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@fer1323 Yeah, it'd be great if Nintendo did something new with a Pokemon game. I actually prefer the fanmade games. The battles aren't as visually impressive, but the storylines and gameplay features are more inventive.

I'll check out this manga.
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That is why I like the mystery dungeon series by Chunsoft. It is less hyped than the main series but it deserves some praise.
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@fer1323 Dang, if only I had money right now...

Oh well, at least there are fanmade games, and RPs of course.

Edit: Just wondering, when should I be able to see this fanfic you're doing?
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Here is my first fanfic. I have difficulty with my second. I have so busy with life that I have not updated in awhile but There are five chapters. Since it is early days for it, You can make a oc and help me write it.
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@fer1323 Ok! I'd be glad to do that.

As for the fanfic so far... Got to say, I found it started a little slow (This is just constructive criticism here), but the story picked up. I like those Pokemon POVs, and I'd definitely be interested in reading more.
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@LuckyBlackCatthe first two chapter sets the scene for and introduces the pivotal chacacters. You can leave a review so I can track criticism better. Have you read it all already?
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@fer1323 Yep, I have, right up to the cliffhanger. Looking forward to seeing which Pokemon the main chara becomes, and how he adapts to being one...
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@LuckyBlackCatany likes or dislikes? Any area that I can improve on?
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Likes: Well thought-out story, interesting characters. It makes me want to read more to find out exactly what's causing these events. I also like the way you have Pokemon do more than just battle, and you explore their lives.

Dislikes: Not so sure about the use of the present tense, though that's quite a minor thing. And yeah, it did begin a little too slowly for my liking, maybe the two chapters that set things up could have been shortened and merged into one.

All in all, though, I enjoyed it.
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@LuckyBlackCat I agree with you on having pokemon do more than battle. I will hopefully have a new chapter out soon.
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@LuckyBlackCatThe new chapter will be up in 30 mins max. Please follow and leave a review.
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@fer1323 Ooh, the tension's building... I need to create a fanfiction.net account.
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@LuckyBlackCatI find building tension easy. Maintaining it is the hard part. I know my chapter are short anf I am not the best writer but I think I leave enough for poeple to stay interested and thta is my best writing ability.
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@Heckno12waiting on that time skip
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@fer1323 While we're waiting, do you have any more themes for this RP? I've been listening to some of GlitchxCity's remixes on YouTube.
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@LuckyBlackCat I like listen to the timesplitters future perfect soundtrack. My fav tracks are Disco ago-go, Chinese and Mexican Mission.
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@fer1323 Ah yes, I remember Disco A Go-Go.

I wonder if this one would work for Vareena...



Still looking for one for Mesalon though.
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@LuckyBlackCat I am feeling a meditative music would work best. The best song that comes to me is plain of eternity.

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@fer1323 Just looked it up, pretty good. Do you have any others for places, characters etc?
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@LuckyBlackCat I would like descriptors such as tone, pace, meaning etc.
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