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I have been writing as a hobby for longer than you have been alive. I have been a regular member and roleplayer of no less than fourteen different online forums during that time (including the old RPG), five six eight of which no longer exist.

I was previously a regular on the Homestuck forums, but I became so sick of thread turnover there that I asked around and eventually found the Guild. Since joining, I have exclusively only participated in Advanced RPs. Before Mahz gave NRPs their own subforum, I used to be an NRP regular in the Advanced Subforum. I am a Guildfall survivor, and know/regularly write with a few others.

If you ask anybody who has written with me in previous RPs, they should tell you that I have a generally open schedule, I post regularly and in a timely fashion, and I never drop an RP once I join unless the thread dies. Some of them may tell you that I have extensive expertise within the realms of Biology, Psychology, and Physics, which I will make no effort to validate since there is no way I can provide hard proof of aforementioned alleged expertise to anybody over the internet (though I am happy to try and answer any questions you send my way).

My favorite fandom is the Myst franchise, which seemingly nobody other than me has ever heard of.

I was a Contest Moderator for the Writing Contests Subforum for just a little bit over two years. I wrote the Moderation Policy for that subforum and I ran a contest called the Twelve Labours; you can still go there and see all of them and the entries people wrote for them in the Contests Section and the Victory Archives.

I have been quadruple secret banned from the guild discord. That is not a joke.

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@Terminal Not sure if last sentence was honest or sarcastic, but the closest thing I can find that relates to the first sentence is

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... Haha.

With all likelihood, I'd guess what just happened was a penalty and not a clue as to how we could manipulate reality and the way it could potentially be used to our advantage is if we somehow want the penalty for some reason, and we can therefore not use it for purely positive things. ... That'd be my guess. I'm not wagering lives on it yet, but that's my guess. Hm.


I will freely tell you that is the wrong rule. '-' That is not what I was referring to-

I am going to stop helping you now.
He keeps his hand up in front of his still glowing eyes for a moment, before blinking and ending the magic so he could look at them with normal vision and process whatever it was he was seeing.


I will inform you of what he sees once he starts using ethereal sight again. From the glimpse he caught of their predecessor selves from inside the limousine, they and their weapons appear to be entirely mundane and nonmagical.

@Holmishire Acknowledged. Heh.

But, like, if several individuals INSISTS that we're seeing Amelie outside the cloak and totally safe... ... .... ...... Then that probably just counts as godmodding and Terminal will find a way to murder those responsible rather than twist reality in any favorable way. XD


Perhaps, if you look back at the rules, you might figure out how I would react to such a ploy? It seems like a reasonable branch of experimentation.
Ha, lightning rod! I knew it! Or Andy did, such a smart guy.

@Terminal will you be sharing the list of errors at the end?


The new accumulated errors, yes.
For a second there I was pretty sure we were going to get right into Act Two without any delays. That second post really caught me off-guard. Thankfully, the contextual reality can accommodate.

@PlatinumSkink, if Amelie survives, you will not have to worry about that edit you made any further.

@Doc Doctor, as the Knight is now sort of facing away from you, do not auto him this time around. Donny is a crack shot, but from his angle firing through the eye slot probably wouldn't score a direct hit on the head. You will have to settle for an impeccably aimed shot to the center of the head's mass instead (if you like), and rest assured I will inform you of the results. The thugs however, are free game.
Nothing of concern drew his attention. Now that he didn't have anything nasty being pointed in his direction, at least to the best of his knowledge, he felt like he had finally managed to seize upon some small vestige of control.

Indeed, perhaps to his immense relief Donny saw upon closer inspection that the tripod-device the teenager from earlier had deployed was little more than an aggrandized lightning rod. It had some rudimentary wiring near its base, probably to make up for its lack of elevation, but it was obvious the device was far from the rail-gun he had initially estimated it to be.

His crack marksmanship had also definitively put the knight with the crossbow down, the armored figure toppling to the ground with a clatter. Their fall was somewhat curious - the kinetic force from the magnum round should have knocked him flat on his back a good three feet away and exited out the back of the helmet, but the knight had simply slumped forward and fallen as though pushed down from behind - and the back of his helmet did not even appear to be dented. Discrepancies easily explained away in less than a moment of conclusory thought. The bullet had probably grazed the visor just so and hit the knight's face while pinwheeling, shedding much more of its velocity than normal. The armor itself was probably also much heavier than it looked, which might explain why the knight had not been blown clear off his feet. Stranger things had happened, and the splatter of viscera plus the dribbling lumps of gore oozing down from the helmet's neck told that whoever he had been, he was dead now.

As Donny turned his attention back to the passengers and the limousine however, he found something that was definitely worth his attention.

@Cruallassar@PlatinumSkink

As Kael, Donny, and Amelie looked back at the rear of the limousine they saw that the grinding sound was not the result of any kind of compression or tearing. The cylindrical bolt was sticking up out of the limousine's trunk, its head adhered to the surface of the lid by a congealed mass of glowing, white-hot magma - and spreading from that epicenter, a wave of silvery, glistening metal was spreading across the limousine's surface.

@mdk

As Luca had a rather good view of the limousine's rear himself, he would have been able to immediately deduce what was happening. The limousine was being electroplated. The how was a matter of interesting speculation - had the bolt injected enough electrical current into the car's surface to turn it into an electrode? Was it just emitting an EM field that acted as an intermediary for induced binding by the spreading pool of dissolved metal around the bolt's head? Was it magic? Molecular golems or homunculi?

More importantly, why would anybody design let alone use a weapon like that? It seemed a lot less effective than just using conventional firearms, as the red-haired gunman had just viciously demonstrated a moment ago. It was probably lethal enough if you got hit or were close enough to the impact zone, but its utility was questionable. If the objective had been to kill them, a simple grenade would probably have been a more effective and drastically less expensive option.

With the barrier down, there was only one action left to him. Drawing his sword he charged at the small team armed with crossbows and some kind of advanced firearm, his shield up in order to be moved to protect him from what was no doubt going to be a hail of fire. All he could do was trust in his shield, his armor and the gods themselves to protect him from injury and death; If he could somehow manage to close the distance before they had the chance to reload, he might have a chance but it was a big if...

It was the only course of action left to him through. The only alternative was to turn and try to run away but not only was that absolutely cowardly all that it would do was provide them with his back to shoot at. Charging forwards was the only way now. "FOR BRETONNIA!"

From Donny's perspective, it happened in the split instant he turned his attention away from the three corpses he had left in the street. They had all been dead. He had seen the shattered skull fragments and the thoroughly bespattered grey matter. Then he heard the passenger - the one who had been wearing knight's armor, just like the crossbowman - roar out some kind of battlecry, and movement registered in Donny's peripheral vision.

Standing there in the middle of the intersection, apparently completely unharmed, were all three assailants. Upright and standing on their feet.

Their corpses were also present, still lain low on the ground in addition to being splattered across the general environs. They were unquestionably the same entities - the thugs were wearing the exact same workout clothes and the same tattered chainmail. The design of the knight's armor was wholly identical to the one on the ground. The only perceptible difference between them and the individuals on the ground was that the knight now clutched a Vector submachine gun, while the two visibly startled and confused thugs were holding empty compound crossbows.

Fortune himself was experiencing the inverse situation. One moment he had been charging the three upright figures, and scarcely a foot later he saw their own corpses lying behind them, previously obscured by their angle relative to him. It was as if the universe itself had twisted in order to accommodate the passengers' relative, incompatible perspectives.

If the knight was anywhere as surprised as the thugs or any of the passengers, he dealt with it remarkably. He promptly raised his submachine gun and opened fire at Fortune, the weapon erupting with sound and a curious, soft iridescent muzzle flash - if the thugs had been uncomfortable wielding theirs, the knight had the disadvantage of having to use the weapon while wearing his extremely unwieldy gauntlets. He could barely fit his finger into the trigger-guard and was having trouble keeping the trigger depressed, resulting in an erratic and wild spatter of fire and a multitude of stray shots, most of them hitting the ground or flying around Fortune, quite a few of them flying into the thoroughly destroyed limousine windshield that he had barreled through just moments earlier. The few that came close smacked flat into his shield. He was pleasantly surprised when they hit with barely any force at all - if that was all his adversary's spray of fire was worth...

A split second later, a creeping wave of a silver-hued metal rushed over the lip of his shield from every direction and began encroaching on the handles, accompanied by a keening, grinding noise akin to metal being shorn or compacted. The others, looking on, would see that the stray bullets impacting the street were busily in the process of layering the cobblestones with small patches of glistening metal.

Amelie, however, did not see any of what was occurring on account of having turned her back to the trio of enemies who she had seen die nearly less than a second ago. As she ran towards the nearest building and side-alley, a number of stray bullets fired by the knight past Fortune hit her cloak. They failed to penetrate, instead surging and blistering into lumps of white-hot, molten metal that adhered to its fluttering surface. Like a curtain of dye, a glistening wave of silvery metal began to envelope the cloak's surface - and it proved to be exceptionally heavy altogether at once. Amelie, still mid-step in her run, lost her balance to the massive displacement of weight and fell down with her cloak falling on top of her, pinning her to the ground in a surreal twist of fortune.

As the wave of glistening metal approached the edges of her cloak where it would turn inward and start spreading across the inside, it would be immediately obvious to anybody watching that Amelie only had a few moments before the silvery metal spreading across her cloak made contact with flesh...

@Holmishire

"If you are calling us from a cell-phone ma'am, I need you to tell us where you are so we can send a slug your way." The voice at the end of Ariett's phone replied as she watched the stray bullets stick to the young girl's cloak, and the spreading wave of metal unbalancing and then pinning her. "Ma'am, is that gunfire? Seek cover immediately please..." The voice at the other end of the line, still accompanied by a soft ticking, was oddly dispassionate.

The only silver lining to the situation was that the levitating sphere hovering above the intersection had not try to electrocute any of them. It was humming in an imminently ominous fashion and the air outside the limousine reeked of ozone, but it either did not see the passengers as threats, or else simply could not fire another bolt of lightning for some reason.
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Thanks! I'll try not to need it. Here, have some virtual cookies!


Noted.

Roster updated.

In other news: @mdk, the deadline is approaching. It would be a shame for me to waive all the currently accumulated errors just for things to start falling apart along different seams.
A brief announcement - after thinking it over, I am currently removing all errors from my alterations list save those committed more than once. It makes more sense to punish persistent errors than isolated ones, and this should hopefully prolong your characters' longevity somewhat.

Be warned, I am counting errors made between posters and individual posts. So some accumulation is still to be expected.

A new post will be up early tomorrow.
I have not heard from @RomanAria as to the status of their reviews yet. I imagine they are busy. So,

If I do not receive their reviews by this Friday, I will post the results and my own reviews then.

Ding. Right on the mark.

@Bright_Ops, you still are not tagged - but very bad things are happening. You might want to post soonish.

Some news: You are all making far more mistakes than I had anticipated. '-'

I currently have six pages worth of notes detailing the nuances of those mistakes.

An example:
...Agitated, as Penny had promised her death yet not ==how this was going to happen==...

A particularly sophisticated error of tense, grammar, and possession. It is almost impressive really. Poses serious technical issues in implementation, but I am thinking of replacing every instance of the word 'it' with 'this.'
Notes

I am spending approximately 1000% more time checking and inserting errors than I am writing the posts, and if I were to include all of them what we currently have would be an unintelligible mush. So new policy, at least for the moment, is for me to only use the most egregious errors. In particular, errors made more than once. This will be effective as of right now.

Edit: I also now find myself in the surreal circumstance of realizing I forgot to insert a particular error or else missed proofreading a valid word that needs to be corrected to a mistake.

Edit the Second: In further regards to the current accumulation of errors, I am contemplating setting aside all errors currently accumulated other than those made more than once. This may be a merciless sudden-death bonus round, but I can be occasionally generous. What do you all think?
@Cruallassar

As Kael pulled on th bras-lever seated to th wall th door popped open - jusd as th car-door lock, a knob of carved pewter, slams down du to Luca' panicked handling of th control at th second door on th right-hand side of th limousin a way down.

@WiseDragonGirl@mdk

Andrea reache Luca' sid immediately saw whad th softly ticking boy wa, to h panicked handling of th control, locked id - apparently every other door to th limousine, sav for th rear righd-hand door which th younger man with th bow had jusd opened. Turning hi attention back to th crossbow wielding knighd, Andrea saw th figure level th compound crossbow fire th bold. To Andrea' peripheral vision, h saw th window for th forward righd-hand car-door sliding down as Luca wildly jostled a bras switch.

@PlatinumSkink

Th fad bolt th armored figure had fired wa on a course whad took id directly through th broken windshield into th limousine' interior had id nod been for Penny' well-placed redirection orb. Th bold sail cleanly into th field jerked upward, sailing oud of th field a good thirty degrees off-targed sailing over th limousin entirely.
Unfortunately, th bold was evidently heavy - less than halfway over th car id losd mosd of id momentum after reaching th apex for id arc, began to descend. As th limousine had no rear-window - with th back wall taken up by th television screen - nobody saw whad happened when th bold hid th trunk. Everyone certainly hears id though - a keening wail began to reverberate through th car, like a melodramatic sigh. Shortly after id was followed by th slow, crunching, grinding, seething sound of metal slowly being ground down or compacted...

@Holmishire

"This is 144, whad is your emergency?" A polit voice came through Ariett' phone after th firsd ring. Sh could distinctly hear a tell-tal ticking nois from th other end of th lin.
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