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Eᴅɪᴛs Mᴀᴅᴇ:
ᴬᵈᵈᵉᵈ ᶜʳᵘᶜᶦᵗᵒʳⁿ ʷᶦᵗʰ ᵃᵖᵖʳᵒᵛᵃˡ ᶠʳᵒᵐ ᴱˡˡʳᶦ 7/7/19
ᵀʷᵉᵃᵏᵉᵈ ˢᵒᵐᵉ ˢᵏᶦˡˡˢ ᵃⁿᵈ ᵗʰᵉᶦʳ ᵉˣᵖˡᵃⁿᵃᵗᶦᵒⁿˢ 6/31/19
ᴬᵈᵈᵉᵈ ᵃ ʳᵉᶠᵉʳᵉⁿᶜᵉ ᵖᶦᶜᵗᵘʳᵉ ᵗᵒ ᴮʳʸᵉ'ˢ ⁿᵉʷ ˢᵃᵇᵉʳ 9/8/19
ᴬᵈᵈᵉᵈ ᵀʳᶦᵃˡˢ ᶜᵒᵐᵖˡᵉᵗᵉᵈ: 9/18/19
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I'd probably like a few more details in their bio, after all, they're an 18 year old padawan during a galactic war, they'd likely have been in a few battles worth writing home about.

Secondly, Tutaminis is a restricted force ability, meaning I'd like a few more details on the extent of their ability in this field, how they've come to learn it and how they implement it.

Other then that, it's a really nice sheet with a lot of detail, I do get a very good feel for the character, I'd just like a bit more clarity on those points. Those GMs dedicated to the Jedi may have more specific thoughts.
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I'd probably like a few more details in their bio, after all, they're an 18 year old padawan during a galactic war, they'd likely have been in a few battles worth writing home about.

Secondly, Tutaminis is a restricted force ability, meaning I'd like a few more details on the extent of their ability in this field, how they've come to learn it and how they implement it.

Other then that, it's a really nice sheet with a lot of detail, I do get a very good feel for the character, I'd just like a bit more clarity on those points. Those GMs dedicated to the Jedi may have more specific thoughts.


Tutaminis is okay at it's current level given it's a known specialty of her Master. The other item is okay given how much she and I have talked this one out.

Jedi approval. Overall approval!
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