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I'm still ready to accept your character once the history is all set up. Repost it when you're done, for convenience.
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@Zugzwang I'll have the complete sheet up by today. Thanks!
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After two days of working on him, I think my CS is finally ready. It should be noted there may be a minor change to his back story based on what Thunder decides on something.

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@Zarkun, he looks like a fair character, but I noticed something that I got a bit confused over.

And the best way to do that was to become a Hunter and show that it didn’t matter if you were human or Faunus, you could do good.

In a society where faunus are treated unfairly, this sentence sounds to me like something akin to "a white kid went to college or became a cop to make a point to the black community". It just doesn't translate well. Especially since he was 12 when he was accepted (Ruby was 15) - that might just appear to the faunus as human privilege.

I mean, I have no power, so pay me no mind. But if you could elaborate on that, for my sake, I'd appreciate it! :-)
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Heeere she is! My girl Cyra :D Look on her and be in awe! Or don't, because then she'll get embarrassed and try to hide XD

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He was twelve when he went to Signal, not Beacon. I mean, I did the math and Signal accepts students, bear minimum, from 12-14 if Ruby still had two years when Ozpin took her into Beacon. He went into Beacon exactly when he was supposed to. As for that sentence, I meant that he was trying to prove a point mainly to other humans, though I see where you're coming from. One of my great challenges as a writer is putting what I'm thinking into decent writing. Let me rethink that a bit and maybe I should be able to clear it up.
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He was twelve when he went to Signal, not Beacon. I mean, I did the math and Signal accepts students, bear minimum, from 12-14 if Ruby still had two years when Ozpin took her into Beacon. He went into Beacon exactly when he was supposed to. As for that sentence, I meant that he was trying to prove a point mainly to other humans, though I see where you're coming from. One of my great challenges as a writer is putting what I'm thinking into decent writing. Let me rethink that a bit and maybe I should be able to clear it up.


Ah, okay! I must have misread whenever he got accepted. That makes a lot more sense.
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I have a question. At the time this RP takes place, would it be plausible that Raye would be rejected from the Atlesian military due to being a Faunus? I'm trying to work out his history without screwing anything up.
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@Thundercrash Are you ready to form the Short Girl Squad?
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@Thundercrash Are you ready to form the Short Girl Squad?


Meral finally found someone shorter than she is! XD
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<Snipped quote by Dragonbud>

Meral finally found someone shorter than she is! XD


Short enough to join the Little People Society. http://www.lpaonline.org/faq-
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There we go. Hopefully that exit makes a bit more sense than what I had before.
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I doubt it. Atlas is a military government, and Faunus are strictly better soldiers than humans: they have displayed better physical capabilities and can see in the dark. I don't find it credible, or good for the plot of the RP, for atlas to reject them out of hand. There'd probably tension with the rights revolution being sort of shitty for everyone, but I expect Atlas was probably the first to accept Faunus for government service.
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@Zugzwang Okay then. Thanks for the information. I want to make the best story I can for everyone, and this ends up working out better for me, anyway.
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Well, if you want him to _think_ that his discharge was entirely due to his faunushood, I expect that would not be a thought out of the ordinary. There's still oppression and discrimination within the ranks, though probably not systematically enforced, so maybe he's taking the one signal factor and blowing it up in an attempt to absolve himself of wrongdoing.

That sort of victimhood thinking always makes great stories, but maybe that's just me.
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@Zugzwang I went a different route- one that still has potential for conflict in the future- but I may use that idea for another character later on. Thanks for the input, but this makes more sense for the character. Speaking of which:



...I'm finally done. :)
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I prettied up and flavored my sheet in the character tab, if anyone's interested.
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This RP has a lot of cooks in it XD
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Yeah, that was something I noticed. I might change something.
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@Zarkun In Raye's case, I figured being a good cook was a consequence of developed senses. Besides, who wants to just eat field rations all the time? I taught myself how to cook in real life just so I could have meals instead of eating stuff out of a can.
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