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Hidden 10 yrs ago → 10 yrs ago Post by boomlover
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@Dark Wind ill hopefully try to get an post out worthy of advanced. ( considering i have to respond to one question !) sorry for not getting a new post out.
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Might not be able to get posts out tonight, very busy day today thus far. Did get some parts done, so no later than tomorrow afternoon!
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Took a stab at an intro post. Also took some ideas and ran with them, and probably took some liberties while I was at it -- if the post doesn't pass muster let me know and I can try again.
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@Lucky Knight that... is a long post.
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@boomlover -- I got excited. >_<
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Tsar Gatto
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Drinks with a Jawa?



Good post :-)
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Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by boomlover
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@Tsar Gatto that... is the most cutest shit i have ever seen.
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@boomlover -- Agreed.

@Tsar Gatto -- Some how, some way, that is going to have to go in my next post!
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FURIOUSLY WRITING BEFORE DINNER (SORRY FOR CAPS CUS IM EXCITED lol)

I'm kinda loving how Anna is turning out. This is a nice surprise. All thanks to you, @Sohtem.

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Greeeeaaat post! I love the excitement. And all in all. Much approved. Very approved. Remember, martinis are meant to be shaken not stirred. #JamesBond4Lyfe

Anyway, back to writing. Time for some Aria/Alek/Ken duel fun!
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Might not be able to get posts out tonight, very busy day today thus far. Did get some parts done, so no later than tomorrow afternoon!


Also, I lied. Obviously later than the afternoon. I should stop making promises.
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@Lucky Knight @boomlover @Tsar Gatto @Sohtem @vancexentan

Posted!

I hope Leej becomes a mainstay character. There aren't enough Jawas in these party crews!
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@Dark Wind Well I got some inspiration with her, so I figured I'd roll with it. :P
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@Sohtem

And it has rolled! Anna will morph into a beautiful butterfly of character evolution. I swear it!

... I hope.
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@MysT3CH And not to forget you either. Looking forward to when you can join the fray.
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I hope the duels go well. I'm not especially fond of duels myself and Ken isn't a very aggressive duelist usually.
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Sohtem
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@Dark Wind As do I, will be getting my post up momentarily, hopefully it doesn't seem too sappy with what I'm trying to get across without being so heavy-handed XD.
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hopefully it doesn't seem too sappy with what I'm trying to get across without being so heavy-handed

Ah, the eternal struggle. Trying to write authenticity without melodrama ... unless you're angling to become a tele-novella scriptwriter, anyway! Haha.

If you were worried about Xeviiy's internal conflict in the first half of your post then I can honestly say it wasn't too sappy. Seemed like a good balance to me, especially since she's young and doesn't really seem to have a great frame of reference for what she's witnessing. That, and the danger of being taught to think critically (or as critically as a Jedi *can* be taught to think) is that it isn't so easy to switch it off, and it can paralyze you if you don't have the experience or will to force yourself into a snap decision.

My two cents, anyway.
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@Lucky Knight Yeah, big struggle sometimes, I just didn't want it to come off as a 'woe is me' sort of thing, but I did what to show her struggling with her ideology, whether choosing one action over another was the right thing to do.
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<Snipped quote by Sohtem>
Ah, the eternal struggle. Trying to write authenticity without melodrama ... unless you're angling to become a tele-novella scriptwriter, anyway! Haha.


Pfffftttt, no melodrama? we need more Gone With The Wind flare up in here!

"No. I am your father."

"Frankly, my dear, I don't give a damn."

But that is the damn truth. That authentic feel is hard to pin down. You did a good job Sohtem, I agree with Lucky.
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we need more Gone With The Wind

I think you mean 'Gone With the Wookie'.
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