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@Demencia Erloi aren't in in this setting. Make them Kiellar and we're good.
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No robots, I figure someone's gotta keep tidying up.

Note: make a few small changes to remove mention of nanites.
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Looks good to me.

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How far back do you want this character to be from? Also they aren't using nanites for healing in the setting (not that that essentially changes anything). The only ones they have are the translator ones and nobody knows how they work.
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Looks good... only tiny detail to bring up is you aren't using the kiellar patronymic naming system (see the OP). Which you don't necessarily need to use, but it is worth noting that not using it would be ICly odd.
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@PrinceAlexus Awesome!
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Pretty much good-to-go, although to be honest the backstory felt like it got a bit too ramble-y for my liking!

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How far back do you want this character to be from? Also they aren't using nanites for healing in the setting (not that that essentially changes anything). The only ones they have are the translator ones and nobody knows how they work.


Let's make the asset pre-contact. After they were recovered by their parent agency, it was decided to put them in storage with other frozen assets in a high security orbital lab - it wasn't adversely affected by power outages on the surface. When the refugee ships left, the lab got raided for fuel by the refugees and they wound up bringing a few of the assets with them, mistaking them for fuel containers. Or perhaps they brought them along as a hedge to ensure genetic diversity.

It's the same nanites, the translator nanites were build on top of an existing design - this happens a lot in electronics, being easier to modify than to start from scratch. But because they're labeled "translator nanites" nobody uses them for the treatment of brain trauma. The people doing the reanimation aren't aware what the nanites are doing, they're just injecting them so the revived can understand them.

As a suggestion - when people go into cryogenic suspension, it feels like they're being boiled alive because of paradoxical undressing - constriction of blood vessels on the surface, etc. Oddly enough, that memory is lost on revival, and they think they're sweating because of the rewarming process.
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Pretty much good-to-go, although to be honest the backstory felt like it got a bit too ramble-y for my liking!



Happy to accept, welcome aboard.
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Let's make the asset pre-contact. After they were recovered by their parent agency, it was decided to put them in storage with other frozen assets in a high security orbital lab - it wasn't adversely affected by power outages on the surface. When the refugee ships left, the lab got raided for fuel by the refugees and they wound up bringing a few of the assets with them, mistaking them for fuel containers. Or perhaps they brought them along as a hedge to ensure genetic diversity.

It's the same nanites, the translator nanites were build on top of an existing design - this happens a lot in electronics. But because they're labeled "translator nanites" nobody uses them for the treatment of brain trauma. The people doing the reanimation aren't aware what the nanites are doing, they're just injecting them so the revived can understand them.

As a suggestion - when people go into cryogenic suspension, it feels like they're being boiled alive because of paradoxical undressing - constriction of blood vessels on the surface, etc. Oddly enough, that memory is lost on revival, and they think they're sweating because of the rewarming process.


Can you define what you mean by first contact? Do you mean before humanity met aliens in general? In this setting that would be like 2 millenia ago. There is some lore in this setting regarding how this happened and that freezing prior to contact wouldn't fit into it (basically humans get uplifted from dicking around on the one planet to full FTL in the 21st century).

The cryosleep in this setting is a dark-age technology that has been developed to try to replace the stasis pods that were used in the Federation days, but it isn't as good. So I'm fine with the cryo-lobotomy concept. It's just they wouldn't have been frozen prior to about the 29th century.

As for the nanites - in setting they were developed by alien races (the Berdikons/Gorialax - but that isn't important for this thread), specifically for the purpose of communicating with each other. There may or may not have been other variants of these nanites, but they no longer exist and haven't for 1000 years so there might be a hope/expectation that the person in a cryopod would recover but nanites wouldn't be considered as a potential source of that recovery.
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29th century is fine, Ill just need to know what was going on in that century.

Like, what sort of pre-war tech did Earth have in the 29th? Could they have created nanites or some sort of repair symbiote that the asset might have within her?

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Name: Iorosinn of Vendarrdech
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Sex: F
Age: 50
Role/Job: Edenite Marine
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Strengths and Weaknesses

Skills: With fresh combat experience, training, and strength, Iorosinn is a capable combatant.

Weaknesses:

Background:

Backstory: Born to an agrarian family on Euphrates, Iorosinn was one of seven children, the last of the group. She went through a normal kiellar childhood of being in the assorted scout organizations and entering Militia Service upon turning 20. Her militia tours were spent policing the brush for wildlife, with the occasional response to primitives or the odd pirate den. After 8 years in assorted militia units and not a lot of prospects on the world, Iorosinn applied to the Edenite armed forces, applying what training she received to get her foot in the door.

Her military service matched her militia service in terms of eventfulness, with the vast majority of it being sent as a support detachment to assist the militias against more defensive primitives or sent as a team to a known pirate outpost. When the metacer returned, she was deployed to stem the tide early in their arrival, but in the action, her unit was overrun. She and the rest of the survivors were withdrawn back to orbit to tend to any injuries.
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Character Description

Name: Iorosinn of Vendarrdech
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Age: 50
Role/Job: Edenite Marine
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Strengths and Weaknesses

Skills: With fresh combat experience, training, and strength, Iorosinn is a capable combatant.

Weaknesses:

Background:

Backstory: Born to an agrarian family on Euphrates, Iorosinn was one of seven children, the last of the group. She went through a normal kiellar childhood of being in the assorted scout organizations and entering Militia Service upon turning 20. Her militia tours were spent policing the brush for wildlife, with the occasional response to primitives or the odd pirate den. After 8 years in assorted militia units and not a lot of prospects on the world, Iorosinn applied to the Edenite armed forces, applying what training she received to get her foot in the door.

Her military service matched her militia service in terms of eventfulness, with the vast majority of it being sent as a support detachment to assist the militias against more defensive primitives or sent as a team to a known pirate outpost. When the metacer returned, she was deployed to stem the tide early in their arrival, but in the action, her unit was overrun. She and the rest of the survivors were withdrawn back to orbit to tend to any injuries.


Accepted, I guess... :b
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I've modified Nine's sheet a bit. I hope it's more in line with what you're looking for.
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Tentatively accepted.
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No robots, I figure someone's gotta keep tidying up.

Note: make a few small changes to remove mention of nanites.


Accepted after some discussion.
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