[OOC] Ascension: King of Kings (Open CS)

[Dark Light]

@Ashevelendar

Hope your exams went well!
I assumed there was variety, I can modify my post of need be.

[Ashevelendar]

@Dark Light It's ok. I can work with that.

[Ashevelendar]

@Kibaro It seems I have two characters ?

I only have Ashe , not Atlas

[Rai]

I don't care for posting orders unless in combat. Just don't post back to back.

[Pineappletumble]

@Ashevelendar
pardon me I seem to have posted moments after you, I'll edit my post apropriately

[Ashevelendar]

@Pineappletumble That is exactly what I wanted to say too xD

1 minute between our posts :)

[Rai]

@AshevelendarYour attempt at lying mostly depends on @Kibaro and if he wants to try to see through your lie.
If he chooses to we may have to initiate combat on @Dark Light

[Kibaro]

will post tomorrow, too late and tired to do it now, sorry

[Ashevelendar]

@Rai She wasn't really lying. After all. Her family is a known one in the city , right ? A merchant family is a known family. I think.

[Kibaro]

@Ashevelendar@Pineappletumble@Dark Light
hope the way i went about it was ok with you guys, of course you can always do stuff that changes what i said and done

@Ashevelendar was not exactly your outcome but...close? maybe, but i think either you or your IG char misunderstood the guard situation (not sure which), that being said, Kuvira's team wouldn't have responded like that, sorry, but yeah that's how I would've seen it, if you think something should be changed about the interaction, let me know, if not i put the "let's meet tomorrow to discuss the events" for a second chance at doing what you would've liked maybe...also could you please remove/change/edit the last 3 lines where my guards speak if that is ok with you?

@Pineappletumble did it like that because i was not sure wether Ashevelendar missunderstood the guard situation or not (what Rupal said as well), but as i said, we could meet the next day to talk about what you wanted to say, if that's ok with you

[Kibaro]

@Rai also if you have time to look over my/our posts, at least for me, let me know if i'm doing something wrong, like too much/little talking, controlling stuff that i shouldn't too much, repeating a certain word/s too much and so on, stuff like that :)

that goes for everyone if they notice anything for me, please let me know :) i want to improve but not sure where, so yeah feedback whenever you feel like it ^.^

[Pineappletumble]

@Kibaro
That's completely fine, thanks for the response. I'm also here to get better at Rp in general so your feedback on my posts will be great as well.

[Kibaro]

@Pineappletumble
so far so good, i like how you narate :) can't say i've seen anything that caught my untrained critique eye :)) haven't seen how you handle dialogues, but you're doing well :) someone more experience might see more tho :)

[Ashevelendar]

@Kibaro Just read it. Looks ok.
I made a mistake there I saw that. I thought that those were guards , not soldiers. Didn't realized.

[Rai]

So far so good guys. Let me know if there are any missing details you need to know. I'm still working on the system but I'll have your stats up this weekend.

So far. Everyone is afraid of @Dark light s character Oron.

[Kibaro]

@Rai
if there's a curfew, how come the entertainers and the crowd around it is allowed on the streets?

[Rai]

@Kibaro It's not night. Only a hour has passed

[The 42nd Gecko]

@Rai With good reason. Velvet has absolutely zero combat utility. Sure, she can heal you after it's done, but being a necromancer first and foremost, she's not exactly gonna white mage you back into the fight instantly.

[Rai]

I'm hope I can finish up the state sheets today (sunday) but as of right now I feel like total shit. Heading to bed after this. Hope I feel better in the daylight

[The 42nd Gecko]

@Rai Hey, no worries, take your time. Don't make this a chore for yourself or you'll just burn out.