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Expert training in telekinesis seems a bit much for her age and situation. We do not believe she has had sufficient time after the basics to reach this level of skill in telekinesis. Especially considering the focus on Battle Meditation.

Does she have (or lack) any particular skills with things like piloting, computers, large-scale tactics, small-scale tactics, military theory, etc.?
It would not be unnatural to receive extra training in tactics to better utilize battle meditation in combat.

We suspect her martial combat training will be focused more towards self-defense than towards offense. At her age, she would likely have had opportunities to use lightsabers, but might not have one of her own yet. The PG understanding of the Sith Academy is not quite as limited as that in SWTOR (if you used that as a reference).

For the Politics section, you could, if you feel like it, make a note that multiple Sith affiliated with the Ministry of War have queried about her training status. An acolyte with her particular talents would definitely be of interest to such Sith.

The Jedi are unlikely to have all that much direct intel about those enrolled in the Korriban academy. If they’ve got good agents in place, they may have indications that there is a student with such talent, but may lack name, image and/or training status. Apprehending anyone from the Korriban Academy is a task most Jedi would consider futile. Assassination is far more likely to succeed, but even that will be exceedingly difficult. Their best hope is likely to see her captured or killed at some point when she is not on Korriban.

On ownerships:
Acolytes are unlikely to be given multiple sith holocrons even on loan. While not uncommon, Holocrons are not everyday objects that regular Sith have multiple of. A particularly promising academy acolyte may get access to such within rooms dedicated to such use.

Holocrons with rare lore, such as for example battle meditation, are more restricted than those with more basic lore. Supervision and/or restrictions on access may be relevant for such. It would be highly unusual for an acolyte to be given long-term loan of a holocron that isn’t restricted to certain chambers within the academy, let alone multiple.

On the major failure... Being caught on film having killed another acolyte is the sort that would require significant cover-up. If her Battle Meditation talent was known at the time, then the overseers in charge of her would have arranged to have any such evidence buried deeply, before anyone could call for trial. The footage would, typically, disappear into private archives accessible only to the involved overseer(s) (and possibly their master(s).

Some Overseers might even consider cleaning up the evidence to be admirable and find suitable excuses for keeping her safe from prosecution. If “nobody” saw the murder happen, then it was an accident.

Interview:
As killing another Sith is a crime, any statement on record of Alecor killing Liat would be tantamount to seeing him tried for murder. Suggestion: How about Alecor reporting Liat’s actions and his master ensuring that Liat was reassigned elsewhere, or suffered an “accident”.

All in all, we see great promise to this sheet.
When you’re done making edits, stick the sheet back to pending, @vFear.
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Thanks for the quick and thorough response Ellri. I've gone through and actioned everything you mentioned, as well as added a few bits and pieces that felt relevant. I hope that I've covered everything off.

Yeah, SWTOR was my biggest point of reference for the Sith Academy. I hope the current versions fits the image we all have in mind here more closely.
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We're going to throw in that first of two approvals we forgot to throw in earlier.
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Stamp number 2!

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