Hidden 7 yrs ago 7 yrs ago Post by Angry Friend
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I just wrote the backstory for a D&D character that i'm making and I wouldn't mind to have some feedback from the talented folks around here.


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Fairly simple, pretty decent. Structure works, though you might want to throw the text into a program that gives you red squiggly underlines for typos, and check your use of caps as they are rather inconsistent.
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Dion JIHAD CHIQUE ® / NOT THE SHIT, DEFINITELY A FART

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@Angry Friend Why are you capitalizing random words?
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