Sounds good to me. :)

Oops, posted on the wrong section of the thread. ( ._.)

EDIT: a time-skip would indeed be nice.

0AngeldeviL0 said
Uhm, I don't ALWAYS go online. On summer vacation, I go online alternately, or sometimes even twice a week. On school days, I go online once a week, because of certain academic reasons. Is my schedule reasonable and excusable enough so you won't "accidentally" erase my character?

Very, very, very strange. This CS was buried underneath our crazy antics, and I'd like to finally go over this one. (ty HylianRose for begging telling me about this CS)

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The way you described time-travelling is, by far, one of the stranger abilities I've seen in this roleplay. Of course, feedback is a drug that helps anyone.

-I... am not sure what to think about her changing her past. Sure, I think it's acceptable for her to do so a few times in her life, but if she is able to change her own past fairly frequently (even around present time), then that means she is somewhat capable of changing the pasts of others, making her pretty overpowered in a way. This is one of the few sketchy things I see in this CS. It's not specific enough- at least, not yet.

-How is it revealed that the uncle knows about Keath's powers? Actually, does he still meet Keath when her father's friend takes her in?

-Is time-travelling the only power she has? Powers are not limited to only supernatural abilities. Just pointing that out.

-Her personality may not get many people to have their characters interact with Keath in some way, but judging by your schedule, it might seem to be a logical thing to give her that persona. This one's personally up to you for modifications if you want to.

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She's looking good! I just want more details, as well as some clarifications.

EDIT: Complete~!


Height: 174 cm (5’ 7”)
Weight: 55 kg (121.3 lbs) <- Don’t try this at home kids. Not a good weight to be in at this height.
His hair color is orange (dyed).

Name: Leroy Yew

Age: 20

Gender: Male

Species/Race: Human

Powers: Synes Ink – Leroy is, without a doubt, a genius. Paintings, wooden carvings, pottery, etc… If it’s art-related, he’s done it. Among the many countless creations he’s made so far, his ink paintings receive the most attention. Using only black, red, blue, and yellow ink he creates works of art that captivates the eye and send shudders down people’s spines. Sometimes literally.

Using ink as his medium, Leroy can make people feel certain emotions by painting pictures, or leaving a mark on the person with his hand. If he paints something with a specific emotion in mind, whoever looks at the painting will experience that emotion. Generally looking away from the painting will allow the emotion to dissipate, but similar to the suspension bridge effect sometimes the illusory feeling he has the person feel can end up triggering their real emotions which tends to linger.

If he leaves a fingerprint on someone after dipping his finger in ink, he can leave them a vague sense of the emotion he wants them to feel. A mere fingerprint is not very strong and it may just leave the person more confused than anything else really, wondering why they suddenly felt a certain way. A complete handprint, however, is much stronger. For example, if he instills ‘fear’ into someone with an ink handprint, they will feel frightened and can later go into a panic attack or even go insane if the mark is left on the person for several days. The handprint initially just makes the person feel the emotion, and over time the effect will grow stronger. Adding more handprints of the same emotions will make the effects stronger, and adding different emotions can produce more complicated effects or result in cancelling each other. Washing the mark away (or removing the piece of clothing the mark is on) will remove his effect on the person, but the emotion the person feels won’t disappear right away.

Weaknesses: He can’t use his ability without ink. He can create a very weak substitute with his blood, but the potency of his power is essentially halved.

Leroy’s sense of touch seems rather ‘dull’ compared to most people. This can sometimes be a source of strength (e.g. he can ignore a lot of pain and keep moving), however usually this causes a lot of trouble for him. It takes him longer to notice he’s injured, meaning he can move that area and make the injury worse. He can go outside in scorching heat and not realize the ‘discomfort’ he feels is actually a sign he’s getting heat stroke until he eventually falls onto the ground.

Perhaps as a result of his dulled touch, he does not handle impairments to his sight very well. For example, darkness. He needs to be able to see properly. Covering his eyes, being in complete darkness, or basically anything that makes him feel ‘blinded’ will make him panic and lash out.

Personality: He smiles warmly, keeps his words and actions polite, and always goes out of his way to reach out to help people. How scary. Leroy’s kindness is not an act, however, the warmth is a lie. He is pointlessly kind, and can be pointlessly cruel in return. A child can selflessly rescue a butterfly from a spider’s web just because they felt it should be done, but another can rip off the butterfly’s wings without feeling a single tinge of remorse or guilt. He is a child without guidance. Innocent, yet cruel.

Background: When he discovered his ability exactly is unknown, but his parents believe Leroy’s behavior began to change around the age of 12, when he was beginning to gain recognition as an artistic prodigy. From experimenting with all sorts of different styles and media, it was around this point that he became oddly focused on ink paintings in particular.

Over the years, Leroy brought many different classmates to his home, introducing them as ‘friends’ coming over to play. But his parents began to notice an odd pattern. After a while, Leroy’s ‘friends’ always stopped visiting and he would bring over new children they had never seen before. At the same time, strange rumors were surfacing about him at school. They said that the people around Leroy always seemed to go mad. His ‘friends’ were always haunted by strange nightmares that persisted even when they were awake, or always laughing and enjoying themselves as if they were within a never-ending euphoria.

His parents talked to him about this issue, and Leroy did not deny these claims and merely smiled at them, telling them not to worry because those children were not actually his friends. Frightened for the first time by their own son, they did their best to understand what his powers were like and to teach him not to abuse it but… To no avail. They sent him off to Athalia Academy, hoping that there was someone that could do what they could not.

Study:
Basic Core Classes: History
Electives: Art, Philosophy



3, just 1 left for me if this gets approved. :P

I'm all for time skipping and Leroy is a super cool character idea.

Theobromine said
I have another character. I haven't written his background yet because I want to see if the rest of him can get approved first. 174 cm (5’ 7”) 55 kg (121.3 lbs) <- Don’t try this at home kids. Not a good weight to be in at this height.His hair color is orange (dyed). Leroy Yew 20 Male Human – Leroy is, without a doubt, a genius. Paintings, wooden carvings, pottery, etc… If it’s art-related, he’s done it. Among the many countless creations he’s made so far, his ink paintings receive the most attention. Using only black, red, blue, and yellow ink he creates works of art that captivates the eye and send shudders down people’s spines. Sometimes literally.Using ink as his medium, Leroy can make people feel certain emotions by painting pictures, or leaving a mark on the person with his hand. If he paints something with a specific emotion in mind, whoever looks at the painting will experience that emotion. Generally looking away from the painting will allow the emotion to dissipate, but similar to the suspension bridge effect sometimes the illusory feeling he has the person feel can end up triggering their real emotions which tends to linger.If he leaves a fingerprint on someone after dipping his finger in ink, he can leave them a vague sense of the emotion he wants them to feel. A mere fingerprint is not very strong and it may just leave the person more confused than anything else really, wondering why they suddenly felt a certain way. A complete handprint, however, is much stronger. For he instills ‘fear’ into someone with an ink handprint, they can go into a panic attack or even go insane if the mark is left on the person for several days. Washing the mark away (or removing the piece of clothing the mark is on) will remove his effect on the person, but the emotion the person feels won’t disappear right away. He can’t use his ability without ink. He can create a very weak substitute with his blood, but the potency of his power is essentially halved.Leroy’s sense of touch seems rather ‘dull’ compared to most people. This can sometimes be a source of strength (e.g. he can ignore a lot of pain and keep moving), however usually this causes a lot of trouble for him. It takes him longer to notice he’s injured, meaning he can move that area and make the injury worse. He can go outside in scorching heat and not realize the ‘discomfort’ he feels is actually a sign he’s getting heat stroke until he eventually falls onto the ground.Perhaps as a result of his dulled touch, he does not handle impairments to his sight very well. For example, darkness. He needs to be able to see properly. Covering his eyes, being in complete darkness, or basically anything that makes him feel ‘blinded’ will make him panic and lash out. He smiles warmly, keeps his words and actions polite, and always goes out of his way to reach out to help people. How scary. Leroy’s kindness is not an act, however, the warmth is a lie. He is pointlessly kind, and can be pointlessly cruel in return. A child can selflessly rescue a butterfly from a spider’s web just because they felt it should be done, but another can rip off the butterfly’s wings without feeling a single tinge of remorse or guilt. He is a child without guidance. Innocent, yet cruel. - TO BE COMPLETED - Study: History: Art, Philosophy3, just 1 left for me if this gets approved. :P

jenkins

So now we have the painter. Awesomesauce!

Let's get to some feedback.

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-The ink idea is pretty much the bread & butter highlight of this guy, and I like it!

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...Yeah. There isn't much to say about him. Good job!

Driving Park said
I'm all for time skipping and Leroy is a super cool character idea.

Thank you! :D

NarayanK said
So now we have the painter. Awesomesauce!Let's get to some feedback.-The ink idea is pretty much the bread & butter highlight of this guy, and I like it!...Yeah. There isn't much to say about him. Good job!

Thank you. :3 Actually, the effect of his handprint IS supposed to be gradual and additive over time. Lol. Apparently I didn't make it clear enough. I'll edit the description (there's a typo in there anyway) for his ability when I get the history in.

I love coming up with abilities. It's so much fun~~~! <3

Ooo... Nice. I'll add him to the Listing. :P

And NK stole mah line.... Leeeeeeeeeeeory Jenkins

>.>'

I'll make sure he doesn't eat any chicken. XP

@Theobromine Leroy looks pretty awesome :D Looking forward to seeing his powers in use xD

@HylianRose If this time skip were to happen would we need to wait for everyone to agree to it? O.o Sorry just curious ^^'

FaithsRose said
@Theobromine Leroy looks pretty awesome :D Looking forward to seeing his powers in use xD

Thanks! I shall have create lots of evil joyful moments with his powers. >:)

FaithsRose said
@Theobromine Leroy looks pretty awesome :D Looking forward to seeing his powers in use xD @HylianRose If this time skip were to happen would we need to wait for everyone to agree to it? O.o Sorry just curious ^^'

A majority of people have agreed to it so I went ahead and sped it up just a bit. The Rp is going really slow. 155 posts and we haven't gotten past day one. I'm not going to be strict on it but I want to get to action soon. I'm being impatient. -cough-

HylianRose said
A majority of people have agreed to it so I went ahead and sped it up just a bit. The Rp is going really slow. 155 posts and we haven't gotten past day one. I'm not going to be strict on it but I want to get to action soon. I'm being impatient. -cough-

phew, glad about that xD Personally, my inspiration was starting to dwindle...-.- Action is going to awesome, especially with this many powers swirling about xD I shall keep an eye out for the time skip then ^^

Wow, big awesome crow thing person sure did overreact about running into someone XD

FaithsRose said
phew, glad about that xD Personally, my inspiration was starting to dwindle...-.- Action is going to awesome, especially with this many powers swirling about xD I shall keep an eye out for the time skip then ^^

First day of a roleplay.

The moon from Majora's Mask comes closer.

Sh-t just got real. Two days remain.

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On another note, I highly guarantee that you will enjoy the action. HylianRose's been working hard even with a busy schedule, so it's not a risk to expect a lot out of this roleplay in general!

NarayanK said
First day of a roleplay.The moon from Majora's Mask comes closer.

Don't worry I got this....

NarayanK said On another note, I highly guarantee that you enjoy the action. HylianRose's been working hard even with a busy schedule, so it's not a risk to expect a lot out of this roleplay in general!

damn...I was doing so well at being patient as well >.<

FaithsRose said
Don't worry I got this...

On another note, I'm glad to be typing on a freakin' keyboard again.

xD

Like I said, let's get to day two and maybe we'll see some action. ;)

@NarayanK Nicely done xD

@HylianRose ok -.-

I'm as patient as a bartender would ever be.