[OOC] Fate/stay Night - War of the Fourteen Magi - High Casual

[1Charak2]

Kaneda Kitomuru WIP

Name: Kaneda Kitomuru

Nicknames: Whisper

Age: 24

Gender: Male

Master of: Archer

Command Seal Location: On his forehead inbetween his eyes.

Wish: To bring the people that killed his sister to rightful justice, which in his mind is death and bring death to all with the will to kill.
Origin: Anger
Appearance:

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Personality: Kaneda doesn't speak much, his voice box was damaged as a young child, so when he speaks, he speaks in a low whisper

Biography:

Magecraft Section:

School of Magecraft: Reinforcement

Skills/Spells List:

Martial Arts Training
Weapon Proficiency: Nunchaku

- Increase Speed (4):
- Increase Strength (4):
- Increase Durability (3):
- Sonic Scream (3):

Amount of Magecraft Mana: B

Other: (for anything that I may have missed)

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Servant

Class Name: Archer

Nicknames: The Sad Knight

Alignment: Lawful good

Servant of: Kaneda Kitomuru

Catalyst For Summon: Piece of the round table

Weapon(s): Noble Phantasm Bow and a sword for defense

Wish: To earn his right in battle and to be forgiven from his King.

Abilities:
- Mana piercing wind blades (b): When he focuses his energy into his bow it grants him the power to breach through magic based armour as well as their normal armour, this drains him of his mana and cannot use all the time.

- Song of Death and Glory (a): Archer hones in on his target firing multiple shots into the same spot over and over again pushing them to the point where they can't move anymore and begin piercing through their armour, he then harnesses his energy into a fine shot that shoots into the vitals before imploding inside of his target.

Harp of Healing/Harp Performance (c): Is a Skill that gives the user the ability to exorcise and heal others by playing a melody with a harp.

Admonishment to the King of Knights (b): Removes a buff from opponent.

Grace of the Unexpected Birth (b): Charges own Noble Phantasm.

Skills:
- Magic Resistance (b):

- Swordplay (c):

Independent Action (b):

Class Abilities:
- Clairvoyance (a):

- Long range shots (b): Archer is able to fire from long distances, over 100's of km away with ease.

Base Parameters:

Strength: B

Endurance: B

Agility: A

Magical Power: B

Good luck: E

Noble Phantasm: A

Noble Phantasm:

Name: Failnaught Fantasia of Lamentation

Quote:
"I fight on the battlefield to prove myself worthy to my king."

Rank: A

Type: Anti-Army

Range:
Short-Mid Range - Quick strikes from strumming his strings
Long-Extra Long Range - Needs to hold longer, builds up strength

Description: He wields a bow that possesses multiple bowstrings resembling, and is in fact a string instrument. This bow does not launch arrows, but invisible sonic vacuum blade to cut off foes. Due to the nature of this weapon, he can attack with a slight motion of one finger.

True Name:

True name & Bio

Tristan

No matter what he does, he seems sad - and beautiful.

One of the Knights of the Round Table from Arthurian legends. His Class is Saber, but he is often summoned as an Archer due his renown with a bow. The tale of Tristan and Iseult, the woman he loved, is a legend boasting outstanding popularity in Europe.

Tristan is a child born from Rivalen (king of Leonois) and Blancheflor, the younger sister of Mark, prince of Cornwall. However, his environment made fitting to call him a "child of sadness" To begin with, his father Rivalen died in battle without ever being able to see Tristan's face. His mother Blancheflor died post partum, soon after naming the boy Tristan and entrusting him to a loyal subordinate of Rivalen, Loire.

Afterwards, Tristan became a knight that served under his uncle, King Mark. Tristan served the king as a good knight--- and the king too had a deep trust in this handsome knight,

But, one day, Tristan fell in love with a woman named Iseult. No, he was made to fell in love.

The tragedy probably lied in the fact that Iseult was the woman who King Mark loved and vowed to marry. Before long, thanks to the admonition of King Mark's courtiers who envied Tristan, he was forced to leave the royal court.

Afterwards, he came to marry a woman who had the same name of Iseult by coincidence, but still his feelings for the past Iseult only grew stronger.

Eventually, Tristan collapsed due to being poisoned in a certain battle and, on verge of death, wished to meet with Iseult. "A white sail if she comes. A black sail if she does not--" Upon seeing the boat carrying Iseult, Tristan's wife Iseult whispered the following. "A boat with black sails is coming this way" The tale of Tristan was put to an end by means of a modest treachery (lie) towards a husband who, despite taking a wife, never tried to love her.

Appearance:

In Armour

In normal clothes

@Kessir Tarkin

Questioning how he can remove buffs without being a caster.

[Kessir Tarkin]

@1Charak2 Yeah I am not sure exactly but it was included in a wiki about his abilities here http://typemoon.wikia.com/wiki/Skill and just gave me the title but no description, so when I then looked that up it gave me the description of what you see in the CS. Maybe it's a screw up?

[vancexentan]

@1Charak2I'll allow it as long as it only removes buffs on those who were royals in their past life.

Removes one enemy's buffs.
Reduces their critical attack chance for 3 turns.

is what grand order credits it with on their wiki. It also only removes buffs that increase their statistics such as mad enhancement.

[vancexentan]

Is anyone going to do anything in the IC? Jeanne has no interest in meeting new servants at the moment, and no one's responding to Walter.

[Kost Alter]

Is anyone going to do anything in the IC? Jeanne has no interest in meeting new servants at the moment, and no one's responding to Walter.

@vancexentan

I thought we were waiting for more masters to arrive? That's what church man said, wasn't it? And my collab scene with Charak is also done, so I don't have much to post atm. sorry :(

[1Charak2]

<Snipped quote by vancexentan>

I thought we were waiting for more masters to arrive? That's what church man said, wasn't it? And my collab scene with Charak is also done, so I don't have much to post atm. sorry :(

@Kost Alter

Agrreed.

I"m waiting for Cu totabitha.

[vancexentan]

@Kost AlterWhat I was going to is have one of you post for Walter then have another master arrive.

[Kessir Tarkin]

@vancexentan Have I been approved or because I should have some time to post if need be tonight.

[vancexentan]

@Kessir TarkinAre you done with your character? If not I have not approved of it yet.

[Kessir Tarkin]

EDIT: thanks to @1Charak2 I have made a couple fine detail changes such as range and ability or buff removal.

Kaneda Kitomuru

Name: Kaneda Kitomuru

Nicknames: Whisper

Age: 24

Gender: Male

Master of: Archer

Command Seal Location: On his forehead inbetween his eyes.

Wish: To bring the people that killed his sister to rightful justice, which in his mind is death and bring death to all with the will to kill.

Origin: Anger

Appearance:

[+]

Personality: Kaneda doesn't speak much, his voice box was damaged as a young child, so when he speaks, he speaks in a low whisper when he does speak, and even then it sounds sickly, raspy and can only be heard if you were close up to him. Instead he relies on his body language act as his speech as well as using his cell phone to display messages to his companions when the message cannot be conveyed by body language alone. He is athletic and calm, tries to be humorous in his comments in order to hide his inner anger and sadness but can be quick to release that anger if someone were to instigate hostility towards him. He loves a good fight and will jump in whenever he can.

Biography: Kaneda was born with a twin sister, the two did everything together. Unfortunately during his birth the ambilical chord had wrapped around his neck and severely damaged his vocal chords. When he was old enough to talk, all that would come out were sounds loud enough to be a whisper. So his sister became the more outspoken of the two often speaking for him when they were involved in a discussion.

It wasn't long to find out that the twins were given the gift of magi and were to be contestants in the next holy grail war. Their connection as twins somehow allowed them to be able to transfer the power to one antoher and increase on of their powers by double. So their parents sent them to a clan of magi that had no contestants of their own and were willing to teach them in order to not be left out of the war.

At first, they only did physical training, learning different styles of martial arts such as Jeet Kune Do and Kyusho-Jitsu, as well as the art of Nunchaku because it was a quick and effective style of fighting and the weapons could be easily concealed and used as a surprise attack. Kaneda and his sister would train for years in order to make sure that their bodies were hardened and strong.

After the physical training came the time to use their magic. Kaneda learned that he was able to silence and dampen the noise around him as well as focus on silencing a particular item if need be. His sister was gifted with the opposite and was able to amplify her voice to levels that would shatter the foundations of buildings as well as amplify the noises around her to be able to hear footsteps of anyone trying to sneak around her.

Everything was going well and it looked as if the two were going to be strong candidates for the war. Until one day while training Kaneda's sister slipped and landed on a stool, snapping her neck and paralyzing her from the neck down. This devestated the two and he almost gave it all up to take care of his sister. But the magi made him a deal, that if they had his sister transfer all her power over to him they would take care of her and after they one he could wish her back to full health. He agreed and that night they did a ceremony in order to make the transfer complete. When Kaneda awoke he could feel her power surge through him as well but also felt that something else was wrong. The magi would not let him see her as they said she needed to rest from the strain. He reluctantly agreed and proceeded to the process of summoning a servant.

Using a piece of the ancient round table that was kept in safe keeping by this clan of magi he was able to summon the archer. They bonded and trained together learning about his new partner. It was then that he was also presented with a pair of nunchuks that were given a trump card, he was told that when the nunchuks would impact against a target it would absorb a little bit of his opponents mana and release it in a small burst of energy back at his opponent. This would make himself more prepared and able to fight during the war. He eagerly accepted this new gift.

But still, even after all this, something felt wrong and after much discussion with Archer, he and his servant demanded to see his sister. After much refusal, they pushed their way into her room, where to Kaneda's shock found her dead, lying on a bed, her eyes hollow, her skin pale and her hair white. After he and his servant threatened one of them they were told the horrible truth. That they had set him up to become the sole participant, that although their energies were strong together they were even stronger if one of them were to take the power that they shared. So they plotted how to get her out of the way, they planned and executed their plan by changing the surface area around her so that no matter what she did she would slip and the stool was controlled by magnets under the floor in order to quickly move it into her path as soon as she fell. Making her neck snap and bringing forth the events that took place afterward.

Kaneda didn't know what to do, in a blind rage he tapped into his sisters power and released a shocking scream, the first time any sound would clearly come out of his voice. It brought the building to the floor, killing all that were inside except for Kaneda and his servant. But he knew all he did was take out some of the grunts that were in the building, the ones that mattered, the ones that planned for this to happen were still alive and on the run. He knew then what his wish was then, to have all the people killed of the clan that made him lose his beloved twin sister. Archer understood and felt that it was just, to have those responsible to pay in kind.

So they continued to train with eacother, Kaneda with a new fire igniting in him trained to use his and his sisters powers to win the war.

Magecraft Section:

School of Magecraft: Taiji

Skills/Spells List:

Martial Arts Training (Jeet Kune Do and Kyusho-Jitsu - Pressure point fighting style)
Weapon Proficiency: Nunchaku
- Enhance Noise (4):
- Sonic Scream (4):
- Absolute Silence (4):
- Dampen Noise (6):

Amount of Magecraft Mana: A-

Other: Carries the set of nunchucks in the back of his pants.

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Servant

Class Name: Archer

Nicknames: The Sad Knight

Alignment: Lawful good

Servant of: Kaneda Kitomuru

Catalyst For Summon: Piece of the round table

Weapon(s): Noble Phantasm Bow and a sword for defense.

Wish: To earn his right in battle and to be forgiven from his King.

Abilities:
- Mana piercing wind blades (b): When he focuses his energy into his bow it grants him the power to breach through magic based armour as well as their normal armour, this drains him of his mana and cannot use all the time.

- Song of Death and Glory (a): Archer hones in on his target firing multiple shots into the same spot over and over again pushing them to the point where they can't move anymore and begin piercing through their armour, he then harnesses his energy into a fine shot that shoots into the vitals before imploding inside of his target.

Harp of Healing/Harp Performance (c): Is a Skill that gives the user the ability to exorcise and heal others by playing a melody with a harp.

Admonishment to the King of Knights (b): Removes a buff from opponent, only affects royals.

Grace of the Unexpected Birth (b): Charges own Noble Phantasm.

Skills:
- Magic Resistance (b)
- Swordplay (c)
Independent Action (b)

Class Abilities:
- Clairvoyance (a):
- Long range shots (b): Archer is able to fire from long distances, up to 3 kilometers away with ease.

Base Parameters:

Strength: B
Endurance: B
Agility: A
Magical Power: B
Good luck: E
Noble Phantasm: A

Noble Phantasm:

Name: Failnaught Fantasia of Lamentation
Quote:"I fight on the battlefield to prove myself worthy to my king."
Rank: A
Type: Anti-Army
Range:
Short-Mid Range - Quick strikes from strumming his strings
Long-Extra Long Range - Needs to hold longer, builds up strength
Description: He wields a bow that possesses multiple bowstrings resembling, and is in fact a string instrument. This bow does not launch arrows, but invisible sonic vacuum blade to cut off foes. Due to the nature of this weapon, he can attack with a slight motion of one finger.

True Name:

True name & Bio

Tristan

No matter what he does, he seems sad - and beautiful.

One of the Knights of the Round Table from Arthurian legends. His Class is Saber, but he is often summoned as an Archer due his renown with a bow. The tale of Tristan and Iseult, the woman he loved, is a legend boasting outstanding popularity in Europe.

Tristan is a child born from Rivalen (king of Leonois) and Blancheflor, the younger sister of Mark, prince of Cornwall. However, his environment made fitting to call him a "child of sadness" To begin with, his father Rivalen died in battle without ever being able to see Tristan's face. His mother Blancheflor died post partum, soon after naming the boy Tristan and entrusting him to a loyal subordinate of Rivalen, Loire.

Afterwards, Tristan became a knight that served under his uncle, King Mark. Tristan served the king as a good knight--- and the king too had a deep trust in this handsome knight,

But, one day, Tristan fell in love with a woman named Iseult. No, he was made to fell in love.

The tragedy probably lied in the fact that Iseult was the woman who King Mark loved and vowed to marry. Before long, thanks to the admonition of King Mark's courtiers who envied Tristan, he was forced to leave the royal court.

Afterwards, he came to marry a woman who had the same name of Iseult by coincidence, but still his feelings for the past Iseult only grew stronger.

Eventually, Tristan collapsed due to being poisoned in a certain battle and, on verge of death, wished to meet with Iseult. "A white sail if she comes. A black sail if she does not--" Upon seeing the boat carrying Iseult, Tristan's wife Iseult whispered the following. "A boat with black sails is coming this way" The tale of Tristan was put to an end by means of a modest treachery (lie) towards a husband who, despite taking a wife, never tried to love her.

Appearance:

In Armour

In normal clothes

[Kost Alter]

@vancexentan I've posted for the sake of progressing things by a bit, but I'm fine waiting for Kessir's characters to be approved.

[vancexentan]

Harp of Healing/Harp Performance (c): Is a Skill that gives the user the ability to exorcise and heal others by playing a melody with a harp.

Admonishment to the King of Knights (b): Removes a buff from opponent, only affects royals.

Grace of the Unexpected Birth (b): Charges own Noble Phantasm.

All those belong under skills

- Mana piercing wind blades (b): When he focuses his energy into his bow it grants him the power to breach through magic based armour as well as their normal armour, this drains him of his mana and cannot use all the time.

Should be renamed to Mana Burst - Wind and placed under skills as well. I'm not even sure it should be on him he's not credited with it in or out of fate/grand order. Jeanne's basis for having flame burst is the fact that her original ruler phantasm was her burning in flames for a suicidal attack.

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Your main character should not be anywhere near A- magic levels if he was given magic in the first place. It should be around E or D levels which will hamper Tristan. A level are for mages around the level of top tier magi or those with a strong/legacy name in the type moon universe like Archibald, or Edefelt. Your character was literally born without magical circuits it's ridiculous to think he'd have that high a power level. Shiro has to make a contract with the world, and Rin had to give her magical energy to him to use Unlimited Blade works. The reason I allowed it for Charak is because Kiyohime needs it to actually do anything and without opening any cans of worms I won't say anymore on the subject. The following need descriptions.

Sonic Scream (4):
Absolute Silence (4):

[vancexentan]

@Kost AlterAlright thanks.

[vancexentan]

Taking a small break from posts not feeling well today.

[Kessir Tarkin]

EDIT: Changes to spells to be more clear.

Kaldera Ginjiro

Name: Kaldera Ginjiro
Nicknames: Little Dragon
Age: 27
Gender: Male
Height/Weight: 180.34cm/83.9kg
Master of: Lancer
Command Seal Location: Left Shoulder
Wish: To gain the powers of a god, to become one himself
Origin: Combat

Appearance:

What he looks like

Personality: Kaldera is a bit of a loud mouth, always wanting to talk and build up his ego, he likes to joke around and is often smoking a joint and usually gets high before a fight begins. He believes that it relaxes his body to make weird movements and able to attack at angles that would not be normal as well as heightens his senses. When it comes to fighting he is completely focused, merciless and deadly, while he fights he often taunts his opponents wanting them to make a mistake based on their anger. He loves sweets, especially hard sugar candies that require some time to eat. Teamed up with lancer he often asks to be trained by him as well and shares the love of battle. He understands that he can be killed during the Holy Grail War but has accepted that as fate and continues to fight.

Biography: Kaldera was born of a mother from Okinawa, Japan and a father from Beijing, China. Both of them were magus', their marriage was an arranged one, combining two magus families into one in order to produce a child that would hopefully be strong enough to participate and win the Holy Grail War. Kaldera might have been the first born but he wasn't the only one, he had two other brothers and a sister. They wanted to make sure that at least one of their children were gifted with the magical circuits. Kaldera and the second born kid were born with the circuits, the other two were not, the ones that were not connected were able to live normal lives. To be the faces of his families legacy, while he and his one brother were plunged into the depths of their home and the underground, never to be seen in public or known of.

Kaldera first released his circuits when he was 4 years old, his parents were overjoyed and began his training. His parents were both each skilled in a different art, his father was a elemental mage specializing in the earth and his mother was a mage that specialized in witchcraft using potions and curses to make her strong and her enemies weak.

As he trained with both his parents he learned many different skills that would make him a unique fighter. He became well trained in the earth element, how to be strong from it, to use the mana from the ground and make his feet act like roots, absorbing the energy around him like a tree in the forest so that he could perform stronger spells if need be, he also learned how to manipulate the earth and how to use certain elements, especially metals that would aid in his fighting. He even made the skill stronger by using two long bladed chains as weapons, it would allow him to make direct contact with his opponents and use his earth magic to sink into the person's skin and begin doing internal damage to the person as well as the magical circuits that were within them.

His mother being a witch was less entertaining at first, often reading books about herbs and plants, their properties, but it was when he learned what they could do. He learned that some are toxins that can make the human weak, dazed, sick, sleepy, love struck while also creating remedies for his own ailments, healing injuries as well as enhancing oneself by increasing strength, speed, durability if done correctly. She also had a secret technique that she would teach him if he put effort into this skill. So he did and actually learned from her and finding what he could make quite amazing. He was soon able to make some toxins/poisons as well as minor healing and remedy potions.

When he learned what he could from his mother she kept her promise and taught him a secret technique that her family had designed using a curse by having his chains act as a medium, he can use an incantation while they are contained in his chains and release his opponents Od and focus it with the mana surrounding them to the point where it can be focused in front of Kaldera's palm and released as a focused energy beam causing severe harm, even death, depending on the amount of time he can spare to keep the incantation going to collect more Od and mana. She says that it is a form of magic called Formalcraft and is what lesser mages use to harness mana instead of relying on their own Od, the difference with theirs is that the power and speed to use it is enhanced by the fact that he is releasing and harnessing ones own Od and mana to use against them. With what might take a hours to conjure he can do in minutes.

Through all of this something bothered him, and that thing was his brother, who also was a magus but was never trained with him, he was trained separately. Kaldera would ask his parents about what they were doing and they would respond by telling him that they wanted to see what what skills grew differently between his brother and himself to make their abilities unique, that his brother was given secrets about his fathers skills in earth magic. So he thought nothing of it and continued his training without much more inquiring, it was not a competition to him and it only made him work harder.

The next part was his physical training in the art of physical combat, learning the chinese fighting style of Wushu to allow smooth defensive movements and calming of the body through breathing techniques as well as use of formidable strikes to subdue his opponent, he also was taught the Indian martial art Marma Arti (hitting the vital spots) which if a master were to use could kill or paralyze a person by hitting one of the 108 vital nerve points, Kaldera had only learned enough to distrupt and temprorily disable someone, but combined with his skills with the chains and his earth element magic he has learned to be just as deadly.

He was mentally trained as well, to enjoy combat, to ignore pain as well as focusing on his senses and to trust his instincts. He would often be placed in sparring matches at this stage of his training and his parents would praise him when he won and shunned him when he lost. It made him train harder, became more arrogant, his skin became hard, his bones and muscles strong, his will became strong as well and with each fight becoming easier he became more cocky and developed a taunting attitude when fighting, but most importantly to his parents, it made him become accustomed to violence and was taught that combat should end in the death of one of the combatants. That it was the truest form of combat.

This type of training would continue if not get more and more difficult, where he fought older, more experienced people either in the art of magic or in the art of hand to hand combat and was placed at disadvatages all the time and would often enough have to fight to the death.

This went on until he reached the age of 27 where he would meet his final test, he had to fight a man in a mysterious costume that covered his face, only showing his eyes. Kaldera's parents told the two that this was their final test, that they were the two greatest warriors of their families and that they would need to fight each other to the death in order to find out who would be the chosen one for the Holy Grail War and be able to take on the ritual in order to summon a servant.

Kaldera took the challenge with a smile on his face, finally all his training would show that it had paid off in this moment and would be able to attain a servant, a high honour. His opponent was quick to strike, a water mage, keeping Kaldera at a distance, he used his chains to block off the minor spell attacks and worked his way closer to his opponent, only to find that the man was also skilled in hand to hand combat. The fighting would continue on for hours as neither one showed signs of stopping, it was until Kaldera was able to get his chains to hit two vital points by the neck and made his chains wrap around the man and began to use his earth magic to spread his chains into the mans body and cut his magic connectors. As the metal did it's work he proceeded to walk up to the man now on his knees and began his incantation, he pulled the mask off the man. It was his brother! He began to cry out to Kaldera, begging for his life, Kaldera frowned and became angry, why beg for mercy? That was not what they were raised to become, he felt that his brother had lost his way and granted him freedom, in the form of death by grabbing his brothers head, pushing it forward with his left hand, watching and feeling his brothers Od leak from his body and began focusing into his right palm, he then continued his incantation, his brother screaming at this point but it would not help him, he gathered the mana around him and focused all the energy to his right palm and when he felt that it was right he struck hard into the back of his brothers head, energy pierced through the skull and blasted his brains all over the floor. He had won! His parents hugged him for the first time, he had never felt such joy.

He was then given something that was called a catalyst that would be used in order to summon a servant, it was a portion of fine gray hair wrapped and sealed in a box. He was told that this hair belonged to one of the greatest warriors of China (he was given the name of the man but told never to reveal it to anyone) whose hair was shaved from his head after his murder and finally acquired after a long hunt from his father. He was a man paired with the right master would be able to win the war and become champion.

It was soon after that he began the ritual to summon his servant, he concentrated hard on the man and used the catalyst during the ritual. His hard work had paid off and he was granted the Lancer servant, a master in his own right. The first thing he did was challenge his own servant, after a quick battle that ended in Kaldera losing he realised the gap that was between them. He asked the servant to train him how to become such an efficient fighter as he. Lancer told him that he lacked skill in channeling his Qi, another form of energy that does not require mana or od but from the spirit. He would continue to train with his servant in the ways of Qi and would work his hardest to close that gap in time for the tournament as they got on a boat to Japan.

Magecraft Section:

School of Magecraft: Witchcraft / Earth Element
Skills/Spells List:
Skills:
- Martial Art: Wushu (B)
- Martial Art: Marma Arti (E)
- Weapon Proficiency: Chains (A-)
- Knowledge of Plants (C)
- Potions/Poisons (D)
- Rooted to the earth (D): He must stand still for this to work, he is able to channel mana from the earth to him if need be to restore magical energy, also allows him to feel large vibrations in the ground from a distance of 1 km away, although if someone is sneaking or using magic to soften their steps he can no longer feel them. If he moves at all the bond is broken and he has to wait for a time to do it again.

Spells:
- Metal Splinters (3): When his chains pierce the skin he can make some of the metal from the chain go into the body and form wedges that can be manipulated to cause pain and discomfort depending on how hard he focuses on it. Allowing Kaldera a chance to escape, strike at his opponent, or position himself better.
- Metal Skin (2): Forms Metal armour around himself for a short time protecting him from taking damage, the longer he is in this form the weaker he becomes when he changes back to normal.
- Chain Prison* (5): Kaldera wraps his chains around his opponent and activates this spell, the chains anchor themselves to the ground and the spikes pierce into the flesh and begins to cut into the magical circuits interfering with the magus' ability to use magic. 10 second incantation to use spell.
- Take Your Final Breath* (5): His most powerful spell, he wraps his chains around his opponent much like his chain prison, instead of holding them there though it digs into their magical circtuis and begins realeasing their Od, Kaldera is then able to channel and foucs the energy with incantations, the longer he says the incantations the stronger the spell becomes, it even takes the energy from the mana around him, a form of Formalcraft, he then focuses the energy into the palm of his hand and can realease it in a blast of energy. If the incantation is broken the spell is broken as well. 15 second incantation to use spell.

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When using these spells, Kaldera must be completely focused on using the spells, if interrupted in any way the spell is broken, the chains no longer penetrate into the magical circuits and the magus can once again use magic, if anything they will feel pain from it.

Also if high enough magical attack or defense, it can be dodged or deflected.

Potions and Poisons Knowledge:
- Healing Potion (Can heal minor wounds like cuts, scrapes and bruises) (D)
- Antidote (Must have knoweldge of the poison being used) (D)
- Heightened senses potion (Makes 5 senses stronger for a time) (D)
- Weakening Poison (Makes person feel weak for a few minutes) (D)
- Searing Pain Poison (Causes injuries to feel intense pain, more so than they normally would) (D)

Amount of Magecraft Mana: B-

Other: Has two 10 foot long chains, made of the strongest bonded metals, at the ends for two feet are sharp spikes that protrude from the chains and on the ends are pointed fleur de lis shaped blades that allow him to stab into his opponents while also allowing him to catch them when he pulls the chains back as well as can be used as hooks when he has them wrapped around someone or an object.
Carries a book with him that his mother had given him about plants and their properties for potion/poison making.
He carries a holster with 10 needles 2 of each of his poisons, he is able to throw these and the impact acitvates the needle pushing the poison/potion into the person.

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Lancer

Class Name: Lancer
Nicknames: Divine Spear Li, Demon Fist Master of the Bajíquán
Alignment: Natural Evil
Height/Weight: 166cm/60kg
Servant of: Kaldera Ginjiro
Catalyst For Summon: Hair shaved from the man himself upon his death
Weapon(s): Six Harmony Great Spear
Wish: To continue to prove himself and raise his legend as a warrior

Abilities:
- Martial Art: Bajíquán

Skills:
Chinese Martial Arts: A+++ Chinese Martial Arts is his personal skill. A Chinese rationality. A count of how much one has mastered the martial arts that made becoming one with the universe its objective. The degree of difficulty for learning this is of the highest level and, unlike other Skills, A Rank is finally at a level one can say to have "learned it". Upon reaching +++, one is an expert among experts. While summoned as a Lancer, he has mastered the baji quan - including spearmanship.
Sphere Boundary: B When someone enters his sphere he is gains an advantage of defense, able to dodge and move out of the way of an attack.
Juezhao: B Nullify the properties of C ranked armor protection and below but cannot break through magical barriers.

Class Abilities:
Magic Resistance: D

Base Parameters:
Strength: B
Endurance: C
Agility: A
Mana: E
Luck: E
Noble Phantasm: -

Noble Phantasms:
Name: Shen Qiang Wu Er Da: Divine Spear, No Second Strike
Quote: "There is absolutely no contradiction to this spear that is exalted as the Divine Spear!”
Rank: -
Type: Anti-Unit
Range: 2~5
Description:
Shen Qiang Wu Er Da.

God Spear, No Second Strike is the spear technique of Li Shuwen. Similarly to "Tsubame Gaeshi" and "Wu Er Da", it is a technical skill perfected to the point of being sublimated as a Noble Phantasm. It has the same effects as the Assassin-class "No Second Strike"**, but the range was broadened by holding a spear. From the anecdote of "I pierced the flies perched on the wall without scratching the wall", one can guess that the precision of his movements is also no different from when unarmed.

**

It is not a true Noble Phantasm, but rather the quintessence of his martial arts where all of his hard strikes, even those meant as a diversionary strike or a feint, are enough to snatch away the opponent's life. He was an expert martial artist with strength that surpassed that of others, but the principal of "engulfing the opponent with Qi being put into practice was thought to be more important than physical strength. One theory states that he did not just defeat opponents with the destructive power of his fists. Those defeated by his techniques did not suffer from the damage to their internal organs, but rather from what in the present would be called circulatory shock. This Noble Phantasm is the case of "when a Heroic Spirit's martial arts becomes his one and only asset, the 'skill' itself is sublimated as a Noble Phantasm."

The technique of "engulfing with Qi" does not have a fixed title as a technique, and it is an idea that just slightly resembles the Cosmic Orbit methods seen in the Taoist discipline. Zhou Tian is a kind of training method in which Qi is cultivated by enclosing the body and mind in Qi, revitalizing the whole body and allowing for the resonance and amplification of the Qi. One goal of the training is to fill one's body with Qi and to fill one's own Qi in the surrounding space. It has been speculated whether or not Li Shuwen "engulfed his opponent with Qi" by utilizing the practice of molding the space filled with his own Qi in order to construct his own territory. Those who have been "engulfed with Qi" would have some of their senses dazzled, entering into a heightened state of tension and paranoia, and in the case a direct impact is driven into the nervous system of an opponent in this state, it would either give the feeling that their nervous system was under almost unendurable strain, or their heart will feel like stopping due to a reaction in the pneumogastric nerve.

This technique skew his target's nervous and circulatory systems as well as Magic Circuits. It disrupts the internal Magic Circuits like a tornado, and in a Servant's case, the magical energy connection to one's Master can no longer function properly for a time.

True Name

Li Shuwen

Lancer's True Name is Li Shuwen, a legendary martial artist from China who, despite born in modern times, carved many legends. A Chinese martial artist from Yanshan County, Hebei - Cangzhou (1864~1934). Having been born in the deathbed of the Qing Dynasty, Li Shuwen distinguished himself soon after beginning to take lessons in Bajíquán, ascending to the point of being extolled as the strongest in the history of Chinese martial arts. A prominent martial artist in the history of Chinese martial arts, renowned as "a second strike is needless, so long there is one it will suffice". Otherwise he is known as Demon Fist Master of the Bajíquán. Rather than learning 1,000 techniques, he personified a literal one-hit kill by thoroughly polishing up a single technique.

The progenitor of the Li clan's branch of Bají, Li Shuwen excelled in the use of spear to the point of being nicknamed "Divine Spear Li". The "Six Harmony Great Spear" that he used was a basic weapon of the Bají-branch and, if one is to accept this extreme logic, it can be said that the unarmed techniques of the Bají-branch (the Bajíquán) are nothing but preliminary steps to learn the techniques of this great spear.

It is said he have brought too much hatred due to killing too many opponents and finally had his life ended by being served poison from the victims relatives.

Appearance:

[vancexentan]

Anyone have any comments on his cs?

[1Charak2]

Anyone have any comments on his cs?

@vancexentan

Range of the earth thing, bit much.

Take your final breath seems to have too many usages if its draining mana from the enem and so does Chain prison, as they both DIRECTLY interfere with Magical circuits DOING DAMAGE TO THEM PHYSICALLY.

[vancexentan]

@1Charak2In his defense any mage with a satisfactory magical attack, or defense can just straight up negate it by not letting the chain touch them, or if it does blow him away shortly before he attacks them. It's up to him to come up with a satisfactory response to your question however the way I see it working down is for him to actually need to get very lucky, or pick his circumstances to even get the attack to start.

[Kessir Tarkin]

Yes, each of these attacks are not quick release spells, if you want I can add timing for the attacks to take place, also as what was said mages of high defense or magical attack can defend against the chains. The main thing is the spikes in the chains need to have directly contacted and penetrated the skin in order to do so. Also I would add that since these spells need time he is left a little vunerable, which he is open to attack, in that case he is either knocked off or has to release. Either of those releases the wedges in the body and reconnects the circuits in the persons body giving them back their powers, might be a little drained but still able to fight unless he was given the time to fully enact his spells.

Thanks for the input and what do you think of that?

@1Charak2@vancexentan

[1Charak2]

Yes, each of these attacks are not quick release spells, if you want I can add timing for the attacks to take place, also as what was said mages of high defense or magical attack can defend against the chains. The main thing is the spikes in the chains need to have directly contacted and penetrated the skin in order to do so. Also I would add that since these spells need time he is left a little vunerable, which he is open to attack, in that case he is either knocked off or has to release. Either of those releases the wedges in the body and reconnects the circuits in the persons body giving them back their powers, might be a little drained but still able to fight unless he was given the time to fully enact his spells.

Thanks for the input and what do you think of that?

@1Charak2@vancexentan

@Kessir Tarkin

Pretty good actually, okay I am fine with this now.