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The character looks good. But like Azure mentioned perhaps you should tone down the more edgy stuff. As for character name i can give you a couple of names, and see if you like them.
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The character looks good. But like Azure mentioned perhaps you should tone down the more edgy stuff. As for character name i can give you a couple of names, and see if you like them.

please do. Im trying to figure out what things to tone down, outfits an obvious one, and we are working on the name but what else?
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His backstory mostly. And perhaps some more weakness to his powers.
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understood, still would appreaciate name ideas though. will make the backstory less edgy. probably redo basically all of it
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@Eviledd1984 also understood will add more weaknesses
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Weaknesses:

Bright lights
Fire/heat

My brain ain't workin. Send any ideas you think would be a good fit
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Revised backstory: the family stuff partially the same, taken in by grandpa who ran a dojo.
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im really bad with names currently i have Iranon Valerius Sigismund. which i dont know how i feel about it


Don't sleep on simple names. If you're looking to go exotic, look up names and naming conventions that fit the heritage you imagine for your character. And more over, consider the genre you're writing in.

In short, don't feel like you need to reach for a name just for cool factor.
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Don't sleep on simple names. If you're looking to go exotic, look up names and naming conventions that fit the heritage you imagine for your character. And more over, consider the genre you're writing in.

In short, don't feel like you need to reach for a name just for cool factor.


that is good advice, but i got Iranon Valerius Sigismund from a random name generator. im just honesty really bad with names, and i seem to get in a bad habit of re-using the same name for all my OC's
(rn Olliver)
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that is good advice, but i got Iranon Valerius Sigismund from a random name generator. im just honesty really bad with names, and i seem to get in a bad habit of re-using the same name for all my OC's
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Like I said, simplicity can be your friend on this matter. I usually run a search on Google for name ideas. Example: search 'German surnames' and pick out one that I like the sound or meaning of.
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Iranon Herbert Lovecraft?
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Also, there's no shame in reusing/recycling/carrying over characters. Given your submission here is comparable (in terms of power set) to the one you're running in Heroes Rise, carrying over the name would work just fine.
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@IAmTheIsland true, but after a bit i do feel bad about it
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Here are some weaknesses that I found on a superpower wiki.

-Distance, mass, precision, etc. depend upon the knowledge, skill, and strength of the user, and their power's natural limits.

-Light Manipulation, Light Generation, and other light based powers are especially effective against this power.

-As shadow is a dark area produced by a body coming between rays of light and a surface, light may strengthen shadow magic or may even be a requirement in some universes.

-May be unable to create darkness/shadow, being limited to manipulating only from already existing sources.

-May have to be in sync with darkness, whether their own or the source of their power.
May become affected/corrupted through extended exposure.
Umbrakinetic Immunity/Shadow Absorption

I am unsure if any of these will help you, but i do hope it does. As for names here is a website i use for name generation.

https://www.name-generator.org.uk/?i=26xn2aix
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I assumed I couldn't make shadows lol, hence his outfit designed to have as much internal shadow/darkness as possible
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Mhm fair point.
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Work's been kicking my ass but post hopefully coming tonight
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Finally posted sorry for the long wait.

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When you have your post done. I can edit my post to include Sarah.
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