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The Kingdom of Noreik has seen better days. Fields and farms lay barren, all the young man are at war now. The enemy, the brutal invaders of Kazgrad stand at the gates, plundering, raping and pillaging. The army is losing ground, and the castles at the borders are slowly crumbling. The legendary knights and heroes of Noreik are no more than bloating corpses.

Desperate times call for desperate measures. King Roland turned to those he shunned and persecuted. He turned to vile sorcerers and necromancers, enemies of the faith and cultists of evil.
"Bring me back the heroes of old! My army needs beacons of hope and justice in shining armor!"
They did what he demanded, but he did not get what he wanted.




The bodies of the fallen were placed in a circle around the black monolith. King Roland stood there in shock, fear and regret as the cultists started their chant. "It is for the kingdom...", he whispered to himself. Smoke filled the crypt and the lights began to flicker as the choir reached it crescendo. Unnatural shadows seemed to dance in the smoke, whispers in an unknown and terrifying tongue offered forbidden secrets. The King spoke a silent prayer for forgiveness, even though he knew it was too late for that. Everyone in this room forfeited his chance for paradise.
The whispers left and beastly screams took their place. What seemed to be a gigantic black spider with the face of a woman crawled on the monolith. A warlock positioned himself in front of the monolith chanting like a madman, while the prisoners of war were brought in.
Roland took of his crown and tried to hold back the tears. He had gone to far. One after another the Prisoners throats were slit, the blood colouring the floor red.
It was then a soft whisper was heard. The rattling of bones. It was done...








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Shit. I don't even have the time for this and for some reason it caught my eye. I'll watch for now.
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Are the heroes bound my arcane powers to serve the kingdom? Like they have their own free will but they can't do anything to harm Noreik or abandon it.
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@MonkeyBusinessI thought about that myself and my decision for the moment is that they are bound to the kingdom, however they have free will just cant act against king and country.
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finished one
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@Cuccoruler I'm sorry but I have a whole list of problems with that character. First of all no 12 year old girl is an expert strategist, how could she since she has no real experience? And also who would revive a 12 year old when the realm is in danger?
Also if she was crushed by a boulder her body would be to destroyed to be revived and she would definitely not look like an average girl.
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Valid points, but note that she looks 12, not necessarily is 12.

But then, a lack of a clear age always bugs me just a little bit...

Edit: For the sake of formatting (new point entirely) I suggest having the CS encased in [code] tags.
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@ArenaSnow Well if she looks like a 12 year old she most likely is around that age. And thanks for the tip I did not think of the that!
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@ArenaSnow Well if she looks like a 12 year old she most likely is around that age.


He'll have to confirm what the age is himself, but from the CS I get the idea that she's older than she looks. It's not impossible, in a real world context, for people to look as much as 10 years off their age (I know one person who looks 20-something who's in her 30s >.>).

After this Rita gained a reputation within the kingdom and was often looked towards from strategist of the kingdom for advice when they were stumped about a tactic.


Unless Cucco literally meant the reputation came overnight, I'd give it a few years to have developed.

Either way, there's considerable room for improvement and clarification. That said, I don't think Cucco literally meant the character was 12. That would still leave her being rather young (short of someone being a total genius, it would take someone in their 20's+ to reach the tactical know-how she apparently has) and the necromancers would have a hell of a time piecing her together to be presentable after [insert Borat crushing reference here].
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@ArenaSnow Well it's nice of you to defend the character but I don't think it is in any way your job.
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@ArenaSnow Well it's nice of you to defend the character but I don't think it is in any way your job.


He still has a few fatal flaws that would turn me off accepting it if it was my own RP, so it's not much of a defense. :p
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@the narrator @arenasnow I was honestly testing the waters with that character, I was in no way expecting her to be accepted honestly. Good to know where the limits are!
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This looks very cool! I do so enjoy the chance to play undead! And the chance to play them as good guys is just so completely impossible to find these days!
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ok I have a few more ideas, does the hero have to be human? I mean, like can they be an animal so long as they come with a human hero?
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@RagrarThen I hope you get on board!

@Cuccoruler Who in their right mind would go to all the trouble to get the body and perform a demonic blood ritual too revive a dog? :D
I mean if your hero has an animal companion that would be okay but only if the animal was an mandatory part of the heroes legend.
Also I would say minimum age is about 25.
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Plan was for it to be a bear and a person (still deciding on gender)
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@Cuccoruler I would like a little more explanation on why she is such a legend but other than that much better.
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@Cuccoruler I would like a little more explanation on why she is such a legend but other than that much better.


Your going to have to explain what makes a legend, I figured taming a bear and fighting with it would make it a legend
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