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Love the character. However, I would ask for a small amendment to be made. She has a few too many spells at her disposal. Embrace the Earth and Listen to Her Ire in particularly seem a little too strong.
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@Superboy

Maybe just remove one and turn Embrace the Earth into a knockdown effect?

Edit- I did just that.
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Attempted to post but messed it up. I am not very good at the formatting. :-(
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@ShwiggityShwah I'd be alright with that, yeah. Make that change and you can move her over to the character tabbity-tab.

@PrettyWings I know what cha mean, it can be a pain sometimes lol. If you need any help formatting it you can just PM the sheet to me.
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*adds bold*
Going good..
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better..
*adds a little beauty to make it look good*
Alright, lets preview thi-
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@Superboy

I really have to apologize on the length, particularly in the History. It's taken me a while to do everything else and generally by the time I get to history, I get really burned out. Ill try to add more to it.

The reason she's helping the King is at the Triumpherant's request. She's a very capable scout for incursions into Broken lands or just the wilderness at large. Not as much as someone specific to a particular terrain but *shrugs*
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@ShwiggityShwah That's perfectly alright. I've seen your other work, so I wasn't worried at all that you wouldn't be up to snuff or anything like that. You're fine.

Yeah, her being so attuned to nature should make her quite good at scouting ahead.
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Nature is for hippies
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Here she is! Sorry it's not any fancier, I really am just no good at that stuff. I kept the spell list very general instead of specifying a different spell for each possible ailment that one might have. I will handle the specifics of each case when I write about them. Does that sound acceptable? Whew!
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Kidding, she da best
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Nature is for hippies


You're for hippies

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You're for hippies


Square up you hippie
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@PrettyWings Her abilities are a bit obscure, what kinds of wards/spells can she cast other than healing? And what kind of magical properties on her sword? Just curious.

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@PrettyWings I like it, but there's a small issue: You stated she's from the Delphian Empire, which is fine; however, the call to action is coming from the King of Dall. So for her to leave the Delphian military to go on an expedition for a rival kingdom is a little strange.
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@Aeonumbra Sorry, I know it was vague but there just seems to be a very long list of specifics. For the wards, they include things like protection from physical/magical damage, status effects, that kind of thing. Instead of listing it all I thought it would be better to describe it in the story telling. The idea with the sword is that she won't really know exactly what powers her sword has until we get into some situations. I have a plan of course. :-) But it's not like a specific property necessarily, more like a personality.

@Superboy I had a feeling I was doing something wrong there, but I guess I didn't see how else she was going to join the party. I guess she would have to be a defector. I can fix that!
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@PrettyWings Aight, sounds neato.

Speaking of CSes, @Rebirth's character was accepted through PMs earlier after a bit of discussion.
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@Superboy How's that?
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@PrettyWings Yeup, looks good! Feel free to move Daphne over to the Character Tab.
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Yay! *^_^*
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Excited to be the autistic time mage in the group. Because, you know, messing around with time and the fabric of the universe, that ALWAYS works out well.
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