Also, @ThunderCrash, I forgot to address a question of yours. You can mention other avatars, but please try not to make them too detailed. For example, you talked about Zapdos. If someone wanted to make a Zapdos character down the road, I don't want them to be stuck with your description. I haven't actually read your IC post yet, so don't think I'm trying to make you change anything. It's just something to keep in mind.
I learned my lesson from last time, don't worry. I did go into slightly more detail with the Zapdos NPC (he had fancy clothes and wasn't that great of a dancer) since there wasn't anyone with that character, but everything could easily be changed down the line. As for the shout-outs, it was basically just Rebeca going "oh, there's that person from last night". I did try to incorporate a bit of the competition going on between Seras and Tantalus, keeping within what @Ardent Dawn and @Sickle-cell had already written themselves.
