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Nation: The Krannak Collective
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Government: Democratic/Monarchy (The monarch holds power like a Prime Minister or President, but there is a democratically elected parliment/senate)
Capital: Pakrik Major
Home Sector: Kanchen Sector
Holdings: N/A
Leader: High Lord Ul-Tera

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Ul-tera's Empire:
With the decay of the Empire and the arrival of a strange new race, the Kanchen sector fell into disarray. Residents were both afraid of and hoping for a swift Imperial return, as it may not have been the best, but it gave them order and direction. The Ke'ter, however, were able to swiftly unite the broken sector - they described an effective method they had used on thier home planet before disaster destroyed it. The royal family was established nd the first Parliment was elected, which brought order to the confused residents.

Ul-tera has proven to be both fair and ruthless, allowing everyone fair chances but being merciless when faced with threat. His "Even Chances" Act, the very first decleration he ever made, was a hit, almost doubling the sectors production and tripling its economic output since the Empire left.

Military:
Space - 1 "Konoko" Obliterator (Strong enough to destroy large battleships)

15 "Deyuku" Ravagers (Huge battleships with enough crew to populate a small city)

30 "Ni'hibi" Cruisers (Smallish battleships)
50 "Madoyi" Hunters (Toughened combat ships)

300 "Nagura-teku" One-man bombers

500 "Kakome-teku" One-man fighters


Ground forces - 10 Ke'ter Commandants (Mentally and physically enhanced Ke'ters who lead the armies)
100 Kalidor "Eagle-eyes" (Kalidors trained to hunt down and slaughter any that stand in their way)
500 Davinor-II "Brutes"
1500 Xa-fel "Damned"
2500 Ke'ter "Warriors"
5000 Ke'ter "Thralls"
9000 Ke'ter "Grunts"

Weapons
C-14 Blaster - a small, cheap and accurate pistol, designed to be carried as a sidearm. Low damage and short range


C-34 Plasma Rifle - A tough, durable and accurate rifle with three settings: Semi-auto for accurate, conservative fire, Fully-auto for suppressive or reckless fire and Beam for short-lived, long-range destruction.


T-1 Neutraliser - A pistol-like device, designed to stun and incapacitate foes, rather than kill them. Short range and low ammo weighs down a accurate, potent weapon


Tachyon Arrow - Only used when desperate. A long range, highly powerful and very dangerous bolt of energy passes through the foe, killing most instantly and incapaciting the rest. The bolt will continue to travel through foes until it hits a thick surface, meaning anyone behind the target is at risk as well. Dismal reload, one-shot clips and mega expensive ammo make this powerful weapon the ultimate Krannak last resort


Custom Race - Ke'ter (Key-ter):

Looks:

Average height: 0.9m - 1.2m
Average life expectency: Can be extended indefinately, but on Earth's atmosphere with no technology, roughly 120 years. Matures at roughly 14 years.
Homeworld: Euclid (Destroyed by meteor strike)
Other: Ke'ter do not walk on two legs. The use all four limbs like an animal, or sidestep like a crab. However, they can stand upright and are cabable of very fast speeds

Special abilities:
Nimble - Ke'ter are very swift and agile, able to manuveur in tight or restricted spaces.
Mental link - Ke'ter are able to communicate mentally and can transfer thoughts and memories to any other race. This is not only useful in combat for spotting enemies, but also for passing on skills to allies and recruits.
Naturally gifted - Ke'ter are natural engineers and can build and maintain a vast variety of war machines.
Shy - Ke'ter have hidden themselves for decades, which makes then great at stealth
Defensive - Ke'ter are great at using low cover and creating inpenetrable defenses

Weakness:
Cowardly - When it all goes belly up, Ke'ter are the first off the battlefield and the last to return.
Shy - Ke'ter rarely negotiate outside thier own race, which causes no end of frustration when it comes to diplomatic talks
Frail - Ke'ter cannot take much physical damage before incapacitation
No jedi/sith - Ke'ter are incapable of using the Force or becoming a Jedi/Sith
Defensive - Ke'ter are very defensively minded, rarely pushing forwards unless they are certain they can secure the next point.
Foreign soil - Ke'ter hate unfamiliar territory, and suffer loss of morale and over defensiveness on foreign soil
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Huh, very interesting. While not necessarily a canon race, everything else seems pretty good to me.

Edit: Missed it, but there's actually one thing that needs to be changed. The Obliterator, that at least has to be changed to something less destructive.
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Ok, changed it.
How's that?
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And edited my post. I'll just take the Pride of the Core than!!

It would be really handy to know when the COUP takes place.

If I knew when it would be. Because the SSD had its origin at the end of the clone wars.
In the early years of the new order. There was work on a 12 Kilometer Super Star destroyer prototype.

I would assume the New Emperor would continue on this project?
Else I will remove the pride of the core and take the unfinished SSD prototype as the ship I took?
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Kaiden has conflicted loyalties on the subject. Obviously, he is strongly compelled to return home, but at the same time he has his duty to the subsidiary he is a part of. Being Mandalorian is part of a Culture, it's part of his identity, so he couldn't just ignore the call from the Mandalore, but he also has a large degree of personnel loyalty to White Baton, having been the father of the Paramilitary section, and by extent loyalty to the Phar-Genix corporation. To this day, it's still not something he has figured out, and it's one of the many reasons Phar-Genix attempts to avoid any form of hostility with the Grand Republic of Mandalore, since it is obvious to the leading bodies of Phar-Genix that Kaiden could possibly switch sides in that case, and a number of the para-military forces of White Baton holds loyalty to him. Luckily for Phar-Genix, since they are not a nation so to speak, they don't have the need to go to war with nations, as of yet. Indeed, since they profiteer of the violence by selling weaponry, constructing ships and own heavy industry, they want to get the nations to war with each other and avoid that confrontation at all.
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Phoden said
And edited my post. I'll just take the Pride of the Core than!!It would be really handy to know when the COUP takes place.If I knew when it would be. Because the SSD had its origin at the end of the clone wars.In the early years of the new order. There was work on a 12 Kilometer Super Star destroyer prototype.I would assume the New Emperor would continue on this project?Else I will remove the pride of the core and take the unfinished SSD prototype as the ship I took?

The Coup took place in 19 BBY(or Year 1 After Fall), a few months after the clone wars ended. However, the galaxy came falling apart soon after. By then there was really no New Emperor to direct the construction of such a ship, it was every man for himself.

As for having a SSD, you may have to talk to Omega about it.

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Ok, changed it.How's that?

Yes, much better.
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Its the unfinished protoype.

But oke I'll wait till omega responses
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Kaiden has conflicted loyalties on the subject. Obviously, he is strongly compelled to return home, but at the same time he has his duty to the subsidiary he is a part of. Being Mandalorian is part of a Culture, it's part of his identity, so he couldn't just ignore the call from the Mandalore, but he also has a large degree of personnel loyalty to White Baton, having been the father of the Paramilitary section, and by extent loyalty to the Phar-Genix corporation. To this day, it's still not something he has figured out, and it's one of the many reasons Phar-Genix attempts to avoid any form of hostility with the Grand Republic of Mandalore, since it is obvious to the leading bodies of Phar-Genix that Kaiden could possibly switch sides in that case, and a number of the para-military forces of White Baton holds loyalty to him. Luckily for Phar-Genix, since they are not a nation so to speak, they don't have the need to go to war with nations, as of yet. Indeed, since they profiteer of the violence by selling weaponry, constructing ships and own heavy industry, they want to get the nations to war with each other and avoid that confrontation at all.


Okay, sounds good.

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And edited my post. I'll just take the Pride of the Core than!!


I'm unable to find the Pride of the Core on Wookiepedia, do you have a source for this vessel?
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Alfhedil said
Okay, sounds good.I'm unable to find the Pride of the Core on Wookiepedia, do you have a source for this vessel?


Mandator II
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http://swfanon.wikia.com/wiki/Mandator_II-class_Star_Dreadnough

But I had done more research and found an SSD prototype being buildt of 12 km.
I was thinkinf of taking that uncomplted one.

But here pride of the Core
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Phoden said
http://swfanon.wikia.com/wiki/Mandator_II-class_Star_DreadnoughBut I had done more research and found an SSD prototype being buildt of 12 km.I was thinkinf of taking that uncomplted one.But here pride of the Core


SSD Prototype

Also, we are sourcing from the Star Wars wikia, or the Wookiepedia.
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I thought the Pride was just an unused prototype?
Surely the Apocalypta would be a better choice?
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The Pride was used. But its existance was the point of these hulking super ships. None of the Seperatist commanders ever wanted to even fight against it. The fear factor alone won it.

Now Should I take the Pride of the core or the SDD prototype
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I'll let you have the Mandator II ship then.
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alos strange. That Link I placed down was a link of wookipedia. But it seems to have changed
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Shit, forgot to save my progress and lost a few hours of work.
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http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Super_Star_Destroyer_prototype

This should be the correct link to the SSD prototype. For Balancing and story wise reasons. I would prefer to get the unfinished SDD prototype. Than pride of the Core.
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Phoden said
http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Super_Star_Destroyer_prototypeThis should be the correct link to the SSD prototype. For Balancing and story wise reasons. I would prefer to get the unfinished SDD prototype. Than pride of the Core.


Seems fine to me.
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Since We will focus on the star wars wiki for history , tech and such on.

Since Credits is the universal currency. I have been inspecting the Brema Sector and Seswenna sector.

I had actualy not noticed but Seswenna is an hub point of a lot of trade routes.

And Money is needed especialy in this era of war.

I am asking what is the Time progression?

(For some reason I realy like making it more realsitic)

I would gather Taxes from Every Trade route running through each sector I control.
In my Idea as an probaply represive New order structured Realm. My planets income would probaply mostly go to keeping the order and training and maintaing troops.

Mayby The Capital would give of some extra credits." For war 3 things are needed Money , money and most of all money"

"Warlord Zsinj consolidated the economy of his empire. Rather than most warlods capteruing huge Swats of ravanged provinces. This allowed Zsinj to remain small enfouhg to keep out of the New republics sight"

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Time? Well, it has to have progressed long snough for the initial anarchy to have died down and the leaders to step up. For example, i doubt Garn could simply proclaim himself Grand Moff without a few naysayers. And Ul-tera and the Ke'ter only took command after the Empire withdrew, so a new system of government needed to be set up.
I think it's about twenty years after the Coup.
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