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The post was great, Caits!

Also I'm liking the Personality Lunar!
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Should get up a post within the next 24 hours, boss.
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Sweet. Will look forward to it.
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Took a bit longer than I would have liked, but here it is:
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I'm currently out shopping so I would suggest one of the other gms accept your character. From what I've read, standing in line at the checkout, he seems great:)
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@Zendrelax@Leslie Hall

it seems good to me
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Zog. I think I should have made a girl. We need more female energy in here.
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Poor Abigale. Trapped inside a sea of testosterone
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There goes Yel's first post. I'm surprised it came out so well considering how tired I am. It's probably full of grammar errors but I'm too exhausted to work on them now.
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I feel quite sad looking at these first posts....I don't think I can match the length nor detail >_<
Well I'll try anyway....Eventually.
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@Lunarlors34

Improving your narrative writing skills is as easy as copying the style, vocabulary, and themes of someone who's better at it than you are.

Speaking from experience here.
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I'm honestly not a fan of my first post. I'm glad to see the others are excellent to draw attention from mine though.

I've been very busy these last few days (as well as having received some pretty awful news), but it's all culminating in tomorrow. The planning, the cleaning, the spending... oh god the spending. It promises to be a memorable night. Actually that's a lie, if things go as well as they hope then I shall hopefully awake remembering none of it!

@Lunarlors34 You don't have to worry about that! Write to the best of your ability! There's no wrong way to write your own character.

Also just for the sake of curiosity, what kinds of pre-established relationships would our characters have? For the sake of tension let's try not to make it all sunshine and rainbows.
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Also just for the sake of curiosity, what kinds of pre-established relationships would our characters have? For the sake of tension let's try not to make it all sunshine and rainbows.


Well, I've already implied that Yel and Abigail know each other enough to be informal and may have hunted in the past, but I suppose Yel could be one of the skeptics regarding Kwelek's capture of the Kwenda. Being reserved, he's only voiced out his concerns in private, but I guess the two boys' relations would be... lukewarm?
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@SillyGoy I can go with that. They wouldn't really hate each other, in fact I'd say Kwenda would have a lot of respect for Yel. Yet there'd be some air of mistrust between them. Neither of them are bad guys, so it's not like they'd be at each others throats. I just wouldn't expect them being chummy with each other anytime soon.

But things can develop! They can either become good friends or grow to hate each others guts!
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Adoni is the guy who knows everyone, and everyone knows him.
But does that mean they know anything about each other? Or really talk to each other? Nope XD
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@Lunarlors34 Adoni and Kwenda seem like they would have been the two outcasts of their tribe. Maybe there is a pre-existing bond there?
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@Leslie Hall
Maybe. I just assumed everyone knew everyone and got along at least reasonably XD
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@Lunarlors34

I'd say that Yel and Adoni don't really know each other at the moment. They'd be aware of each others' names because they're two rather unique members of the tribe but I'd say that the two have only exchanged bits of conversation that have formed a sort of rickety foundation on which to build their relationship.
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@SillyGoy
Yeah I don't expect Adoni to have any real 'relationships' with anyone XD
I mean blind means he can't really 'leave' the village, so this um...adventure will be amusing. Comedy relief here I come old friend!
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Apparently Abigale knows everyone ^.^
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