Hm, working on a concept, mostly involving a precog of sorts. It'll be good, I promise. I'm just thinking up more what weapons she'd use and personality, but I'll try to get you something today.

A bit of backstory left to edit in, maybe a better picture, but the basic character idea is here.

I'll wait until the backstory is completed to give my full judgement.

Just my policy for character bios. ^^;

Ah, yeah. I think I got it at this point, though obviously I can edit with mod suggestions and complaints.

Okay, um, let's see...

When you mean see the "fixed" future, it's attacks and stuff, right? Future-reading is an ability I'm sketchy on. ^^;

Well, it works more like a Spidey Sense than anything, since it's primarily subconscious. But, yes, when I mean the fixed future, I mean stuff like attacks right before their launched, when the enemy has made up their mind to actually launch an attack. At that point the future is set in stone, and she can know it's going to happen.

Okay, that seems fine. Accepted.

Actually, I have a question about her precog.

Does it take into account every chaotic variable in the environment as well, when a 'fixed future' is read? For example, say that someone has decided to shoot, but their gun jams, so they throw their knife spontaneously instead. Would she also read that future? Or not? Does she have to be aware of the presence of a person or a threat in order to read its future? Or can she walk through a minefield blindfold, and not die?

And if her precognition works only based off 'intention', what if she fights someone who has no thoughts or no comprehensible thoughts? Can she read the intentions of a Nephilim? If she doesn't even recognize an object as a weapon, could she predict that it'd 'become' a weapon as well?

Hm, in order. Yes it does, no she doesn't have to be aware of it, though that certainly helps, and theoretically she could. It just may look to other people like she's stupidly lucky, since it operates more on a subconscious level than anything.

It doesn't work off intentions exactly, so it would still work against a thing incapable of what we would consider rational thought. Not really, she could tell if it was going to shoot at her seconds before it does so, but overarching intentions, nope. And yes, if an object were to become an impromptu weapon, she could theoretically dodge it.

Essentially it's kind of a fusion. Besides certain major events (For example, World War 1, which was going to happen one way or another, just with the details different), the future is constantly in flux. What she 'sees' with her precog, is events when they have become solidified enough in time that they are going to happen, whether that be getting shot at, or someone tripping and falling on their face. The latter she would only see like a second before you were actually tripping, too late for her to do anything about it, which limits it's effectiveness (Because we don't want precog to be OP), but not too soon for her to respond. On the battlefield, she sees where the attack is going to be a split second before it's fired at her, and dodges.

I can RP it a lot better than I can describe it. Honest.

Name: Mai Hirasawa

Age:11

Gender: Female

Appearance:

Mai also wears a white hoodie with cat ears attached to the hood



Height:4'7 feet

Personality:Mai is a very shy and quiet girl. She spent most of her life alone at home since her parents where divorced and her mother was always at work. She isnt very sociable because of that and tends to do things her own way. Mai doesnt trust people that easily but would open up a little bit more when she build up trust with others.

Brief Backstory:Mai has always lived as only child in the family. She grew up in tokyo together with her mom and dad, nothing felt off about it. It was a happy and normall life for her but not everything around her seemed alright. Her dad and mother devorced short after she turned 8. Her dad moved to america far away from both of them to start his new carreer that would make him rich. This had a huge impact on mai since she didnt get to see her dad anymore. Well life continued on, she still had her mother so she didnt need to worry about anything else. Mai started noticing that things in the house where being selled and the groceries became less by each week. Her mother started working more often till late at night. Mai would stay up late to welcome her mother hom but she was already dead tired and went to bed immediatly. Her mother learned mai to cook for herself safely and not to complicated meals. She would make something for her mother everyday for her to eat after work but the same thing kept happening. She was to tired to even stand, it was no use waiting for her all day to recieve nothing in the end. It felt sad to know that it wasnt going well with her mother because of her being there. If it wasnt for mai her mother could eat and work normally. Mai would sleep by her side till it was morning to just notice her mother being gone again off to work. School started again but there was no one to bring her or to make food for during the day. Luckily for mai she could do that by herself. But it just didnt feel right. When she came home again there was someone in the house already. It was unusual that there was someone in the house before her. When she opened the door she noticed her mom already in the house sleeping in her own room. When her mother woke up again questions started popping but everything seemed alright. She didnt get fired or anything but there was one positive thing. Her dad had made it in america with his new company. He promised to pay every month for his kid and the woman he once loved.

Abilities:Mai learned to cook and clean the house from her mother at a very young age since she was alone most of the time. She isnt that athletic but she is very smart for such a young child. Mai can keep track and do multiple things at once and really fast when she concentrates. Its handy for cooking and can be used in many diffrent ways.

Powers:Wonder driver doesnt have that much abilities but it is generally good in focusing onto a target.

Pack up

The floating parts of Wonder driver pack up into eachother leaving a big round metal box that can easily be lifted with the main controller of Wonder Driver.

Last stand

Mai uses up all the power that is left in the suit to fire a energy ball from Wonder Driver Mk 6 at high speed directly at the target. The suit will shortly after that drop straight to the ground with Mai still in it and land safely by the tiny bit of energy left in the suit to land. The automatic weight controll that makes her armour lighter will go off.

Target trace

The target will be followed by multiple cameras that will be displayed on mai's screen so that she can lock onto the target with her weapons.

Long range drive

The range of Wonder Drive will be even further but it would take more cooldown to lock on again and more energy to fire to the distance.

Weapon:Mai's magiGear is labelled as 'Wonder Driver' her MagiGear has a assets of guns and sensors to search and destroy enemies easily. Wonder driver is divined by marks.

Basic
Her armour consists of multiple parts. There is the basic parts of her armour which will stay in the same place the whole time and float in the air they arent attached to her body in a physical way but with magnetic fields. The first big round part is the main energy shield controll which is meant for the energy shields and life support. The two wings to the sides are controlling the single barrel guns and flight controll. The part above the middle part is the main computer it has all the circuits in it and keeps everything running. It also controlls the two main canons on top of it. The two smaller bits on the side the armour is fully controlled by the voice so for each mark she needs to call it. It is also equiped with 10 controllable cameras to scan over the field. Of it are controlling the dubble barrel guns and the target lock sensors. The middle main part is floating behind the back of mai with the main computer just floating behind her head. She wears some sort of exoskeleton to keep it steady behind her back with all sorts of sensors in it to keep her body steady while flying. She needs to use her arms to controll the grid in front of her which is displayed by a hologram projector in a part of her arnour that is on the shoulder. The energy shields are the only thing protecting her. The armour is used for long ranged attacks and controlled guns from a far distance. All the outer parts can be packed into each other for faster flight and easier to move. The two canons ontop are placed in the lengtht behind her back when she needs to move.

Mark I

Mark I is the first mark when she is able to attack it isnt that special since everything is still the same but it is all extended out like in the picture instead of packed.

Mark II

Mark II is the first mark where the weapons combine with each other to make stronger weapons. Its makes 3 little turrets that keep steady while shooting that she can move around in the field and it seperates the two canons from the armour so that she can freely controll both of them.

MarkIII

Mark III only powers up the smaller weapons into 2 bigger turrets. These turrets spin around while shooting to get more area of effect covered with energy bullets.

Mark IIII

Mark IIII combines the two canons to make a bigger extended canon that can shooter further, is way more powerfull and has higher armour because it has more energy shields. The accuracy is even better since it makes use of 8 lock sensors now. The smaller guns arent that much stronger then the mark III guns but it looks funnier to have two difrent ones.

Mark IIIII

It combines all the small guns into one turret that can take on a large group of enemies because of the many bullets it shoots in a second. The Mark IIIII turret can also be used to spin around in front of the canon to make it recharge faster than ussual. But that is called mark IIIIII.

Canon

The canon is used for longer range attacks and is charged with energy from the suit. It takes up a lot of energy so Mai cant use it to much and it has a high cool down.

Grid

The grid is used to controll the whole suit and communication with others. The grid has a monitor system where she can lock onto enemies and watch over the field with cameras.

While their are other long-range characters, this is pretty clearly a different approach to one.

Accepted.

I need to update the lists. ^^;

Thank you i tried to make it so clear as possible what my idea was i might still see little things that i didnt add in and add those things in. If you dont understand aomething about it. Just say it and ill try to make it clearer.