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Jedly said
Well... Alright, I'm just going to say that at the moment; this CS is rejected. Due to the fact you've only written a line for the bio... and only a word for the personality. But, we would gladly help you expand on what you've written so far. As long as you can jam out at least a couple of paragraphs per post, and can elaborate enough in your CS, you'll be welcomed into the RP.


I was told by the OP to keep both of those things you mentioned "Brief or even vague" for the sake of fleshing out in the rp. I don't understand how the Bio and Personality i provided would be unacceptable.
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Was there something i missed or...
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Hebigami Shiho said
Is this RP still accepting? Cause I'm already writing my CS and it'd be a downer if she got shot down just because there's no more room. :P


This RP, as of this point, is indeed open. But CS's will be judged by a group of GMs, and should be written up to the standard.

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I was told by the OP to keep both of those things you mentioned "Brief or even vague" for the sake of fleshing out in the rp. I don't understand how the Bio and Personality i provided would be unacceptable.


...Do keep in mind of the thread's placement. Though it should be 'brief'... a word doesn't suffice. The point is to write up a base, which shall be developed during the RP. Buuuuuut, we'll gladly help you write more.
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For the people who keep asking, I'm going to make this short and simple:

We do not know if there is room or not. This is a transfer from a Roleplay that was going to exist in Free, but was moved up for more standards. We aren't quite sure how many people are going to follow us, but there's already almost 19 or so characters accepted, so do not ask if there is room. The status is unknown for a reason, but it is technically "open" until Saturday. I can't guarantee how many spaces are open or if anyone is going to be accepted right now.

Do not post a character sheet if you are not going to put any effort into it. What counts as effort? Descriptions that are more than one word/sentence, proper grammar, etc. If English is not your first language, that's understandable, but please run your post through a spell-check in English to assist you. Due to crammed spots, we'll be forced to turn down multiple character sheets.

This does not mean to not send in a character sheet period, we're keeping our minds open until this weekend, so if you're going to put the effort in and not drop out, we'll be more than likely to look over your request. Be patient as this Roleplay is a bit of a mess right now and we're still working it out. Thank you very much.
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You should shove that in the OP, Cyn
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Grey said
You should shove that in the OP, Cyn


Just did. Sorry, been running around all day and I didn't get the chance to look over the Character Sheet before the transfer. This was entirely on me. It's fixed now. Let me know if there is any other errors in the first post itself.
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Full Name:
Joseph Conrad

Nickname(s):
N/A

Gender:
Male

Age:
19

Year:
Fourth year

Birthday:
October 13

Astrological Sign:
Libra

Species:
Augmented Human- Almost cyborg like, he has infrared and night vision due to eye implants. he also can slow down his perception of time due to implants in his brain and heart.

Class:
Ranger/Assassin

Weapon(s)
X-1 Railgun
The Pinnacle of handheld kinetic weaponry, the X-1 is a devastating beast. It fires a sabot round that is magnetically charged, clocking at around 3600 m/s. To put that in perspective, the 120 mm sabot round, which was used to penetrate heavy armor, has a velocity of about 1700 m/s. Despite hitting harder than a bloody tank, it does have it’s drawbacks. For the round to be sent flying at 3600 m/s, it takes about 2-3 seconds to charge the magnetic coils. One can plainly tell when this is occurring, as there is a loud hum and a bright blue flash. It also follows a straight line of fire, making easy for the receiving party to simply dodge or move into cover before the round is actually fired. It can also only hold one round in the chamber due to safety issues, and the sabot round burns up at a certain distance, also due to safety concerns of the round going farther than needed. A bipod was never designed to offset the massive recoil, so one must manually keep the railgun steady.

X-1C Pistol
Simply a very scaled down X-1, it uses the same principles but is scaled down for use in CQC and mid range engagements. It isn’t as strong as the X-1 itself, but boasts a round that rivals the stopping power of many of the modern rifles. Limited in the fact that it can only carry ten rounds.

Tanto Knife
Stealthy, silent, reusable, the tanto is generally not used unless it is a situation where the target cannot be taken out with the X-1, sometimes used in conjunction with the X-1C.

World:
Earth

Short Biography:
Joseph was born in what was the ruins of the west coast of the USA, devastated by the resource war that had spanned across the globe. Despite the fact that the government had finally stopped manufacturing focus on military goods, most of the west coast remained as desolate and broken as it was during the war. Joseph was found by some medical volunteers at the age of eight, seemingly alone. A bit unapproachable at first, but he grew as talkative as any young boy would be. Joseph had brief military training before he joined the academy.

Personality:
Loves to be very sarcastic. Somewhat of a cynic, as he loves to point out anything and everything that is wrong or depressing.

Partner
Unassigned as of now.

Fear(s)/Weakness(es)/Limit(s):
Weight issues with his railgun limits his range of movement. Is also at a disadvantage at melee range due to the limited reach of his tanto.

Strange Attributes/Abilities/Traits:
Has an uncanny ability for numbers. Can guesstimate distances, trajectory and angle of bullets pretty accurately.

Themesong:
Rules of Nature

Other:
Does fancy a bit of woodworking.


Here ya go, reposted my CS.
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Well i don't know how to extrapolate onto a "Quiet" personality. Quiet, doesn't make noise, doesn't communicate often. i don't see the point of complicating an aspect as self explanatory as that. And just because my CS bio isn't completely fleshed out doesn't mean that its an act of no effort. It was done that way because the OP specifically asked for. Of course i had plans to flesh it out once the RP got going and the need arose. I don't get this. Why ask for things you don't actually want.
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Sorry if i sound a bit peeved, but this was 30+ minutes of thinking/writing just discarded.
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Nebula5 said
Well i don't know how to extrapolate onto a "Quiet" personality. Quiet, doesn't make noise, doesn't communicate often. i don't see the point of complicating an aspect as self explanatory as that. And just because my CS bio isn't "completely fleshed out doesn't mean that its an act of no effort. It was done that way because the OP specifically asked for. Of course i had plans to flesh it out once the RP got going and the need arose. I don't get this. Why ask for things you don't actually want.


If you're going to continue, then we can reject your Character Sheet. It's not that hard to write out a personality, I'm sorry, that was a mistake on my behalf, but there's absolutely no reason to continue on with it. Fix it, don't. We have enough people who want to join, but we'd rather help you so that you're accepted. If you're going to whine about it, we'll gladly reject you and move on.

The mistake was mine and I didn't edit it PRIOR to putting in Casual due to personal issues. The Mods have the same power I do and if you do not comply with a request, well, then that's an issue, isn't it?

Are you going to fix it or continue with this tirade? Choice is yours.

Edit: We aren't saying you didn't put effort into it. We're saying that it doesn't meet our standards and we have rules that are to be followed. If we let you slide, we'll let others slide and it'll become a trainwreck eventually. And we aren't telling you to discard it either -- we want to help you expand it. That's it.
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Nebula5 said
Well i don't know how to extrapolate onto a "Quiet" personality. Quiet, doesn't make noise, doesn't communicate often. i don't see the point of complicating an aspect as self explanatory as that. And just because my CS bio isn't completely fleshed out doesn't mean that its an act of no effort. It was done that way because the OP specifically asked for. Of course i had plans to flesh it out once the RP got going and the need arose. I don't get this. Why ask for things you don't actually want.


No one's only trait is "quiet." I'm quiet but there's still more to me than quiet. Is she quiet in a rude way? A shy way? Is she stubborn or meek? Why is she quiet?
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Bye.
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Well... Alrighty then. Anyways, I threw together the list of each class. So far, it is only composed of those who I know for a fact are in the RP, as they have posted in this new OOC. Those who get around to transfering their CS's over will obviously be added.
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I disapprove of that list, Jedly. What happened to calling him Ier-Briar Swag-of-Shield?
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Edited. Done and done. *logs off for the night*
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I have plans to expand the bio, but it's 3AM and i'm worried about missing the deadline. Here's my little application i guess.



Full Name
Karu Sulan

Gender
Male

Age
16

Year
First

Birthday
October 4th

Astrological Sign
Gemini

Species


Class

Fae Dragon, Mage

Weapon
-Fae dragons have a venomous bite that attempts to paralyzes muscles


World
Lucis

Short Biography
While fae dragons tend to keep far away from civilization and only show themselves when up to mischief, Karu was a rather odd case. His egg was discovered and cared for by elves, and as a result he not only picked up the common and elven language. He is very friendly unlike many of his draconic brothersand sisters as a result
Personality
Fae dragons have inherited the pride sterotypically found among dragons and Karu is no different. However he is also very friendly and fun loving, if not a little mischievous. As a youngling, he is also a very curious and overly trusting soul. He also occasionally does not no when to shut his mouth.

Partner
None currently

Fear(s)/Weakness(es)/Limit(s)
Magic = Life. Fae are by nature magic beings, while their magical pools often replenish after a short time, completely exhausting their pool of magic will kill them.

Fear of heavy tech - Karu is particularly vulnerable to human technology, and after a rather unfortunate exposure to it highly technical devices he does not understand can cause him to have a panic attack.

Strange Attributes/Abilities/Traits
Magic Sense - Fae dragons are very sensitive to magical energies, particularly abnormal ones.
Magic Body - Heavy resistance to magical effects. Able to channel multiple spells

Other
He enjoys rubs in any area a pet would (Back of head, belly) but he hate’s to admit he does.
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Full Name
Mundus Torum.

Fake Name
Joshua Nigel.

Nickname(s)
N/A, however he holds titles from my early ages.

Gender
Male.

Age
750~ years, appears 17.

Year
4th.

Birthday
8th of December, if we go by the earth calendar.

Astrological Sign
Capricon.

Species
Belarian, an ancient and old race of Lucius.


Class
Creator/Battle Magician.

Weapon
At the age of 560 years, you are required to forge a personal weapon of choice, which then will be displayed and offered to Furtus at the base of the monolyth. Through the duration of 24 days and nights. Mundus create such a bafflingly complex and intricate mixture of the arcane and the magically reinforced metals and steels. He had managed to create an entire armor piece, one which had inscribings and additional magical effects, it was so complex that he baffled the entire tribe. He even created a sword to match, all which would then be compressed into one glove. When he was asked to offer it to Fundus, together with the others who had made their weapons, Fundus refused to accept it, and instead took the others, this was simply because it was too fine to waste. ''Bring it to purpose.'' Was the words of Fundus as his voice disappeared after his manifestation.



Other than that, there is also his Zir'Xal, the implant. It is an implant which replaces much of his right arm. It's powered by the life essence, the life magic, of his own body. Whilst it doesn't look natural, it doesn't look weird or out of place if you had a longshirt or the likes on, plus, with the glove it wouldn't even be noticable. The Zir'Xal is that of the Cratus star sign, the sign of the Forger. (Capricon) Those few who were born during that time, due to certain magical shifts in the laylines during the dates of such times, are given extordinary magical understanding and power. Mundus' family was sure to raise him as to be fitting of a man of Cratus, the sign of the Forger. The Zir'Xal is basically an instrument which would increase his creator magic ability, allowing him to cast multiple spells at once, which in turn grants him his signature magic. Legion: Create, this grants him the ability to create magically powered golems of many different qualities, the greater the quality, the fewer they can be.



World
Lucius.

Short Biography
As mentioned, he comes from Lucius, was born in a tribe known as the Gu'mans and spent his life there for long, however certain... Things came to be and he eventually ended up on Earth under another identity. He was born during the time of Capricon, which in the region of the Gu'mans and for the Belarian people is an enormous thing. Other than that... he's spoken with Furtus on multiple occations, they've even created a weird bond between the two, a bond of appreciation, or so to speak.

Personality
Mundus is a man of few words, but many actions, he tends to keep to himself, but may at times burst into a person who seemingly acts the exact opposite of his natural self, he may break into an insane lunatic who wishes only to cause others pain in any imaginable way, bare in mind, this comes only during unnatural causes, such as prolonged hostile activity towards himself.

Partner
N/A as of now.

Fear(s)/Weakness(es)/Limit(s)
The weakness of Mundus is a rather great one, all be it mental. He is a perfectionist, he always scores high no matter what, when any flaw is noticed in his designs or systems, he immediately replaces them. That doesn't, however, include damage, but more of a general design. For example if something is there needlessly, he will strip everything down and remake it in a better design, that is the same to anything flawed in his designs. Even his equations on the theoretical tests are made to look insanely perfectionistic. Now, whilst Mundus doesn't have an extreme physical prowess, he is still quite able. And his great connection to the magic around him, and his ability to absorbe it into his arms Arcanum Hold is most certainly his greatest weakness, if he is not able to spend the magic he absorbs during, for example, a battle, he is done for, because this arm powers his entire magical library, and if it's overloaded, not is he only in danger of death, but also his connection to his entire magical library may be severed until another Zir'Xal replaces it, one of the required power and quality of his entire library. That would not only be expensive, but also nigh impossible considering his inability to craft advanced structures without a supporting Zir'Xal.
Mundus also fears emptiness, not as in no one is there, but as in not being able to be known for what you've accomplished after death.

Strange Attributes/Abilities/Traits
Mundus is able to access the incredibly rare, Gu'man tribe exclusive Golden Heaven Creator essence, this is the creator magic which builds around complex structures of high quality. Whilst incredibly cost ineffective when it comes to mana or magic essence (it costs a lot of mana), they are still doing it without rest. The Golden Heaven Creator essence is known as Gu'Man Ram, spelled as Golden Creator Heaven in the ancient Balari language. Not only that, but Mundus is also granted with the rare Capricon sign abilities, such as being able to see major magical laylines, seeing Arcane wraiths and such.

Themesong


Other
Mundus has created many other personal Zir'Xal's to enhance his body, however they are only minor, whilst they may take up a lot of space, they are nothing as complex as the one on his right arm.
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-redacted 'cuz I dun goof'd-
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greenhorn said
Accepted! Welcome aboard, Aurus!


Uhh. Green, did you consult with Grey, Jed or Lucius? I haven't checked yet myself, but I think we are voting on character sheets.
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Uhh. Green, did you consult with Grey, Jed or Lucius? I haven't checked yet myself, but I think we are voting on character sheets.


I did speak to Jed, but... I'll edit my post, since I didn't actually get the other GMs' votes. I'm super sorry!
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