Ebil, if you re-read my post it sorta signals the end of his performance. One example being on the first paragraph,
PureThoughts said
Isaac continued to watch the Harlequin's performance with interest, his smile gradually growing as he began to forget the scenario he was in. It went on for a blissful 5 minutes, as laughter, cheering, and good moments were created. It was going great until he wondered if the Harlequin used to be a performer in real life...Isaac's smile faded. Yet he continued to watch, and when the Harlequin had finished, Isaac was the first to clap, and it was followed by cheers and other chatter from the crowd as they made comments about his performance. Isaac sighed, his gaze still on the Harlequin.
and at the beginning of the second paragraph
PureThoughts said
Pyotr went on and on in his performance, going from an over the top heartbreaking monologue, trying his earnest to draw sympathy from the crowd, to a rousing speech and finally ending his encore performance with a few light-hearted jokes, trying to break up the dire situation some might find themselves in, and make them forget about their worries if just for a few minutes. He flounced and waved his hands, the smiles and cheers driving him on, till he finally called an end to it with a last joke to send the crowd on their way happy, thanking them profusely all the way
Also, I feel like you're not exploiting the potential of your posts. :P For instance, when you said you were performing. What was your performance? You also simply stated your character had chosen a spot. You could've been more descriptive on where that chosen spot was, or what it was near. Sort've like Pyotr and the bridge. Another thing is what your characters thought process is when he's performing. Does he enjoy doing what he does? Does his thoughts go back on the past while he does his performance? Maybe relating to a memory in real life or such?
Also, just one more thing. I really don't want to come off as rude, or arrogant like I probably have above. But there shouldn't have been a large crowd for Xris to notice. Pytor had thanked the crowd and sent them away before Isaac began to speak to him. You could say maybe Xris noticed Pytor's crowd as Xris performed, and waited for his performance to end by Xris performing himself before confronting Pyotr. Or something of that sort,
PureThoughts said
He flounced and waved his hands, the smiles and cheers driving him on, till he finally called an end to it with a last joke to send the crowd on their way happy, thanking them profusely all the way. (then talking stuff with happens with Isaac yada yada)
I just don't think your post really connects or fits with the collaboration post. When did Xris decide to come into the conversation? Was this after Isaac and pyotr talked and began to go on their lil' quest to find people? :3 Cause when I read your post it makes me think you thought his performance was still going on, and you decided to interfere with it.
I don't know. I just want to clear some stuff up I might just be seeing things wrong here. :L Apologies
