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Yeah sure. If you want, you can even use the canonical Maple, who would be an old witch by now anyway. Might be neat to have a legacy character in there but if you'd rather not use established material, either way is fine by me.
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Hmm~

I could certainly use her, since she'd probably still be around. In fact, I think I might do that. Give me about half an hour or so, and she'll probably be done~



And there she is. I hope that is acceptable, if not, I will change anything I need too~
Now if we could also get a few more people for this, it'd also be great xD
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Yeah that'd be pretty neat. My ideal number is four, and if we only get one more applicant, I wouldn't mind playing a character, but I wasn't really planning on it.

I updated the locations post with some new entries, and I'll try to finish off the last of them in the next update.

I'll look over your character soon and get back to you with my thoughts.
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The character looks great to me. You might want to add a note about her parents in the backstory, but if that's not really important to the character at all I won't force you to. It's fine the way it is in that regard. Maybe you could say a bit more about what she's been up to lately? I haven't mentioned it yet, but we'll be starting in the village of Rauru, a small town on the southern end of the Nuun Highlands. It's a popular waystation for travelers as it's a convenient stop on the road from Lynna City out to the mining town Darunia, but it's also somewhat close to the Fairies' Woods. You can choose to incorporate that into your backstory or not, but it might be wise to have some explanation for why she's in the area. You didn't know that though, so it's not your fault. Great job!
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Aha~

Alright, added the bit about Rauru in. Simple and easy enough motivation for her to be there~

As for her parents...their relationship is awkward at best. Added that in a little blurb under other~
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Aha~

Alright, added the bit about Rauru in. Simple and easy enough motivation for her to be there~

As for her parents...their relationship is awkward at best. Added that in a little blurb under other~


Thanks for adding those bits, it looks great to me now. I like your spell choice too, and if you want you could even make her a little more experienced with alchemy. Syrup and Maple were most famous as potion makers, I'm sure at least some of that got passed down in the training. Backstory is straightforward and leaves room to go pretty much anywhere with the character. I give it a firm noice out of noice.

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  • Labrynna Firebrand L1 (Labrynna Fire Ring) - When activated, it wreathes whatever weapon he is wielding in flames, adding more damage, and a little extra range in the form of a stream of fire. If he obtains other elemental rings he can use different elemental or effect versions as well.


Another great character. Did you draw that yourself? Nice touch with the Zora water symbol on the sword. You could add a bit about his actual physical features for the appearance if you want, the drawing is hella dope for sure but it would be nice to have some bits about his height and hair color and other juicy deets, you know? I mean just in case anyone's gotta describe him when he takes his helmet off and all that.

Only real problem I have with the sheet is that I'd rather him not start with a spell ring since he's a warrior character. That is a good idea for a spell ring though, he may acquire it later. I'll compromise on the fire effect; what if he can ignite his sword during the Dragon Spin Attack, but it only lasts for the duration of the attack? Then it would be more like a secret sword art than a conventional spell; there is precedent this for this in the series, as Link sometimes learns the Spin Attack and the Sword Beam in games where there isn't a conventional magic meter, even though these are magic-based attacks. The fire effect would, however, mean there would be a cooldown period between effective uses of the Dragon Spin Attack because he's using magic effects with no magic energy. If this were the case, you'd describe the Dragon Spin Attack in the Magic section and where you would normally put the ring name, you'd just put Sword Art. Like ~Dragon Spin Attack (Sword Art)~

Does that sound fair? Otherwise I really like the sheet. The tie-in with the brother in Holodrum is nice, and his standing in the Seashell Knights gives me easy opportunities to involve that faction with the party. Not to mention he's fuckin' cool and shit like that. So rad. I give it a fresh out of dope.
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Thanks for adding those bits, it looks great to me now. I like your spell choice too, and if you want you could even make her a little more experienced with alchemy. Syrup and Maple were most famous as potion makers, I'm sure at least some of that got passed down in the training. Backstory is straightforward and leaves room to go pretty much anywhere with the character. I give it a firm noice out of noice.


Ahah, thank you, thank you.

I'll go ahead and give her some skill with that then. She's young though, so that's a major factor in limiting a lot of her skills. Couldn't make her a whole lot older, or she'd probably be a tad bit on the OP side even with just three rings, I think~

But of course, that's also what character development over the course of the RP is for. I do intend for her to get stronger~

...and who knows, maybe she'll even dabble in some...less than reputable magics if she's ever given the opportunity and no one talks her out of it~
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He's more of a spell swordsman, the intention is he'll gain sword-based magic throughout, however making the flaming dragon spin attack a weapon art instead of reliant on magic is a much better idea. I think I'll do that. As for the cooldown period, perhaps once or twice only per battle (with rest in-between, in case he needs to fight consecutively), otherwise he can use a weaker version without the flames as a basic weapon technique.

Also the symbol is actual the symbol used for the Tune of Ages, but it is also Nayru's symbol.
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@Sho Minazuki Sounds good. Nice detail there, forgot about the little Tune icons on the different harp songs.

The OOC is up. You two are welcome to drop your completed applications in the characters tab whenever it's convenient for you. Hopefully the new topic will add some visibility and bring us the two applicants we need to get started.

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Here it is again. I still want some kind of magical ring, because despite being a knight he takes to magical and scholarly pursuits as much as he does martial, and I want to reflect that. So I changed it to forming a magic shield instead.

The flames will be blue for his weapon art.



EDIT: Also was going to say. An OOC will garner more attention. That slipped my mind.

And yes I drew that. I have another design should he be promoted or something. I'll draw his face later.
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Still accepting!
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Still looking for applicants.
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