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Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by MelonHead
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MelonHead The Fighting Fruit

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GG no RE 1v1 me on Rust
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Melonhead vs. LeeRoy

1-Characters

Both do a good job explaining characters and what they perceive in the other character. Very well done.
Melonhead: 3.70
LeeRoy. 3.70

2-Introduction

Both of you stance very well, both have increased the ability to draw in the reader with a very compelling opening stance post. I enjoyed reading them. Kudos to you both.

LeeRoy: 3.75
Melonhead: 3.75

3-Action
LeeRoy, you always write action nicely. I think your action/monologue is probably your one of your strengths. 3.75

Melonhead, this is your strength. Your ability to craft a scene has increased greatly from when you first, angrily posted in the WoTW. You are becoming a very fluid and skilled writer. 3.80

4-Attack/Conflict

Both of you have a knack for writing engaging and well developed offensive posts. I have to give the edge to Melonhead, not by much but enough because I think Melon is a little more calculating than LeeRoy. However that gap is closing rapidly and given a few more intense fights under his belt LeeRoy will develop in a fearsome duelist.
Melonhead: 3.85
LeeRoy: 3.80

5-Defense/Resolution

Both are skilled in defense. I think in this case, simply because of the situation he was in LeeRoy was a bit more on the defensive and actually did very well.
LeeRoy:3.85
Melonhead. 3.80

6- Creativity
There is little doubt that both fighters are extremely creative and that both allow their imaginations the freedom to influence the fight in a way that is engrossing and draws the reader into the fight. This is a strength for both of you and one that should be cultivated.

Melonhead: 3.90
LeeRoy: 3.90

Score: MelonHead- 22.8
LeeRoy- 22.75
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GG LeeRoy, another close match.
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For sake of being tactful and polite,Good game.
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What is this tactful and polite that you speak of? We are warriors here!
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Well some of us are, others are *cough*Rilla*cough* Jobbers.
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@Rilla I could go on and on, you know me. I thrive on conflict and argument. It's kind of my specialty.

But.

That only really works if my argument isn't totally ignored because any real complaint I make would be made to sound like a child's tantrum by the first person to reply to it.
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The reality is had I let both fights go on another week the outcome may have different. But we are in a tourney and follow a schedule.
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