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@thedragonsimon So wait, he just randomly killed his wife and son and got away with it...?
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Not random. You said short history. In a situation were isolation become part of a relationship, where the children are homeschooled, and the wife doesn't work, it is very plausable for them to simply disappear for quite some time before suspicion arises. Even then, if the relationship was rocky, he could simply say she took the kids and left him without saying anything. Not saying its fool proof, just saying he hadn't been caught yet.
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Not random. You said short history. In a situation were isolation become part of a relationship, where the children are homeschooled, and the wife doesn't work, it is very plausable for them to simply disappear for quite some time before suspicion arises. Even then, if the relationship was rocky, he could simply say she took the kids and left him without saying anything. Not saying its fool proof, just saying he hadn't been caught yet.


This sounds really convenient. Like, the whole sheet just sounds like he silently murdered his family without anyone coming to look. If I asked where he lived, you're probably going to say the neck of the woods, far away from everyone else, right? Or if I ask why his wife wasn't working to help with their money problems, you'll say that she was teaching the kids, right? I would retort with the latter that it would make more sense if they sent the kids to public school just to share the burden.

I'm still trying to wrap my head around why, because it sounds like he has a mental disorder that you glossed over because the sheet is supposed to be "short."

I know I said short, but that don't mean it doesn't have to make sense. Because this sheet feels really forced. Like he has a "shitty" life where literally nothing went his way, and killed his family in such a way, that he doesn't have to worry about a thing!
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@Mr Allen J There. Can't wait for her to die.

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:/ I don't like how everyone makes characters with some sort of combat skills. I guess nobody will mind when I make an ex-spetsnaz or CIA hand-to-hand monster.
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@Andreyich Everyone...??? There's only 2 character wips up so far dood.

I mean, Who didn't learn some type of combat when they were a kid? Ok. A lot but I was forced to join various clubs when I was younger only to quit them when I was around the age of 13. My character is going to be pretty damn useless though. Even with her blue belt in karate and the unimpressive knife throwing skills she harbors.

Pretty sure Allen might mind. Maybe. Maybe not. If you're being sarcastic: Oh. Just oh.
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That is not reassuring when they are the first and currently only two.

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:/ I don't like how everyone makes characters with some sort of combat skills. I guess nobody will mind when I make an ex-spetsnaz or CIA hand-to-hand monster.


Regardless of what combat skills you give your character... not like it's gonna matter against the overwhelming threat.

Though, I wanted to do a scene where someone tries their martial arts on the slasher and get riggity-rekt. But, I see what you mean, and I ensure that not everyone will have something.

Also, my power has returned! I'll be putting up the OOC shortly.
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I'm out, guys...

Have fun, though!
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I'm out, guys...

Have fun, though!


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@Mr Allen J1) it would have to be convenient for him to get this far.

2) I didn't figure the details of his history was all that important in a game where history is little more than fluff.

3) figured it would give an element of poetic justice.

4) his mental state is supposed to be in question

Eh whatever, I'll change it.
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