Hidden 8 mos ago 8 mos ago Post by Musaki Hajime
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@ClocktowerEchos LOL pretty much! XD

Now then, as for your CS, it looks good we just need a few things to tighten up.
- As hilarious as it is, it'd help if the name was shorter. 5-7 names at most. (Example: Percival Fredrickstein Von Musel Klossowski deRolo III)
- The only other thing I can see is making it more serious, overall. Things like the goals. Though I support the use of the kazoo and all of its glory. In the end, try to keep the spirit of your character while keeping it official, if you can.

Do those changes, then we're good because otherwise:
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@Musaki Hajime On it boss I really need to spot fucking editing and beautifying my damn CS too Q_Q
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@Musaki Hajime On it boss I really need to spot fucking editing and beautifying my damn CS too Q_Q


lol I was surprised to see it all set up like an actual file on a solider xD it gave it flavor. Also, I can't wait to see how your character is going to act
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@Marquise

All and all, we have no complaints with your CS. So that means you're:

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@Musaki HajimeAlright, made some edits, hopefully they're good enough, made him a bit more serious, hopefully it balances out okay. Also, all of the quotes do relate back to Elyot in some form so they're more than just decoration. ^^
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I should hopefully have a bio set up tomorrow!
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@Musaki HajimeAlright, made some edits, hopefully they're good enough, made him a bit more serious, hopefully it balances out okay. Also, all of the quotes do relate back to Elyot in some form so they're more than just decoration. ^^


All set! =D Looks good my friend~
Welcome to the UNF!

I should hopefully have a bio set up tomorrow!


Excellent! =D Can't wait to see it =)
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Thanks very much, @Musaki Hajime :) . Looking forward to seeing the other characters and getting this show on the road!
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@Marquise No problem! It was very well done!

You and me both!
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Looks good to me. Could you post the CS to the CHAR page on the main RP? =D I'll give it the full look over and decision there

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We're slowly filling up the slots we have available.

Tonight, i will post an explanation of combat and how abilities will be used.
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Come one, come all! We still have plenty of spots left and ready for the picking. Feel free to check us out and see what we have to offer =)
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Im interested in this RP, still accepting?
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@comanche
Sure am!
roleplayerguild.com/topics/156151-valk..

Come on in and check us out! If you want to make a character, post it in the OOC section and me and my Co-GM will look it over, ASAP =)
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