage sisters are 'real,' but they are all controlled wirelessly. During the night of carnage, one lucky gal is allowed to take out her special carnage class model for a spin. Infinites, meet Alexandria, Alexandria, infinites.” The bear coughed. “Now as exiting as this all is, we do have a vote to get to. So without further ado, the results!” The screen went from a live feed to displaying the results of the voting.














VoterSelected
DavisDavis
MondattaMondatta
MaryMondatta
QuillDavis
MasonMondatta
CyrusCyrus
KristaKrista
DaimyonDaimyon
CalvinIsaiah
CaoraDavis
ShaunShona
IsaiahCalvin
Aleecia NarikoCalvin
ShonaCalvin TIME OUT


THE SACRIFICE WILL BE MONDATTA, DAVIS, OR CALVIN


“WHAT?” Davis pointed. “Why didn't more people vote for me? I-I brought this down on everyone! We wouldn't be here if it wasn't for me!”

“Please relax Davis.” Mason was the one who spoke now.

Perfection turned to look at mason.“Bastard! I don't think you understand-”

“Quill told me everything. I respect what you did.”

Davis just groaned.

“So anyway.” Monokuma managed to grab everyone's attention. “It looks like I need to make a selection, and I choose...” His claw moved over to Calvin. “I choose...” His claw then moved onto Davis. “I chose...” His claw finally settled on Mondatta. “...You know, what's the point?” Dr. Killgood folded his arms. “I can't kill any of you with the temp rule in place anyway. A shame my little game wasn't worked into the regulations, then I could have taken advantage of it. But because it's not, I'll just have to let the rest of you live.” The bear sighed.

The centaur rolled Felix off of Calvin and set his chair back up. With two swings of it's spear, Calvin was cut free.

“So that was it...” Davis growled like a lion. “The whole point of this was to kill Shona wasn't it?”

“Ding ding ding, BINGO!” Monokuma jumped. “I knew she couldn't resist the chance to jump in and save her friends. It's practically her dream to go out like that. You could almost say she was born to die.” Dr. Killgood's face tensed up with fear. “But holy cow is she scary with a sword! You might have actually stood a chance with her on your side. Things are stacked in my favor again.”

The three carnage sisters returned on horseback, their old bodies still laying in shambles. It would appear they had backups. Nariko held Kara in her arms, who was clutching her chest with her hands.

“S-she's having a heart attack!” The samurai whimpered.

“Hmph. Guess our show was too intense for some audiences.” Monokuma made a sound similar to one clicking their tongue. “You know what to do. Get her to medical.” With a nod, Nariko rode towards the medical ward and disappeared behind a veil of smoke. “You too Alexandria! You might as well Felix to get checked out.” The centaur only nodded in response before scooping up the free runner and taking off after her sister. A few seconds later, ANOTHER back up of Nariko returned, along with a regular looking Alexandria.

Mason's hands balled into fists. “So you killed one of us, so what? You think you can scare us into killing each other by murdering us?”

“No, sweet prince.” Dr. Killgood chirped. “I think I can scare you into killing each other by replacing you!” There was a moment of silence as everyone tried to figure out exactly what that statement was implying. “Oh, really?” Monokuma looked shocked. “With all the killing games that failed in the past, you think that we would overlook something like a finite number of contestants?” he started to growl again. “Do you think this is some video game? With a finite number of puzzles to solve? With a finite number of enemies to vanquish? With a finite number of ways to experience despair?” More silence. Monokuma turned to Rika, who quietly arrived. “Oh, perfect timing. You, Quill and Mason are needed elsewhere.” A set of elevator doors opened up. “We're rotating you out now.”

Quill gripped Mason's arm tighter. “R-rotating?”

“Just fuckin' go already!” Geina's gun clicked when she aimed the chaingun at Quill. “Ain't like you've got a choice anyway!”

As the carnage sister commanded, the three infinites went into the elevator. As soon as they turned around to look at the remaining infinites, the doors slammed shut. Everyone could hear the elevator hum as it was pulled away.

“Now...” Monokuma folded his arms behind his back. “How about we have a nice little welcome party for our newest recruit, Bliss Buckly!”

The doors to the elevator opened up again, revealing a woman dressed in a red gown and a broad hat decorated with flowers. She looked surprised when she saw Shona's lifeless body, but not as surprised as someone who never saw a body. “Oh gosh!” She lifted a gloved hand to her mouth. “Was someone murdered in here to!?” She quickly opened up her E-handbook. “The rules, they changed!”

“Okay, first off, this is 'this' game's first night of carnage.” Monokuma shrugged. “We don't reveal 'those' rules until after the first legitimate murderer. But since you've already seen them, I guess I might as well show everyone. Don't want anyone to think I've got a soft spot for the infinite nanny.”

11. Once a body is discovered, a trial will begin in the Court of Carnage shortly thereafter. Participation is mandatory for all surviving patients.

12. If the blackened is exposed during the trial, they alone will be executed.

13. If the blackened is not exposed, the remaining patients will be executed.

14. As a reward, the surviving blackened will be deemed cured and allowed to leave Axis Mundi.

15. The Body Discovery Announcement will play as soon as three or more people discover a body for the first time.

16. Killing after a Body Discovery announcement and before an execution at the Court of Carnage is not tolerated.

17. Only one blackened may be tried at the court of carnage at a time. The Body Discovery Announcement will not activate on victims killed by a different blackened or during the night of carnage. Which blackened is tried first depends entirely on which body is first discovered.

18. Those that deface a victim will be severely punished.

19. Rules 11 through 17 only apply for killings that happen outside the Night of Carnage. The Night of Carnage will not occur after a Body Discovery announcement and before an execution at the Court of Carnage.


Davis eyed monokuma. “Other killing game?”

“Yes, this isn't the only one going on. Axis Mundi is practically a sky scraper after all. You have all kinds of room. Some would even say an infinite amount of room!” Dr. Killgood tipped his head. “An infinite amount of space, for an infinite number of infinites, and an infinite amount of despair and carnage.” All of a sudden, the other elevators started to hum with life. They were going to get even more guests very shortly. “Welcome, to the infinite killing game!”

Patients Left:
Infinite?
Death Count:
1

Paging Dr. Killgood ~ FIN
Alright, it should be up any second now.

I'm not going to say too much about the post here, but I'm glad it's up and done with. I'm sure not everyone is going to like the twist, but it seemed pretty true to Danganronpa. I'll talk more about the post after everyone's had a chance to read it.

EDIT: also, it's okay for the pre-approved characters to enter the RP via elevator now.
Mass effect had inter species and same sex romances before the "es-jay-dubayouz" officially had their hands in it.

while it's not a tv show, this is legend of kora all over again. It was not as good as previous installments, but everyone's so caught up on the hot topic of SJW BS that the fact that these were just bad squeals regardless isn't even being addressed.
Jailed for over-participating in avatar spam threads.
interacting with people I know, even if it's not very well.

Interesting concepts, both in the RP and characters presented.

Being the GM helps, but is not required. Haha!

The answer to your questions really depend a lot on the world. The ability to incinerate anyone you see just by looking at them isn't that strong when everyone can turn invisible. I personally just ask myself "will this create interesting situations?" if it ends a fight too soon, or presents no benefit, it shouldn't be used. I personally prefer to collab most of my character interactions so that I can take care of problems before they get reported OOC.

With that in mind, this is how I would address most of these scenarios.

The Power of Hallucination:

This ability can be cast by a spell, magic, or other form to cause another player to see things that are not there.
Some of the questions I have about this ability include...

1: Due to this altering the way another character sees things, is this a form of power play?

2: If the ability changes the landscape, how would that change the world they interact with?

3: If the ability creates physical hallucinations, does that create concerns with Meta-Gaming and those viewing from the outside?


I believe that hallucinations is something that, if implemented, needs to be done very carefully. turning invisible could be considered a hallucination, as you're NOT seeing something that's there. I think it's fair because you can still be heard, so long as the person using this power cannot 1-shot a character, isn't able to turn completely invisible, can only turn invisible once a requirement is met, etc. It's really the same for every other type of hallucination. If it's too easy to abuse, it gets a nerf, if not removed outright.

Poison:
Inflicting poison onto another character.

1: Would this be an ability that can be viewed as overpowered, especially depending on the various strengths of a poison?

2: Should all poisons have an antidote and what would happen if you have an ability that doesn't have one?

3: Could this be viewed as Power Play as you are forcing other characters into situations?

4: How could you enforce a strong poison in a game without it becoming something that turns a character into a micro god/goddess?


Again, the power table of the RP plays a lot into what is considered fair and not fair for poison, curses, etc. It's not just a matter of how strong a poison is, but how easy it is to use. some poisons can be absorbed through the skin, while others are only bad if they are injected into the bloodstream or inhaled. If a poison has no cure and can kill in seconds, it's pretty much a 1-hit kill and needs to be nerfed by being difficult to administer.

Mind Reading:
Ability to read the thoughts of others or even view into their memories.

1: Pretty sure this is easy... Is this Metagaming?


In a fight, no. I always laugh when people use mind reading as an excuse to evade a blow before it comes. If you're a well practiced fighter, you're pretty much relying on instincts and do very little thinking. Once that right hook comes out, your left knee is rising without you even thinking about it.

Outside a fight, it depends. obviously it's not very interesting if you can just pluck exactly what you want out of someone's mind like a tray of cheese and crackers. But how dangerous is the mind reader person? Could they make much use of anyone's thoughts? Is it time consuing or dangerous to enter someone else's mind. Is the person having their mind looked into aware of this somehow?
Again, if it's interesting, I go with it.

Mimicking:

The ability to copy another player's abilities.

1: Similar to Mind reading... Is this Metagaming?

2: What happens if the abilities have to be learnt over time? Does that mimic player learn at a different rate?

3: What happens if it breaks the power entirely?

(eg: Copies the ability to use fireballs, writes a scene with the control of fire lava, Mimic player is told that Lava control was not part of fire control)


The problem with this power is that it's just impossible to enforce. If I did let someone have this power, I would make sure their power was always LESS IMPRESSIVE than the person they copied, or at least the copying player could only use the power the way they saw it. ergo, a pyromancer who can create lava throws a normal fireball at the copycat. The copycat doesn't gain the pyro's entire matrix of spells, only the fireball they were almost struck with. If the copycat had a lot of other cool abilities, I would limit the number of abilities they could copy at one time. But honestly, this seems like a really easy way to make a character OP if you're not careful.

"teacher, I'm having difficulty separating my food from the trash it's encased in."
Whilst working on my Batman (and other posts) I decided on my second POV:

Kawaii Otaku


>Had hoped for puns.
>Is further teased by the possibility of a punny green arrow over discord.
>We get "kawaii Otaku"
>Does not look like the punning type

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