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The kindred mountains speak in whispered tongues about the man called "Nathair," born of the snake in the Celtic language. Since birth, he has stood out among his three brothers for his bravery and cunning. At ten, called to war, he led a charge on a neighbouring village when seasoned warriors would not take the risk. He claimed three ears that day and has since become a man. Now he stands on his father's council, addressing the matter of his brother's initiation into Chieftaincy. But even as the mountains still whisper of betrayal, his friends begin to arrive to take part in the aonach. One of them, a young woman and good friend of Nathair's since childhood, sees the warning signs in the bitter smoke and intends to alert Nathair of the coming storm...

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"Alas, perhaps I am cursed. After all, there is little honor in striking down your own brother..." — Nathair to Aoife.

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Nathair awoke from a bad dream. He was abed in his family's long hall. He turned over restlessly and heard his uncle and brothers snoring in the adjacent stalls. It must have still been early morning, for the cracks in the walls were dark. He reached up and wiped the sweat from his face, then thought back to the vision that had disturbed his sleep.

He and his brother had been talking in the barley fields. They had been but children. Nathair had mentioned to him how his dream had always been to cross the isles and see the lands of the English and Scottish and perhaps marry a Scot bride and inherit a castle. Perhaps then he could retire a great warrior and be spoken of in the ballads, like Cú Chulainn. His brother had listened whilst playing with the head of a javelin they'd found down by the brook. They carried it as a token of their friendship. The gae was made of bronze and shone half-green in the sunlight. His brother had frowned whilst he told him about his hopes and dreams. Then once his back was turned, he'd felt a sudden pain in his left shoulder, and he'd turned about to see his brother standing there--a grown man, looking down at him with the illest contempt. He thought he heard the words: "We can't both be the heroes of our clan, Nathair." Though he wasn't sure. He had awoken to a stiff banging on the doors of the hall, and the dream had become muddy in the way that dreams often did when they were too frightening and unsavoury to remember....

Bundling himself into his léine and brat, Nathair dragged himself out of bed and made his way over to the doors and keeled them open. A low song greeted him--drunk and gay--and he saw his three friends standing there. Rían, Tahdg and Aoife; each none-too-sober and all of them mud-speckled from travel. They grinned when they saw him and came inside, embracing him around the shoulders.

"Ready for the aonach are you?" Rían said, whispering so as not to wake the hall.

"As ready as I can be under the circumstances. It's not often your brother becomes Chieftain," Nathair replied sheepishly. He then laughed as Tahdg passed him a horn of ale and bundled himself around the fire. Nathair stoked the flames for them all, and they got settled around the hearth where bulbs of garlic and dried perch hung from the shelves.

"Bah! It should've been you, Nathair. The bloody line of succession is a beggar's prize. You might as well challenge him to a game of steel and take the title for yourself," Rían said as he tossed his wool cloak over an empty hook. He then rubbed his hands together and came and joined them.

Nathair smiled grimly and tried not to think of the dream. He could've sworn Aoife was watching him carefully. She'd had a sort of restless energy about her since entering the hall. Her eyes often sought his, and she hadn't yet removed her warm things. He avoided her gaze deftly and tried to focus upon his cups. When she saw this, her hand came and settled upon his knee. "Is something the matter, Nathair?" she said, as if she could yet see the dream playing out in his mind.

"Strange dreams," was all he said, giving her a reassuring glance and a feigned smile. That did not reassure her any and he could tell as much. In fact, it only seemed to unsettle her further. She looked longly into his eyes, as if she could sense his apprehension and darkening mood, and even with Rían and Tadhg making arses of themselves, her eyes never left his.

"We should talk," she said eventually, and he sighed wearily as she stood up. He knew she would pester him all morning if he did not come along. And with a glance across the room, Aoife hinted him to come with her and leave the fire behind....
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[So I'd like to write this Celtic-Medieval story about Nathair and Aoife, two warriors of a Celtic-Irish clan who're about to undergo a radical change in their lives. I will be playing Nathair and you would play Aoife (and you're welcome to change her name/or represent her however you'd like! My prompt is only there to set the stage).

As you can likely tell from the story so far, Nathair's brother is planning to oust Nathair from the clan. It's likely the story will lead into a political-military struggle where Nathair goes to live with his Uncle following his banishment (in which Aoife will join him). From there, the plot remains fairly open. The end goal would be for Nathair to get revenge on his brother/retake control of the clan, but the struggle will be whether or not Nathair can come to terms with fighting one of his own family members for the prize.

tl;dr: "Us against the world/ride or die" plot set in a medieval/realistic landscape with hints of Celtic lore, magic, and light fantasy elements (dreams, prophecies, seers, animal spirits, ghosts, etc). Bravery/honour/clan are the core themes. Aoife serves as Nathair's rock.

You could represent Aoife as a huntress, warrior, or sorceress, I don't really mind provided she cares for MC and treats him like a good friend from the very beginning!

This' a very strong, grounded, worldly plot. I would really like to include a lot of Celtic elements: whether it is druidism/folklore/or rituals, etc. I see Nathair as being hesitant to step into his role as leader of the clan and Aoife being his catalyst. She would perform rituals around him to invoke his ancestor's spirits and together they'd become a power-couple. So I see it as a bit of a Saga. Like History Channel's "Vikings" or something. Our characters would be represented in different stages of their lives, starting from when they're quite young. e.g. Nathair could be 18 here and Aoife might only be a little older. Keeping in mind that people came of age a lot sooner in these times, so they've already been classified as adults for a few years. This would really be their transformative period where they find themselves or die trying.

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This is definitely something I would read about! The premise so far is really interesting. Unfortunately, I've never attempted to write on the foundation of a politically complex plot, let alone a historically accurate one, for a nation I'm not familiar with. I'd love to spectate, though. Best of luck!
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This is definitely something I would read about! The premise so far is really interesting. Unfortunately, I've never attempted to write on the foundation of a politically complex plot, let alone a historically accurate one, for a nation I'm not familiar with. I'd love to spectate, though. Best of luck!


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Really appreciate this. I'm glad you like the vibe. I've been plotting it all day in an external document. (I usually do that to see if the plot actually holds up and creates something worthwhile... or if it just fizzles out and amounts to nothing. ) So far it actually writes itself. It has a certain formula going for it:

Nathair doubts himself > He consults the spirits > The spirits give him a reply based on duality (good/evil) > He is reassured by Aoife that he will always make the right choice in the end; or "might makes right" --> ACTION.

"∞" (And on and on until the arc closes and a new one begins.)

Nerding out, but:

It's also a lot of fun to see how this plot doesn't need many "logical" outcomes. A lot of Nathair's decisive moments revolve around him speaking to spirits/making sacrifices/or being reassured by his clan (mainly Aoife). So every time I get "stuck," I just have him re-engage in the theme of the story (Druidism/Spirits/Clan) and the whole thing reorients itself right back to where it needs to go. Feels like a very reliable genre to write in.

Honestly, if I keep having this much fun with it I may just make it into a series.
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Really appreciate this. I'm glad you like the vibe. I've been plotting it all day in an external document. (I usually do that to see if the plot actually holds up and creates something worthwhile... or if it just fizzles out and amounts to nothing.) So far it actually writes itself. It has a certain formula going for it:

Nathair doubts himself > He consults the spirits > The spirits give him a reply based on duality (good/evil) > He is reassured by Aoife that he will always make the right choice in the end. --> ACTION.

"∞" (And on and on until the arc closes and a new one begins.)

It's also a lot of fun to see how this plot doesn't need many "logical" outcomes. A lot of Nathair's decisive moments revolve around him speaking to spirits/making sacrifices/or being reassured by his clan (mainly Aoife). So every time I get "stuck," I just have him re-engage in the theme of the story (Druidism/Spirits/Clan) and the whole thing reorients itself right back to where I need it to go. Feels like a very strong/reliable genre to write in. Honestly, if I keep having this much fun with this I may make it into a series.


It's the best feeling when a story you're working on manages to write itself! Having it flow really easily and that freedom to tap into more supernatural and thematic elements to reach outcomes must be really satisfying. Will you delve into the lore behind the spirits and what drives them to consistently help Nathair in this pattern? (even if some attempt to misguide him) It's a pretty nice blend of realistic fiction and fantasy; I'd love to know more.
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It's the best feeling when a story you're working on manages to write itself! Having it flow really easily and that freedom to tap into more supernatural and thematic elements to reach outcomes must be really satisfying. Will you delve into the lore behind the spirits and what drives them to consistently help Nathair in this pattern? (even if some attempt to misguide him) It's a pretty nice blend of realistic fiction and fantasy; I'd love to know more.


(I cut this down for brevity's sake.)

TL;DR: Yeah, that's a great point. All my spirits appear in rivers/large bodies of water or in deep forest/where mist coalesces. They're the spirits of Nathair's ancestors and the mountains. Nathair summons them throughout the story in search of answers. I'll likely never name them specifically, as I believe naming the paranormal/supernatural takes away from its power. But perhaps during the second or third arc I'll address why he's so connected to the Gaelic spirits of his people.

That reminds me, there is a beautiful episode in Vikings where the characters go on pilgrimage to a shrine (Uppsala) and the show-writers address many of the themes represented throughout the series. I'll likely do something similar because I also find it really fucking cool to delve deeper into these topics!
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"What is the matter now, Aoife? It is cold out here," Nathair said as they stepped outside.

Aoife studied him at length. She was a woman grown, eighteen years of age, with thick-braided ginger hair that ran down her shoulders in a warrior's knot. Her shoulders were well-rounded and soft; arms toned beneath a crimson brat. Her cloak was fastened with a bronze pin in the shape of a fox’s paw, and she wore a beige tunic with leather boots bound to her knees. She had eyes like rain, soft and blue, sharp as they fell and bound to chill the bones when they had a reason to linger. Her breasts had grown fuller over the winter as well, a fact Nathair was vaguely aware of as they stood beneath the door of his father's hall, even now.

Damn her, he thought. Why did she have to be so arresting? If it was not her moods, it was her eyes. If it was not her eyes, now she had the figure to charm men as well. Why could she not have remained the unassuming girl of their youth?

"The cold is honest, Nathair," Aoife said. She came towards him and studied him eye-to-eye. He almost flinched. "It tells you where you stand. Unlike the men in that hall..." Her fingers snared his arm, as if to prevent him from slithering away.

"Aoife—" he argued, keeping his tone to a low register. But her eyes drenched his, scouring his soul for an answer. In that silence, the dream rushed uncomfortably back to him, as if summoned by her intuition.

"Do not hide behind feigned smiles and vague tilts of your head, Nathair!" She said. "I know you too well not to know when you are upset. The smoke coming from the village was unnatural; there was more than peat in the air. I sense the heaviness, the same as you." She gestured him up and down, indicating his shortness of breath and the fallen look in his eyes. "You stalk around like a man in mourning. Tell me the truth. What was this dream? Did the mountains whisper to you as well?"

He glared at her for half a moment, then frowned. "You are far too observant and far too wise for a woman your age; I say it to your good father all the time," he chided her cautiously. He batted her hand away, as he often did when they were younglings, though it did not deter her. If anything, it made her more persistent. She stepped closer and invaded his personal space. The playful girl he had grown up with was gone, he was starting to realise. Now Aoife was a woman whose intuition bordered on the unsettling. He reluctantly thought back to her question as he fidgeted with the cold bronze torc around his neck.

He did not know how much to tell her. Sharing dreams led to omens, and omens were bad news. Some dreams were better off left as such: faded memories that could not harm nor influence a man's life. "You know as well as I the mountains can be treacherous. Listening to their ward-tales can be as grave as ignoring them. I don't know what to believe. All I know is I had a dream of my brother, and in it he wielded a javelin and buried it between my shoulders when I was not looking. But I have been worried, Aoife!" He told her when she widened her eyes and tried to interrupt. "I had already been fretting over the aonach! May as well the stress led to such dreams and they are not prophecies as our ancestors would have us believe but a conjuring of my own ill-imagination!"

She did not believe him and he knew it. The color had drained from her freckled cheeks. She pointed at him with an accusatory finger as they stood in the lingering dawn. In the distance, the foothills were a ghostly pearl blue; the greenery was colorless. It was as if the sun were waiting for them to finish their conversation before it would rise. Aoife’s mouth, however, remained a stubborn, bright red. "A javelin between the shoulders," she argued. "To be struck from behind by the very person you call blood. That is an ill omen, Nathair!"

He turned from her again, but this time she grabbed him. "You call it your imagination," she said as she kept yanking on his tunic, forcing him to stay put, though he was eager to return to his father's hall and take ale with Tahdg and Rían and leave these thoughts behind. "But the spirits do not care for a fool's ignorance. They speak from the gut and the marrow!" She then retreated an inch, though her eyes remained locked onto his. She seemed to know he wasn't being foolish, merely human. But in their world, being merely human often meant the difference between forging a legacy and winding up dead.

Tired of him not listening, Aoife reached out and tried to punch him in the gut, but he quickly wrestled with her and pinned her to the wall. She scoffed when he got a handle on her, though she gave it everything she had. Her feet kicked in those pinched leather boots, and her well-fed body thumped against his as she looked up into his eyes. The honourable look did not leave her face, even as he pinned her down.

"If it is only stress, then let the aonach pass," she whispered. Her voice remained conspiratorial. She was too proud to be deterred. "But if the mountains are telling the truth... and your brother's heart has turned to stone... then you cannot remain a fool, Nathair. You must address this issue. Your pride will make you the martyr of our clan."

"You speak of things that have not yet come to pass," he warned her. This time he stepped into her and chided her for her presumptions. "I'll be wary, but I won't betray my own brother or ready arms against him over a vision, especially one born of my own restless nature! So I am worried? What of it. I am only worried for myself. A dream isn't enough to condemn him, Aoife!"

She let out a soft, frustrated huff. Her breath came on the wind. She sulked. Then she glanced at him and grew stubborn once again. There was still an innocence to the shape of her jaw, but her eyes spoke only truth. If they were not kin, he would've cursed her for how quickly she could turn a mood. But her stubbornness was her defining trait and he was cursed to love her for it. "That is your greatest strength," she commended him. "But it is also your biggest flaw. You would wait until the blade is already buried in your back to believe the wound is real."

"Damn you for being so bloody wise," he spoke to her face. His breath coalesced on her skin, and when she looked at him warily--with a hint of tenderness--he leaned in and nudged his nose against hers. She repeated the gesture immediately. Soft and guiding, a thing that spoke of trust. They could both do it with their eyes closed and had shared it since they were children. He slowed as he went to shove himself away from her, confessing: "I won't believe Cullan intends to betray me. He has no reason to. I am his younger brother and would act as his general if asked, all in the name of the clan. I'd marry whom he wanted me to marry and I'd advise him if he put me on his council. He has no reason to fear me, Aoife. I have no mind to challenge him to the title of Chieftain."

When he let her go, she hurried after him as he walked through the short grass and sand that pitched the hill outside the long hall. She was like a fox, snapping at his heels.

"You speak of loyalty as if it were a shield, Nathair. But a shield is useless if the man you face intends to strike from behind!"

She could see the indecision and the conflict warring within him. It was all over his face as he placed his hands against the door of the long hall. He believed in the sanctity of blood. That had always been their father's lesson. Family, blood, lineage. But he was also a warrior. A part of him screamed to recognise Aoife's claims. But without proof and only shadows in the smoke, what reason did he have to rise against his brother, especially on the day of the aonach?

"Your brother has no reason to fear you," she said to him from over his shoulder. She placed her palm tentatively on his back. "But he may one day fear your shadow, Nathair. Is it not often the case that great generals who have won the love of the people are hailed to the crown?"

He could feel his spirit keening. His mind was split, as it had been since the early morning, only now it was drenched in smoke and fog. "Enough Aoife," murmured, his guard finally slipping. "You've made your point."

She blinked, softening as well. "Let us go then," she spoke, her hand turning sweeter upon his hip. She knew he was at his limit. It was in his eyes; a snake badgered by a fox was likely to strike at any moment. "To warmth and ale?"

"To warmth and ale," he agreed. Then without hesitation he reached for her arm, pulling her closer. He would not be without her. Not now. Not when he was so grateful for her care.

She huddled herself against him, letting out a sound of pure, unburdened joy when he pressed her close. "Always so impatient," she chided. The sound of her voice cut through the morning mist and banished it from the door well. The wall of indecision was still there, but he no longer had to face it alone. Aoife had anchored herself to him, tying herself to his strength, and as they entered the hall, their friends called out to them warmly, asking them to share the fire and the promise of ale.


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Nathair spent the rest of the morning in a state of performance. While his friends boasted and laughed, he managed only to scrape by with mild jests and witless comments. His gaze was that of a stray dog, constantly drawn to the stalls where his uncle and brother slept.

A movement to his left made him realise he was not alone in this, either. Aoife was caught by the same dark mood. He watched her studying the hides of the roofing, her eyes narrow as if waiting for the very moment his brother would pull himself out of bed and make himself known. The morning passed by with grueling slowness as a result; like blood being sieved through a pitcher of honey. Nathair wished for nothing more than to lick the taint off his fingers, spit it into the fire and be done with it. It was no small mercy when Cullan finally announced himself and the hall truly came alive.

The village maidens—red-headed, freckled, and much the talk of the room thanks to Rían and Tadhg—giggled as they slathered Cullan's hair with lime, making it wiry and stiff. Cullan sat among them jesting, calling his own kin to share the wine, but rarely did his hospitality extend to Nathair and his friends. While Nathair, Rían, and Tadhg sat there toasting the man and sharing in the merriment, it felt like something was missing. This should've been a joyous occasion, but it felt like their presence was not wanted. The smoke from the village clung to the roof, thick and dense, burning their lungs and making it increasingly hard to enjoy the gathering. At one point, one of the red-headed maidens went to sit with Tadhg, but Cullan's men dragged her back and scolded her. And that was that. Tadhg and Rían would have no more part of it, lest they ended up making a scene before the aonach had even begun.

They all decided to leave in the end, and did so with begrudging smiles on their faces. As they went, Nathair could still feel Aoife watching his brother from afar. It was true that Cullan had watched them go with some small measure of relief, and frankly—Nathair could make no sense of it. It felt like just yesterday they had been friends.

"Don't you worry, Nathair," Rían said, shaking his head as they stepped out of the hall and into the cool air. "Your brother's just getting ready to be an ass. Takes an ass to make a Chieftain; everyone knows that."

"Not much company, is he, my nephew?" came a familiar voice. Nathair looked over his shoulder to find his uncle had fallen in with them. Nathair took a moment to study him. After all, it had been some months since he'd seen him last.

Maguire was a jovial sort. He was short in stature, moustachioed, and dark of hair. Though he seemed unassuming enough, Nathair knew for a fact he had killed at least three rivals in schemes that had kept the gossips wagging their tongues. He ruled over a holdfast just across the border. As the village made last minute preparations for the aonach, his uncle sat down with them by the fire and leaned back on his elbows in the grass. He then set his mind towards Aoife's clothes.

"And what is this? Aoife, the most formidable huntress in the glen has come to the celebrations dressed as if she's been wrestling a ballybog all morning! Surely a girl of your standing could not summon up something more festive...?"

"The only bog sprite I see here is busy sitting in the mud and running his mouth, dear uncle," she countered with her teeth around a spoonful of oats and porridge. She sent him a wicked glare that was just short of being friendly. "I see they've taught the monsters of the glen to sit upright. Tell me, do you also intend to stay sober enough to last throughout the entire aonach, or is it in fact your plan to retire sometime in the afternoon, old man?"

Tadhg and Rían laughed aloud, and Nathair could not help but smile as Maguire clicked his tongue and responded with a scoff. He then pulled his dagger and pointed it at her liberally, and she lifted her hands up innocently enough.

"I'm no uncle of yours, maiden," Maguire replied. "And I dare you to remember it in case any of my sons need a wife," Maguire shook the blade at the rest of them. "And here's hoping they don't! You'll soon as like turn them into punching bags or eunuchs than provide them with a babe!"

Aoife laughed along with the others. The sounds of their merriment carried across the timber walls of the log house. But her eyes soon drifted back to Nathair. He was sat stiff, his gaze tracking the movements of some of his brother's men; his ale forgotten in his hand. She pulled a small face before replying to Maguire.

"Careful now, old man," she said, leaning across the stones until the firelight made her braids shine gold. "Even if I do birth a pair of punching bags, they'll at least know how to hold their own. Better a warrior's wife than a sweet lady who faints at the sight of her own husband's horn!"

They burst into fresh laughter, and Aoife reclined in satisfaction and studied Nathair out of the corner of her eye. She then looked over her shoulder and caught sight of Cullan in the courtyard. She leaned in and muttered.

"He certainly looks the part, doesn't he?" She said. Cullan stood there bleached in limestone and two feet taller for it. His hair all pointed and his braided iron torc glinting in the sun. Nathair couldn't deny he looked every bit a Chieftain and leader of men. It filled his heart with promise and dread. "Remember Nathair," Aoife whispered to his shoulder, keeping her voice low as not to alert Tahdg or Rían. "A man's fine stature during the day tells you nothing about the long shadow he casts at night."

"Stop adding omens to dreams," he growled into her ear. He then gave her a rough bite on the lobe to teach her a lesson.

Aoife let out a broad yelp, torn between a squeal and a shout. She swatted at his arm ferociously and blushed until she wore a corset made up of freckles and soft red skin. "You brute," she cursed him, rubbing at her ear. "Is that how a warrior treats a woman? If you go on acting like this, the village will think you've been spending too much time wrestling mountain cats like a common soldier."

"I am no common soldier," he reminded her, and she stared up at him with her nose wrinkled and eyes challenging the notion. He felt for her the same competitiveness he felt towards his brother in that moment. He almost bared his teeth.

"Fine. No more omens for now," she patted him on the cheek softly, turning from him and ending the challenge. She recognised the seriousness of his nature. "But do not blame me if the Gods speak to you in a language you cannot ignore."

He could feel Aoife's spirit tied to his, and he knew she meant well, but he could no longer sit with her and share her mood; for it too keenly mirrored his own. He stood up and went to take a piss in the ferns.

"Nathair," a voice said from behind him a moment later. He turned and looked and saw it was his father. He was waiting for him outside the long hall. "When you're done there, I'd like you to come and have a word, lad."

Nathair finished what he was doing and met him halfway. He knew it would be about preparations for the aonach.

"This celebration is no place for boasting about old kills," his father said. "You and your friends will have to mind their own business today, you understand? Be strong, but don't let your flute do the talking. That goes for your clansmen as well."

"Pay me no mind, father. I'm proud of Cullan. I've no intention of challenging his claim," Nathair said.

"That makes me proud. Listen, there'll be plenty of flatha about town soon enough. They'll be looking to Cullan to see if he can handle himself. You keep your brother steady, aye? Watch the men. Watch the visitors. Be the warrior the clan needs. Honour your brother and good things will come lad. You have my word."

Nathair thanked his father and went on his way, but despite what had been said, he followed through with the rest of the preparations like a man wading through deep water. Aoife's haunting whispers followed him throughout the market square. It was only his father's stern commands that kept his mind from lurching around in the tumult. Every time he saw Cullan speaking with the village elders a cold knot formed in his stomach. He tried to press it down, but the memory of the javelin in his dream felt as real as the saex upon his hip. He was glad when the rest of the guests showed up so that he could stop pretending to be busy.

In time the sun settled high in the sky and long, sharp shadows crowded the village square. The aonach had begun, and the air grew thick with restless chatter, smoked meats and the promise of ale. It was the lyres and drums though that signalled the real start of the festivities though. Aoife found him just as the crowd began to swell. Likely spurred by Maguire, she'd changed into a sage green tunic with red accents that made her braids pop like the last embers on a dying hearth. She asked to dance with him and took him by the hands, though he could sense her cunning bleeding through with every step. She was keeping up with the other girls, but he did not notice her movements. It was only her voice that he heard.

"So it is time," she said. "The clan's eyes are upon you, Nathair. Even though it is your brother's day, make sure to stand tall. Let them see your strength and not the shadow he casts upon you."

Nathair swallowed and danced with her, forming a tight smile. But he was not truly there. He felt like a ghost at a wedding. Women looked into his eyes and men raised their glasses to him and if they saw anything hollow about his gestures they gave no sign, but he could not take his eyes off the stand; even as Aoife performed whirls beneath his arm and sent her hair tumbling across his chest; even as bubbly laughter formed in her throat and she squealed with excitement whenever he tossed her. He felt not a bit of her warmth. His brother was getting ready to make a speech, and as Cullan took to the stage, the music suddenly died as if its throat had been cut.


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The silence went on, mocked by those who wished to laugh, frayed by the whispering girls who fawned over his brother. Nathair saw their gentle eyes chasing after Cullan. They were in awe of his hair. Bleached with lime, it formed a crown of jagged white thorns that caught the sun. Nathair was forced to recognise how stoic he looked--like an idol carved out of bone. His brother walked to the very edge of the stage, the timber crackling beneath his feet, and to his surprise did not address the crowd, nor his father, or even the elders. His eyes hooked onto Nathair instead.

"Goodfolk of the Glen!" Cullan called out. His voice was iron stripped from a scabbard. It rang with warmth and purpose, and Nathair felt himself sagging beneath it. "I thank you all for coming out to the aonach to recognise me as your new Chieftain. I have some promises to make, I know that. And I'd rather make them now before we're all too pissed to remember!"

A few laughs went up from the crowd. Men clapped and the girls glanced at each other excitedly. Beside him, Aoife was studying Cullan like a fox hiding in the fabric of her cloak. Her eyes were reserved and full of quiet anticipation.

"For too long we have lived in the mountain's shadow. We've toasted to steadiness and peace, but beyond our borders the wolves grow hungry!" A few men clapped their cups against the tables, and Nathair saw Rían and Tadhg looking ill at ease. They were watching Cullan from behind their cups, and for him they did not ring. "The aonach is a time for remembering, aye. But memories do not move us forward. Today, my brothers, my kin, I ask you to remember our blood. We are of a proud clan. We have ourselves a great story. But stories do not uphold the land and keep the peace for our wives and daughters!"

The men of the clan now roared, clapping their cups upon the tables frantically. In the wings, even their father clapped. Their mother was hanging off his arm, clinging to each and every word.

"We are snakes, and wolves, and spears. We are proud Gaels. My father's reign--glad as it was--has left us weak and insubstantial. Our coffers are almost empty, and my Uncle's holdfast overlooks the glen for twenty miles. I propose a summit." Cullan drew the dagger from his belt and pointed it at the crowd, though it did not seem to be pointed at them. It seemed to be pointed at him.

The blade hung over Nathair liked a hawk's talon, ready to descend. Cullan looked hard into his eyes. His gaze did not waver, and his brother's eyes were red-rimmed and haunted by ambition. He seemed to be challenging him. As if asking if he would support his claim. "In the coming weeks, I intend to march on the flatha -- our neighbours -- and remind them of their tithes. A tax libation will be pressed on every holdfast from here to the sea. And if they don't like it, we'll show them the flat heads of our javelins!"

The men now stood up, clapping and cheering, roaring for Cullan. They banged on the tables, and the girls of the clan hopped about, laughing furiously and spinning each other around. Nathair felt like he was in a throng of madness. The dance crowd was pushing and shoving to get at his brother and shouting their support.

"No more hunger! No more darkened days! We are not sleeping dogs. We are wolves, and our neighbours need to remember to whom they owe their allegiance!"

The throng was too ambitious. Too loud. They were hurting Nathair's ears. He felt himself being shoved to the front, and he found himself stumbling on stage. A few of his brother's men clapped him roughly on the back, believing he'd come up to support Cullan. He walked onto the stage like a mad man, made stiff by fright and relentless expectation. The clan now looked to him to see his response. Somewhere, Aoife held her breath.

With a slight shuffling of his cloak, Nathair looked eye-to-eye with Cullan. His brother was gazing at him now levelly, with a slight tremble to his hands, and a thin purse of his lips. Nathair could see the weakness in his eyes--though perhaps he looked just as startled. He prayed he did not look as indecisive as he felt. But then he thought back to the dream. The javelin head buried in his shoulder, and he felt something else as well: love for his brother. Love for him since they'd been but babes. His premonition needn't come to pass. Nothing Gaels saw in the smoke of dreams and ritual was certain. He was just as fresh out of water to these politics as he was. They were both children, playing at being men, and never had he felt it more than when his feet touched that stage.

"Will you support me brother?" Cullan voiced, and his tone was weaker for asking; half brittle iron, half hard-forged steel.

Nathair looked to his father, who was holding onto his mother desperately. Cullan had shamed him for the years of steadiness and inactivity, he knew that well. But that was Cullan's right as the new Chieftain. This transition came with some small measure of shame. Nathair's mouth felt very dry as he searched for the words to say.

"In war? I will always support you brother," Nathair said, and a hushed silence fell over the crowd. They were all watching, all waiting. "You are Chieftain now, and the land is what you sow. I have only ever loved you, Cullan," Nathair said with some slight tears in his eyes. The dream hung over him like a wasp's sting, though he saw no sign of it when he looked into his brother's eyes. All he saw was a boy made large by lime and chalk. "Aye. I will support you. Geallaim mé féin duit ar an sleá a cheanglaíonn sinn."

"Geallaim mé féin duit ar an sleá a cheanglaíonn sinn..." Cullan repeated. He then dropped the dagger, smiled, and barked a laugh.

The change was instantaneous. Everyone burst into laughter and all the tension lifted from the air. It was as if the smoke had cleared from the square, and the mountains themselves whispered triumph. For the first time that day, Nathair felt like he could breathe easily. And as Cullan came towards him and put his arms around his shoulders, he felt human again. He pressed his jaw to his brother's shoulder, feeling the strength of his arms about him. Then he planted a kiss to his cheek and said to him roughly: "You've had me fucking worried."

"Whist, brother. No need to worry yourself. It is but politics," Cullan whispered tenderly to him. He took him by the scalp and looked him in the eye and planted a kiss upon his lips, and just like that he knew they were friends again. They turned to the crowd and received their libations. But among them there was one who stood unconvinced.

Aoife let her eyes fall from the shadow that had been cast across them by Nathair's actions, and she turned from the aonach to heed the whispers in the smoke.


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Nathair spent the rest of the aonach toasting and feasting with his brother. His men were warm and receptive of him now, and he slowly lost track of time in their good company. Although Aoife was nowhere to be found, Tadhg and Rían were building up towards a game of tug of war, and there was even talk of iron being gathered for the sparring that would come after. As far as he was the judge, things were settled between him and Cullan.

"I'm proud to call you my kin, brother," Cullan said to his ear as they finished a glass of wine together; a rare commodity they got from trading with the Romans. Iron and amber, that was their purchasing power; and occasionally slaves, cheese and bog-butter; or even the occasional armlet fashioned by the highest smiths in the realm. Such objects however were held in enormous esteem and believed to hold spirits of their own, and as such were rarely traded. Their father was the only man in the country to own a gold arm-link, and he was as likely to part with it as his own wife.

"Better get yourself ready for the games," Rían said in passing, clapping Nathair on the back.

Nathair stood up and found himself quite drunk. The world swayed as he followed his clansmen to the center-square where the bile stood. The great tree of their clan was pure knotted ashwood. It had stood for a hundred years, or so the poets said. It was a grand thing. About seventy feet high and flushed with gold leaves. The boughs of the ashwood formed a great dome in the sky, and if you stood beneath its canopy, you could hear the tree speaking to you as the wind coursed throughout the village. The whole town gathered beneath it and began planting stakes, eager to get started.

"Nathair, you remember my good-cousin Barley?" Tadhg said as he introduced the man he'd been sat with for the last hour. Nathair remembered him well. He was a flatha of high esteem from down by the sea; a village made rich by catch and kelp.

"Glad to have you Nathair," Barley said cheerfully. He was grey of hair and owned a great smile. He wore a necklace of precious ambers, an orange wool cloak and the odd green stone upon his gnarled fingers. "I'm getting a little long in the tooth for these games. You can cover for my pride."

Nathair laughed softly and clapped the old man on the back. Tadhg winked at them all from the front. Rían was their second with Barley tailing them at the back. It was them against Cullan's men, and as expected, his brother picked his burliest soldiers to do the heavy-lifting.

"Begin!" The town Druid, Rikkard, yelled over the crowd. All around folk lifted their horns and wooped for them. It was the first sign of goodly cooperation since the aonach had begun. And as the game went on, Nathair noticed Barley struggling to hold his own. As not to shame the old flatha, Nathair dug in his heels and gave it all he had.

"Come on lads, put your back into it!" Cullan cried desperately, though his laughter filled the air.

The outcome grew quite certain. Tadhg and Rían were both bigger, stockier lads than any of Cullan's boys; and that was saying something. Nathair saw the rope-line cutting over to their side of the canopy, and then he heard it. A wild rustle from the ashwood's leaves. A gentle warning from the Gods. Nathair felt the old fear return.

He looked across the rope and saw Cullan starting to doubt himself; and knowing this was his day and heeding the warnings, Nathir suddenly eased off on the rope.

A resounding cheer went up from the spectators as Tadhg and Rían fell hard in the mud. The rope shot to Cullan's side, and Nathair did a bit of stumbling himself. Then it was done. Cullan's lads received a spool of knotted rope to wear about their foreheads for the rest of the aonach. A good excuse for the local girls to touch your hair or play with your chin, a fact Tadhg and Rían seemed all-too-aware of as they gathered themselves bitterly.

"Nice of you to let your brother win, though I wonder what your mates will think?" Someone murmured in his ear.

Nathair spun around and saw Barley standing there. The old man shot him a loose smile. Nathair grinned and said nothing. He could tell the old flatha was amused.

"You covered for me easily enough. A curious thing. If you've the strength of ten men, why did you let Cullan take the prize?"

"I only wanted to put on a good show. After all, it's his day."

"Hm," Barley said with some measure of jest and common amusement. "Just make sure you don't make him appear too tall." He nodded towards Cullan, who was now passing out kisses to the local girls. "It might just go to his head."

Nathair stood there limply, feeling like a wet rag for half a second. He felt Rían and Tadg shuffling off like a pair of dogs with their tails between their legs, and he wondered if the old flatha was right. It was the second time that day he'd been told not to give Cullan too much leniency, though his father's words still rang true. Honour Cullan. Honour the clan.

"You've traded our pride for Cullan's smile, then?" Rían scolded him. He seemed annoyed and somewhat sullen. "You really have let the wine go to your head." He didn't say it, but the meaning was clear. Both Rían and Tadgh were sick of him playing lap-dog.

"Tsk. You'll both win at sparring and get your knots, and then you can have all the girls you want," he said to them both. Though there was an apology in his expression, hidden somewhere beneath the pride.

They shook their heads and left him to it. Nathair walked away and passed through a group of giggling girls, who seemed amused by the loss. One of the druids tried to tempt him to come and bear iron against Cullan's men, but he'd had enough of games. Nathair politely turned the druid away, making all the appropriate gestures, and made his way over to Maguire's table instead.

"Aoife?" He said to his Uncle.

"Think I saw her playing in the fire over there," Maguire said strangely, gesturing hither. He was sat with his wife and son. He had gestured in the direction of the river.

Nathair left the site of the aonach and found Aoife outside the village standing over a hole in the ground which served as both a cooking pit and a watchpost come sundown. Often they'd wrap pork or wild dog in straw and cook it in the pit throughout the night until it turned good and black. There was no meat today though, only ashes, and she was mussing around in them with her hands.

"Don't tell me you're still fretting over signs?" Nathair said to her as he neared.

"You let Cullan win at games. Are you always going to let him win?" Her voice came to him, as sharp as a knife and as hungry as a lean stoat.

"Not always. Just today."

"Today is the most important day, Nathair."

"Important to you. In your mind, Aoife. Through the gift of your signs. The Gods don't whisper to me the same. They tell me what they tell me and I heed the warnings."

She spun on him. Her eyes were dark but her hands were darker. They were black with soot. She'd drawn ash-lines over her nose and temples in the shape of arrows. The arrows led towards her eyes so that she could see; and she'd clearly done it in search of answers.

"You heed them wrong," she spoke indelicately. Her face was stoic. Her eyes had shifted. With the soot around them, they resembled smoldering pits. "You think you know how to listen, but did it ever occur to you that you let your doubt rule your interpretation? Your dream was a warning, Nathair. You cannot avoid it. But you can choose how you respond to it!"

"And you think I've chosen wrong." He glared down at her, hard into her eyes.

She said nothing. She just stared back at him and then turned away angrily. When he tried to bother her, she snapped at him like a wild animal and kept digging in the ashes. He scoffed. He knew she would have no more of him.

"Fine! Dig in your ashes. ... Madwoman," he spat, then stalked off to the river. He'd had enough of women, talk and his brother. He'd take a walk and speak to the river. No one would miss him for half an hour, and the stream always brought with it good news, unlike Aoife and her prophecies.

"If I am mad, I am only mad with concern," Aoife muttered once Nathair had gone. She then looked over her shoulder and studied him. She then let out a sigh. He looked like a man who'd just fought a war, rather than won a peace.

The woods were quiet, save for the crunching of leaves. Sunlight filtered through the canopy, resembling the gilded horns of Cernnunos himself. Nathair passed by a boulder he and his brother used to climb. He pressed his fingers across it and felt the shallow grooves they had left there as children. Two interlocking lines. A symbol of brotherhood. He tried to remember the words they had said to one another, but his memory failed him.

The silence was broken by the melodic babble of the brook. Drawn by the promise of comfort, Nathair stood and made his way down the slope. The hill gave way. His boots sunk into the soft, damp earth. He stepped into the shallow water, the mountain stream rushing up around his ankles, and for the first time that day he felt peace. The cold shock was clearing the fog from his mind.

He waded in deeper, the water rising to his calves, when his foot struck something hard beneath the silt. It was not smooth, like a river stone would be, but hard and angular; and sharpened to a point.

Nathair froze. He reached down, his fingers brushing through the swirling muck, and then parted the object from the silt.

Water fell from the old, corroded metal. It was a javelin head, rusted throughout. Though it was certainly made of bronze. The shape was familiar to him. It was the same gae he and Cullan had found in this very brook when they had been but children.

He held it up. The cold metal was heavy in his palm. It was a strange, jarring sensation to find it here, and a thought passed through his mind, more piercing than any mountain water.

Cullan had thrown it away. Why? He said he'd held onto it. "A token of their childhood," he'd once said. They had fought over it many times, but Cullan had always insisted he'd be the one to keep it. If it was here, that could only mean one thing.

"A fine thing to find in the dark, is it not? A piece of the past, washed up into the present."

Nathair froze yet again. Only this time it was not due to any mountain water. He slowly turned and looked at the hill overlooking the stream. The sunlight was dim there. The hill racked in thicket and shadow, but he could make out a silhouette. The figure stood tall and still, wrapped in a dull cloak that seemed to absorb the light rather than reflect it.

"Most men look to the sun and the stars for their fate," the voice went on, stepping down into the pale light. The edge of a weathered face came about, marked by ancient runes of piss-scented woad. He was no man of their clan. He had a sense of wildness about him. A scent of dried herbs and old blood. "But some... some find their fate in the mud and the silt."

The man took another step. There was a feverish intensity to his eyes. There was no warmth in them. No familiarity. He came on like a hunter, and Nathair was keenly aware--with how deep his boots were in the riverbed, he had been cornered.

"Tell me, warrior," the stranger said, his voice sharing the same conspiratorial tone he'd heard from Aoife all morning. "Does the bronze feel heavy in your hand, or is there a certain lightness to the metal? As if the Gods have already decided it is no longer your burden to bear."

"Pray tell who are you, and how did you come to know so much?" Nathair uttered. His hairs were on end and his ears were pinned back. His hand drifted towards his sword like a cornered snake. Something about the stranger gave him pause and half a mind to worry. The dream was coming true, and he liked it not one bit. Likewise, the sun was going down, turning the sky an inky red. Strange things happen in the twilight. It was not good to be alone when the day passed into the Otherworld.

Coiling the muscles in his legs, Nathair leaped out of the brook, squaring himself up to contend with the stranger if need be. But the stranger did not seem to mind. A low, dry chuckle left his lungs, like dead leaves skittering across a field of stone. He began to descend the hill, his movements shifting and unnervingly fluid, as if he was gliding rather than walking.

"Names are heavy things, Nathair of the Snake," the way he spoke made his blood run cold. There was no respect given to the fact he was born of noble blood, only a targeted kind of satisfaction. "They bind a man to his fate. For now, you will know me as the shadow of the things you have forgotten. And as for how I know: the wind carries your story for miles around. It echoes off the mountains. It whispers in the smoke."

The stranger stopped at the edge of the clearing. The sunlight illuminated the strange, eldritch patterns scratched onto his jerkin. He was no warrior. He was one of the Otherworld folk. A creature of twilight. One who lived between the trees, whispering to their Gods for years on end.

"You feel it, don't you?" The stranger prompted, and his gaze fell to the javelin in his hand. "The dream is not a dream. It is a memory of a future that has already begun to bleed. You think you have found peace by bowing to your brother, but you have only sharpened the blade that will find its way into your shoulder."

"Curse you that you might speak frankly for half a second!" Nathair hissed. The frustration of the day, the lies, the heavy, suffocating bullshit of the feast finally boiling over. He stepped forward, wielding the bronze head like a dagger. "These are my woods. I lay claim to this land on behalf of my family, and you dare to mock me? Perhaps you've wandered too far from the fires, seer! Did you come here to warn me or just play at being prophet?!"

The stranger tilted his head at the question as if he were a curious insect, and a thin, knowing smile grew tall across his features. There was no warmth in it. Just the satisfaction of a man who had all the answers.

"I did not come here to mock you. I only speak truth, and you find it bitter." He took the final step, closing the distance and hitting the periphery of light which marked the edge of the clearing. "You act as peacemaker, but you only tread on the bones of your ancestors. You think you are protecting your brother, but you only build him a throne out of the stones of your own heart. If I speak in riddles, it is because you refuse to accept the truth in what I offer."

The stranger then lifted his hand, and it was an ill gesture. Though he pointed towards the village, Nathair felt the tide turn in the brook. For a single, lasting moment the water retreated from the stranger. It seemed to notice him. It feared him. It roiled the opposite way, turning against its natural self. Nathair looked upon it with ill content, seeing how the small fish in the riverbed floundered when the water seeped down to the stones.

"Enjoy your wine and your songs whilst the music still plays," the stranger warned, his eyes turning dark and piercing, catching the sunlight in a way that was almost unnatural. "For the moment your brother wields the white wand, his spirit will transform, and you will find that the peace you bought was the bait which drew the wolf to the fold."

Nathair had heard enough. He didn't wait for him to finish his grim prophecy. He couldn't. The air had become too thin, the sight of the river turning on itself, too difficult to account for. He rushed past the man, his shoulder brushing the stranger's cloak; and he felt an inky stillness about the cut of his clothes, like they were seeped in oil. The whole thing made his skin crawl, and without another word given to the stranger, he leaped back into the forest.

The place that had once been home, a kind memory from his childhood, was now plagued by whispers. The voices came at him from every nook, every log, every piece of tangled, twisting ivy. Nathair tripped and fell, cursed and rolled. What is happening? He thought desperately as he forced his way through the forest. Are the trees truly speaking, or has the madness of the aonach taken hold of me? He imagined sprites descending from the canopy and poking him with spears. His thoughts then shifted frantically to the village.

Rían and Tadhg. Maguire and Aoife. The former were likely playing at stones, seeing how far they could throw them, unaware that the very ground was shifting beneath their feet. And Aoife. He felt a sudden surge of protectiveness towards her. She had seen the signs. She had tried to warn him, and like a fool he had blamed it on her whims. Never again. He would trust her for as long as he lived.

He burst from the treeline, and the distant lights of the long hall called to him. He skirted the walls of the village from the outside, ran through the front gate, then went up the road and to his father's hall. The people outside startled when they saw him, some of them laughing, others worried. He barged in through the doors, throwing his weight against them.

The voices about the room fell short. He felt eyes all over his body. A few mocking laughs followed him as he shoved his way into the room and pushed past their tables. Warriors who thought his intensity was the result of a long walk in the dark. He shouldered his way through a throng of them, huddled around a pot of snake soup, and looked for signs of ginger braids or the steady piercing blue of her eyes.

"Where is she? Where is Aoife?" Nathair demanded when he caught sight of Rían and Tadhg. He wrapped his hands about the edge of their table, his knuckles turning white.

Rían's laughter died in his throat. He looked at him incredulously. "Steady on, Nathair. She's outside? Carrying casks for the clan. Said she needed to stretch her legs after the excitement of the speech."

"She went towards the edge of the clearing," Tadhg added, studying the look on his face and the sweat on his brow. His expression grew serious when he saw how touched he was. "She's of a dull mood, Nathair. More serious than usual, in fact. She wasn't drinking much either."

Nathair didn't let them speak another word. He spun around and wove through the crowd, shoving aside anyone who gave him good reason. The room had taken on a desperate air. Smoky and claustrophobic, full of long faces and haunted expressions. Their laughter reminded him of the sprites in the woods, and he cursed the Otherworld's influence on his tribe. He didn't know what was real or not. In a world that so finely toes the line between spirit and man, what was real in the smoke?

"Aoife!" He called. He'd seen a flash of red by a bloody tapestry. It depicted autumn leaves strewn amidst a battlefield. Brittle and broken, like the rusty helms and iron which sowed the ground. He tore through it, and a spat of cold struck him in the face from an open window. It came as a relief, though it brought him no calm as he scanned the long hall, searching the darkness beyond the reach of the torches.

There, standing in a world of her own, her eyes on the roofing and her expression lost to time, was Aoife. The moonlight was spilling in through the window beside her, and it highlighted the soft purse of her lips, which were turned down in thought. He saw her rocking, and he knew she was listening to the whispers.

"Aoife!" He shouted, stumbling towards her.

"Nathair," she gasped. She stood quite rigid as he wrapped his hands around her wrists, turning her to look into his eyes. A breath caught in her throat, and for a moment she simply studied him awkwardly, as if she was clinging to a dark secret. Her eyes were wide and luminous in the dark, and they held notes of fear, added to by the frantic music in the hall.

"I've been looking for you," he snarled. "My dream. It's coming true." He all but threw himself on her. His madness was extreme. He felt like a cornered animal, and he was certain the encounter with the seer had left him ill in the mind. His words fell heavily and clumsily from his mouth as told her his story, though they did what he'd seen in the brook no justice. They were the ramblings of a madman frightened by thorns of prophesy.

Aoife did not flinch away from his frantic energy. She listened well and true. The more he spoke, the more her hands found their way into the thin linen of his léine to soothe his aching heart. He clung to her as he neared the end of the story, and she hushed him with tender whispers. Her reassurance was the only thing that felt real in a world touched by smoke and shadow.

"Calm your breathing, Nathair," she told him. Her hand caressed the side of his face, and he leaned into it, shaken, eyes shut. "You speak as if the Gods have already struck the blow. Fear not, nothing has happened yet. We yet breathe. So breathe. Breathe deep the air and tell me the story again. Only this time tell it true."

"A seer, Aoife. A cold one. He appeared to me beyond the clearing and told me that it will happen soon. The peace is a lie... I am already too late."

He reached into the folds of his brat, his fingers fumbling for a moment as he searched for the object, and then he pressed the cold head of the javelin into her palm.

The metal was still cold from the brook. The verdigris stained bronze shone with a sickly luster in the moonlight. It felt disgustingly heavy, as if the weight of prophesy was contained within that small, jagged piece of metal.

Aoife stared down at the object, though she did not pull away. She traced it with her eyes, then felt across it with her thumb. She then took it in the other hand and did the same. It was only then, once she had indeed confirmed that it was real and not just a figment of her imagination, that she looked back into his eyes. The pain of recognition was like a poison arrow in the back.

"The javelin," she gasped. Her eyes were wide and searching. Her usual innocence was replaced by a thick, warrior-like clarity. She knew that it had all been real. All the whispers. All the signs in the smoke. Yet she did not blame Nathair. Instead, she came closer to him. "This seer. He was a herald," she said with certainty. Her body grounded him. She would not be parted from his side as she continued to handle the javelin head. She then reached up suddenly with her free hand, cupping and stroking his cheek.

"This does not mean what you think it means, Nathair. This is not death for you, nor us. This is our moment. Our time. We must be willing to confront it, with Tadgh and Rían at our side, we cannot fail."

Then she looked at the long hall. At all those twisting, shifting faces in the fire. The hall was clad in smoke, wreathed in it. It was coming from the braziers and the candles, and the people shifted in waves. It was a thing born of twilight, and as the moon darkened outside, it offered a cold reality: they were no longer welcome here.

"We cannot stay here," Aoife whispered. Her eyes were wide as they then locked onto his. "This place is no longer safe," and she backed into him, taking him by the hand, and led him out of the hall. He followed her at once, shouting at her back.

"And if it is all just a delusion? If we are just truly drunk and mad? Perhaps the spirits have just possessed us for one night and traded our faces for that of laughing jackals!"

Aoife did not answer right away. The cold slapped Nathair in the face yet again as she threw open the door. There was no one outside besides their own shadows, which had grown long with fear and doubt. The silence of the woods pressed around them, and the sky was black and white with stars for miles around. She looked down at the javelin head in her palm, the cold metal biting slightly into her palm, a sharp, stinging reminder of its existence.

Then, she looked back at him; and there was no hesitation in her gaze. No lingering spat of uncertainty. No small flicker of doubt.

"If we are mad, then we are mad together. If it is a delusion, then let it be a grand one. Nathair, if we have been made laughing jackals by the Gods, then it will do us no harm to be prepared. You have spent the whole day doubting my wisdom, and I understand, you are a fucking fool and deserve not the fate the Gods have in store for you, but for the sake of us both, and your friends, I ask you nicely: come to your senses. It is time to accept the truth. We are hunted. We are wanted. The Gods intend to make an example of us both, and in their mercy: they have given us fair warning."

A lank chill shattered Nathair's reality and replaced it with a staggering perception. It made him humble. Whatever he was before that moment broke like glass, and the pieces that remained were all he was left with. He felt himself compartmentalising what she had said and did what he could do to put them back together, and what was left afterwards was gratitude. He came to her without a word and thumped his forehead against her own; and she sighed and nudged her nose against his.

"We are twine," she whispered, a slight breathlessness to her voice. "Born of the earth. Seeded in its marrow and blooded in its salt. We will live out this day," she promised him. Her teeth were bone-white, eyes beautiful. They were red-rimmed and stoic as they looked right through him. "Fear not, my warrior and friend. For you have courage and the strength of ten men. Cullan does not know the manner of snake he corners."

"Very well," he said at last. His voice dragged, and he felt nothing for her but love. He cleared his throat, then mastered his emotions, "To the fools then. Let's see if we can wake them before the world does."

He reached out, his hand finding her arm, and led her back towards the heavy oak doors of the long hall. They would collect Rían and Tadgh, then flee for the hills; or die in the attempt.


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tl;dr: "Us against the world/ride or die" plot set in a medieval/realistic landscape with hints of Celtic lore, magic, and light fantasy elements (dreams, prophecies, seers, animal spirits, ghosts, etc). Bravery/honour/clan are the core themes. Aoife serves as Nathair's rock.


Oo-ahhh, I really like the low magic Celtic vibe: stone circles, druids, fiddles and folklore. Have you heard this? I don't enjoy writing romance as the main focus but if you'd wanna do a multi-character, multi-plot, Celtic world-building project, I would love that!

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Oo-ahhh, I really like the low magic Celtic vibe: stone circles, druids, fiddles and folklore. Have you heard this? I don't enjoy writing romance as the main focus but if you'd wanna do a multi-character, multi-plot, Celtic world-building project, I would love that!


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This is sick. This is the kind of stuff I look for every day but can only barely manage to scrape up. Feel free to share more if you have it. I'm about to write more in just a moment. I'm thinking of publishing it as a small set of novels, so I've been doing raw research on this topic to make it more engaging for Celtic-lovers.

In all honesty, I'm keen to do anything on this subject as it will continue to fuel my inspiration for it. Even if it is just collaborating on a "World" thread which essentially maps out the world of Nathair/Aoife. Landmarks, locations, with some role-play interspersed inbetween (and-or poetry).

Genuinely though, fantastic song. Do you know the meaning of it?
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I'm glad you like it! The video I sent you has two scots gaelic songs in one, the beautiful hypnotic first one is named, Gu De Niste Ni Mise which means, what will I do? It's also known as the gaelic work song. If you love it, like I do, you'll be able to search gaelic lament and find other melancholy stuff you like. What's special about these gaelic laments is that most of them are ancient and you kind of have to inherit them!

Here's another version of Gu De Niste Ni Mise by Jennifer Van Der Harten who went on to join the band Omnia who are like, celtic music legends, haha.

Here's another version. It's kind of shocking that their views combined are under 10k, right? It makes me feel like they're magic spells that can only charm certain people, haha.





Celtic mythology has so much to draw from!
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I'd be interested in this
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I'd be interested in this


Amazing!







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Everyone else was faster than me at expressing how cool your prompt is, so I hope you appreciate my kudos to your profile pic artwork instead and how much I also love big, burly gay knights.
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Everyone else was faster than me at expressing how cool your prompt is, so I hope you appreciate my kudos to your profile pic artwork instead and how much I also love big, burly gay knights.


Thank you so much! I love the border of this PFP. I thought it looked awesome on the forums!!

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All the music recommendations are great. Yeah, I was also stunned to see the first video (and subsequent videos) you sent me had so few views. The band having 90 mil views added up though. They're awesome. I suppose this is a pretty niche interest. (I mean, it was only a thing 2300 years ago. Jeez people... Like, come on!)

I'd be interested in this


If you guys are all interested in writing in a thread I could create a short entry in a seperate forum which would allow you to post some character sheets? But honestly, I'm enjoying the engagement here as well (especially your music and moodboards Syn). Let me know what you think. Personally, I think creating a "Celtic moodboard" would be great. Character sheets, world lore and vibes all mixed together?
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