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Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Big Sister AM
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Ahh, thanks. I'll work on that.

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Added this to my own document;
"The book said that they usually would never be written down, 'cause clans feared that their Hiden would be stolen, but that when my great-great-whatever-grandfather realized that they were close to extinction, after the clan was spread by all winds, he wrote in down, just in case. That turned out to be the right decision, I guess."

Would that work?
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Krieg
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I dunno, you'll have to wait on Prince. I personally think it would make sense. Might also make for a good side plot, maybe the book gets stolen/lost at some point, risking your clan's hiden.

Of course, if it's a dojutsu, does it not manifest by itself? It can be learned by others? Just curious.
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Prince
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A book of Hiden would not be a terrible idea, although I would much prefer it to be "scrolls"; with the idea that all of the wandering members of her clan had a few scrolls, but none of them had them all. I dislike the doujutsu she has, mostly because there was a large plot revolving Sai, who literally stole doujutsu and could apply a cursed seal to people that would give them diluted versions of kekkei genkai, including doujutsu. I do not feel it would be a good theme to create a hiden doujutsu.
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Big Sister AM
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I will make it a scroll, rather than a book and add another jutsu, removing the doujutsu. Or could I just make it a Soaring Soul thing (something along the lines of the shintenshin, just without another body and with the "soul" just soaring about like a bird), or should I think of something completely new?

(Note: I don't read stuff or anything about the series; I only know what I've seen and remember (and my brain is stcky like glue, so I remember a lot), so if I'm wrong about this, terribly sorry.)
Kreig; About the doujutsu manifesting by itself; all the doujutsu we've seen in the anime/manga have been Kekkei Genkai, which cannot be taught, but lie in the blood of the user. If the doujutsu was not part of a Kekkei Genkai, but was just a jutsu that just happened to be called a doujutsu because it had to do with ones sight, it could be taught to just about anyone. That was what I was thinking.
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Prince
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http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Third_Eye

Make a personal variation of that jutsu.

Doujutsu do not inherently have to be Kekkei Genkai, no. As a matter of fact, before Sai ever starting stealing Kekkei Genkai, his father had a jutsu called Sage Transformation: Hawkeye. It was a doujutsu similar to, but weaker than Byakugan and would work as long as he held the rat symbol in his hand. The issue with doujutsu is that they literally morph the body, and doing that normally requires some form of Kekkei Genkai or advanced medical knowledge. In the case of Sai and his father, Talon, they had the Jugo Clan Kekkei Genkai, and they used Sage Transformation to do it.
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Big Sister AM
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How about it make it an actual bird? Like a companion.

Infusing their avian compaion with their own chakra, the user will be able to use this bird as a sort of third eye. The user him-/herself does not decide where to go, which is why an avian companion over just any bird is needed. This Hiden allows for the user to see the world from the air, through their soaring bird.
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Prince
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You could do that with any summon. lol You're overcomplicating something. If you want the ability to see from a bird's eye view, you can go about it in many ways. The easiest would be an avian summon for sightshare or the third eye technique (or a variation)
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Big Sister AM
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Well, I didn't want a summon because those requires contracts and I found it quite unlikely for her to have written a contract already.
She doesn't have anything she can manipulate (like sand) to make the eye and... well, she needs something to make the eye of. Without the connection between her and the media used (Like Gaara had with his sand and Yondaime Kazekage with his gold dust) it just seems like it wouldn't work. The user of the third eye has to connect the third eye to their optic nerve, which they can do by the chakra, is suppose, but they have to be able to manipulate and control the eye as well. Otherwise, it is pretty useless...

Am I making sense?
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by j8cob
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Prince said
You two may talk to me on Skype. This is only an adaptation of an offsite RP of the same setting/plot. Elsewise, you two have no purpose in commenting on this specific social experiment.


Actually, I believe there is a purpose here. Just one you evidently don't like.
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Prince
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A) There is literally a Konoha aviary. It wouldn't be beyond logic to have her with a simple hawk summon for messages/the jutsu.
B) You have Hiden. You have butterfly Hiden. Make a special butterfly if you want specifically made for this jutsu.
C) Creativity. This is a supplementary jutsu. How you do it is meant to be interesting and fit your theme.

I don't care if you use a bird or your Hiden, either way is fine. But keep to your theme.
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Big Sister AM
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There. Gonna make a series of Butterfly Secret Techniques, then. Fine by me :)

Cho no Hido [+]
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Prince
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You don't need to make yourself blind. I feel like that's too large of a drawback. But, the jutsu is acceptable.
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Big Sister AM
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If a butterfly is used for each eye, they essentially get blind while they are using the technique, because they are watching from the butterfly's eyes. Gaara has to close the eye that is linked to the sand eye when he uses Third Eye, so I thought it was appropriate. When she is only using one butterfly, she can see just fine out of the eye the butterfly is not linked to. :)
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Prince
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As you so wish.
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by IVIasterJay
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Could I be a member of the Hozuki Clan? I figure national borders and keeping various techniques secret from the other lands would have gone out the window under Sai's regime, which would make it possible for him to be living in Konohagakure instead of Kirigakure.
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IVIasterJay said
Could I be a member of the Hozuki Clan? I figure national borders and keeping various techniques secret from the other lands would have gone out the window under Sai's regime, which would make it possible for him to be living in Konohagakure instead of Kirigakure.


Same with the Kaguya?
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by IVIasterJay
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Crab said
Same with the Kaguya?


Aren't all the Kaguya extinct?
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Crab
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IVIasterJay said
Aren't all the Kaguya extinct?


In the canon, they are. Same with the Mokuton wielding Senju, but there are regular Senju out there
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Prince
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I could accept a Hozuki, albeit I would prefer a backstory similar to the specific family associated with your Hozuki sided with the resistance and thus settled in Konoha after the fall of Sai.

Even if some Kaguya were alive, Sai most likely slaughtered them all. They didn't exactly have strong village ties to become refugees.
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Crab
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So is it the same with the Aburame? I just think it would be possible for at least one Kaguya to live, even if he/she didn't hold Shikotsumyaku.
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