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I'll make some changes.
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Finished the edits. Still feel that the end of the backstory could be improved upon and maybe the weaknesses as well, but I'd rather have your opinion on it before making any more changes.
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Finished the edits. Still feel that the end of the backstory could be improved upon and maybe the weaknesses as well, but I'd rather have your opinion on it before making any more changes.


Alright, looks good. Please read the IC before posting and if you need any clarification on events just ask!
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@Lord Wraith Alright, I've read through it and know what's going on. I assume I start at Alexander's house, transition to him going to the class, finding out about the search for the missing student, and then have him become part of the search itself correct?
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@Lord Wraith Alright, I've read through it and know what's going on. I assume I start at Alexander's house, transition to him going to the class, finding out about the search for the missing student, and then have him become part of the search itself correct?


Yep, up to you if you want to write all of that out though. You could write him as though he was in class the entire time and then go from there. Up to you! Just wanted to ensure you were up to speed.
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Alright.
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Still writing my first post, doing a flashback to the events earlier in the day. Btw if you have any tips on how I could improve my writing, please do not hesitate to share them with me.
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Still writing my first post, doing a flashback to the events earlier in the day. Btw if you have any tips on how I could improve my writing, please do not hesitate to share them with me.


Looking forward to it! Just about to post myself.
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Don't worry I'll have him remember the missing student and join the search. I'll probably edit into the post I just made. It may not seem like much but I'm doing all of this on a phone using mobile data, so it took me a while.
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Don't worry I'll have him remember the missing student and join the search. I'll probably edit into the post I just made. It may not seem like much but I'm doing all of this on a phone using mobile data, so it took me a while.


Save it for your next post, if you edit it into the current post it might get missed.
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Alright.
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Won't be posting for a while, mostly because I don't feel like it at the moment (and between this and that long fanfic I'm working on I need a little break). It won't be too long before I post again, but it won't be anytime soon. Just letting you know.
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Won't be posting for a while, mostly because I don't feel like it at the moment (and between this and that long fanfic I'm working on I need a little break). It won't be too long before I post again, but it won't be anytime soon. Just letting you know.


You're only expected to post once within a ten day period and I've been fairly lenient on that as well so no rush from me.
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I have a question about Kaitlyn Sewart's disappearance. Are the local authorities/police investigating her disappearance? I ask because the post I'm working on has a scene where Alexander is in a local McDonald's (which I'm sure still exists) where a news report from a local T.V. station catches his attention, which leads to him remembering Elroy mentioning the missing girl earlier in the day.
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I have a question about Kaitlyn Sewart's disappearance. Are the local authorities/police investigating her disappearance? I ask because the post I'm working on has a scene where Alexander is in a local McDonald's (which I'm sure still exists) where a news report from a local T.V. station catches his attention, which leads to him remembering Elroy mentioning the missing girl earlier in the day.


The police are involved, they are the ones organizing the community search party.
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@LukasVolkov Appreciate the edits, your character is accepted. Please read the IC before posting and if you need any clarification on events just ask!
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I'm going to move Alexander's CS over to the Characters Tab of the RP. I'll edit the one here afterwards so people know its been moved.

And this RP, even though it's just starting out, is awesome.
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I'm going to move Alexander's CS over to the Characters Tab of the RP. I'll edit the one here afterwards so people know its been moved.

And this RP, even though it's just starting out, is awesome.


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