Hidden 3 yrs ago 3 yrs ago Post by Zool
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Ooh, I just had a wicked idea for the Witch's motivation: what if the Empire were secretly trying to build a Void army, and the Witch found out? That could definitely explain her animus against the Empire...


Isn't the witch supposed to be the big baddie of this story? Seemingly invincible, building armies, GM controlled... probably best to keep her fairly simple. If you play her like you're just another player playing your character, then we have a bit of a 'DMPC horror story' scenario.

I'd suggest just keeping her as the big baddie. Maybe a twist down the line. She's already a huge driving force in the plot and world.
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@Zool Yeah, that's true. Besides, it occurred to me last night her original motivation is good enough if her personality and regenerative powers are tweaked a bit.
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My main trouble with our villain was that "nobody's listening to me" is kind of a pathetic motivation to kill people. Given her currently established personality, she's more likely to try and build up individual people than raise a death-army. So something isn't lining up.

What if, perhaps, she thought the only way to save humanity is to destroy it? If she despaired of defeating the Voidspawn, she might want to send everyone to the afterlife to prevent them from falling into their hands. And maybe our heroes could stop her by demonstrating that it is possible to defeat the coming Void incursion.

I dunno. I got some thinking to do.
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I'm sure you'll settle on a good motive for the villain. You got this brother.
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Ok, so just to make absolutely sure I'm not doing this wrong, it is ok if I say my guy was one of the isekai'd humans, but was reborn as a goblin about eight years ago and has been in this world that whole time, though not really going much further than his clans modest territory for the majority of it? Naturally, with goblin life expectancy as they are, eight years old is considered somewhere between late teenager to young adult for them.

Actually maybe even younger, like four or five.
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@Rabidporcupine Yeah, that's cool. :)
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@Thinslayer
Cool, working on him now then.
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Can we start soon?


When everyone submits their CS's, we will begin. I'm still not sure how to begin '^~^
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Once I nail down Ru's motivations, I could probably start us off.

Speaking of which, I'm thinking her original motivations may be good enough after all. If the nations of the world are ruled by old, corrupt politicians who keep trying to weaken their peoples to consolidate power, that could explain why she's raising her own army to conquer the world instead of trying to negotiate an alliance between the nations.
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Once I nail down Ru's motivations, I could probably start us off.

Speaking of which, I'm thinking her original motivations may be good enough after all. If the nations of the world are ruled by old, corrupt politicians who keep trying to weaken their peoples to consolidate power, that could explain why she's raising her own army to conquer the world instead of trying to negotiate an alliance between the nations.


Thank you for all your help in creating this roleplay and offering to start us off. The original motivation for ru wanting to start her own army and dominate the world sounds great! And it makes sense.
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Ok, here we go, Gob time.

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@Rabidporcupine Hm, you know I wouldn't mind having Dex be partied up with your gob.
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@Rabidporcupine Amazing~! You may post it in characters
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Cool, thanks!

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Well you are of course very welcome to join him in his slow eventual take over of the whole world!
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