[OOC] Noble Arms - The ASEAN War [Moved to New Thread]

[Letter Bee]

We are still looking for new players, btw.

[Letter Bee]

There is a new Interest Check for this RP.

[Letter Bee]

Post coming shortly; it's not an official GM one, but it should get the plot moving.

[Blitzyboi]

Let me know if this needs improvement. Time zone: New York, Available from 6:45-12:30.

Mira Logan

Appearance:

A mature woman with long, curly blonde hair, emerald eyes, and a fashionable taste in clothing, Usually wearing tight or frilly dresses usually made from a flexible yet durable fabric. If she isn't wearing that, she dons a tight battlesuit with metal segments covering most of her body, allowing for mobility and rpotection.. she leaves her hair long, and she never wears a hat. Her makeup is pristine and elegant. Height-5'2" weight-115lbs

Name: Mira Logan

Age: 24

Nationality: Australian

Noble Arm Name & Appearance: Durandal (The Enduring), Serrated Sickle. Durandal is as elegant, or even more so, than it's user.

Noble Arm Rank:

Insert NA rank here

Power: D.
Speed: B.
Range: D.
Persistence: B.
Precision: C.
Potential: B.

Noble Arm Type, Element, and Range: Melee, Lightning/electricity, Close range.
Noble Arm Abilities:
Smite: Imbues Durandal with electricity, which is released upon contact with any surface. Can be dodged.
Thundercrack: This creates a loud crack when a dangerous entity is within striking distance. Earmuffs will weaken the noise.

Misc Abilities: None

Personality:

Likes: Technology, Personal appearance.

Dislikes: Water, Repeating herself.

Fears: The Ocean, Spiders.

Bio: A kindhearted woman with a knack for technology and swordplay that was inspired by many television shows and fencing classes, Mira is a complex individual and first impressions vary depending on personal preference. Some may view her as an eccentric fashionista, others may view her as a kind, aspiring model, but most just view her as an everyday, upper-class citizen. She prefers to Kill with kindness, and if that fails, then she'll attack. She is highly diplomatic in that regard, but if she must, she can and will cut off a limb. She never goes for the kill shot.

Military or Civilian Rank: Civilian.

[Letter Bee]

Let me know if this needs improvement.

@Blitzyboi

What's your time zone and how many hours of free time do you have? We can talk this over on Discord if you want?

That said, yes, the sheet needs improvement from beginning to end.

If you're going to use a written description for appearance, please make it a paragraph long; this isn't the Free RP section, and while we're still more lenient than Advanced, one sentence saying your character is a mature woman who wears fashionable clothing without elaborating just what makes her a mature woman and not specifying what fashionable clothing she wears even though there are all sorts of fashionable clothing and not all of them are appropriate for a battlefield does not work for a description.

This is the same for your Noble Arm's Abilities (that said, I like how they are not overpowered), your Personality, and your Biography, the latter which is the most flawed section. How is she a kindhearted woman? What made her that way? Why does she have an interest in technology and swordplay?

How is she complex and how does she act in a way that first impressions vary?

You can edit your character sheet to include your answers, by the way, and just tell us if they're edited.

[Dark Light]

This looks pretty interesting. Quite keen.
Can I be a pain and ask for some brief details of the current active team composition?
I'd like to fill a gap and don't really wanna accidentally copy another players character.

[Letter Bee]

This looks pretty interesting. Quite keen.
Can I be a pain and ask for some brief details of the current active team composition?
I'd like to fill a gap and don't really wanna accidentally copy another players character.

@Dark Light

Sure; it'll be easier on the OOC Discord Server, though, so can you join it?

The invite link is in the OOC Opening Post.

Edit: Nevermind, I compiled a list.

Currently Active PCs, GMPCs, and Combat NPCs List:

Noel Alonso (GMPC)

Lei Qingshe

Nil (GMPC)

Henri Janessens

Nikolay and Cuong + Lotus Squadron (Former PCs, now NPCs used with their player's permission)

Myron Makaraig (GMPC)

Iker Orozco (GMPC)

Sister Marta Rocha

Amadeo Balagtas (GMPC, Imprisoned by the Enemy NPCs)

Cristina Bernadino

[Letter Bee]

We have decided to end the current thread on Roleplayer Guild due to most players having left due to IRL work and other factors.

[Blitzyboi]

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What's your time zone and how many hours of free time do you have? We can talk this over on Discord if you want?

That said, yes, the sheet needs improvement from beginning to end.

If you're going to use a written description for appearance, please make it a paragraph long; this isn't the Free RP section, and while we're still more lenient than Advanced, one sentence saying your character is a mature woman who wears fashionable clothing without elaborating just what makes her a mature woman and not specifying what fashionable clothing she wears even though there are all sorts of fashionable clothing and not all of them are appropriate for a battlefield does not work for a description.

This is the same for your Noble Arm's Abilities (that said, I like how they are not overpowered), your Personality, and your Biography, the latter which is the most flawed section. How is she a kindhearted woman? What made her that way? Why does she have an interest in technology and swordplay?

How is she complex and how does she act in a way that first impressions vary?

You can edit your character sheet to include your answers, by the way, and just tell us if they're edited.

@Letter Bee

thank you, I will revise this.

[Letter Bee]

@Blitzyboi, thanks, but the current thread is ended.

[Letter Bee]

Link to the New Thread

Just so you guys know.