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Bumped up to pending. I hope the liberties I took on the format is alright, I just took the smuggler long format and flavoured it.
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Tactical bump.
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Your Sheet isn't forgotten, @vFear. We GMs simply have not had time to properly review it yet.
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My apologies for taking so long to get to this.

The character is a good one, and I like where you are going with her, but I need to confirm your understanding of a few SW technological elements before I can approve.

Firstly, and somewhat more minorly - Virtual Reality. We have very few meaningful examples of VR technology in the SW universe. Holo tech is often used for making advanced Heads Up Displays, but true VR seems limited to large simulator units big enough to walk into. In this regard I suggest altering her headset to be more of an advanced Heads Up Display, and adjusting the interests section to account for the lack of commercial VR.

Secondly, I need to make sure you are aware that wireless networking is quite minimal in SW. It does exist, but typically one must access a physical network in person to meaningfully slice a system.

In order to make use of this particular piece of tech:
- A neuromachine interface seated into the brainstem, to allow control of vehicles and droids by thought;

She will usually have to have physically jacked into the vehicle/droid or, if they are controlled by a larger mainframe, then she will need to physically jack into that mainframe and use its wireless network.

Starships in particular almost always require an individual to board them and access their systems from either the bridge or engineering to be sliced effectively.

As far as I can see, the feats in her character sheet are largely all still achievable with this limitation in mind. I just need to make sure you're aware of it before I can approve akkdog__.
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No dramas big fella. Thank you for finding the time to give it a read.

Regarding the headset:
No dramas, sounds fair. I'll edit the sheet momentarily to reflect that feedback.

Regarding wireless networking:
All understood on that one. When I envision how I'd go about interacting with computers in the setting, I'm envisioning the whole 80's style sci-fi gimmick like Star Wars and Aliens, complete with "jacking in" and such-and-such. But yeah, back to the point, I'll probably just avoid wireless networking entirely unless it's a specific plot device in a thread to be safe.

Regarding the neuromachine interface:
All understood on that one too. My main intent with the neuromachine interface is so she can directly control her doc ock style droid arms if appropiate. Instances of controlling vehicles and managed droids I envisioned more as a "high stakes" sort of moment, probably with "strain damage" affiliated to borrow from Star Wars RPG. Linking back to your point, yeah, will make sure there is a physical connection for those instances if they ever occur.

I hope I've covered off all of your points there. Please do weigh in if I've missed anything or if I haven't addressed any of your concens.
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Awesome! Sounds like you had the right idea from the start.

Approved.
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Congrats. Approved!
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