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Real Name: Arkhtan al'Djinni
Hero Alias: The Djinni
Aliases: Ark, The Genie of the Lamp
Age: Immortal. At least 2000 years old.
Sex: Male
Date of Birth: August 14th
Relatives: None





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CorruptedShadow The Warrior of Sunlight

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Well, I really don't want to start him off as being powerful, but he can't join S.U.P.E.D. without being powerful....would it be okay if he's maybe getting tested to join S.U.P.E.D. or...?
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Well, what's wrong with being OP as heck? Especially in a place where everyone else is OP as heck?
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Not saying there is something wrong with it, I mean this IS a superhero Roleplay. This is just the character that I want to start with, y'know?
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The15thSpycrab, funny enough, this is the first CS I see here that is too overpowered. You character's creation power, when granting a wish, is basically god-like. Also, his indestructibility is too much as well. Basically, his conjuration needs to be weakened even when granting a wish and you need to list more weaknesses and/or attacks that his actually vulnerable to.

CorruptedShadow, the problem is that S.U.P.E.D. is a team of the strongest superheroes and your character is just way too weak as he is right now. They wouldn't accept him.

Has anyone else made changes to their CS?
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I've tweaked my character a bit, gave him an increase to strength, stamina, blah blah blah, basically made him stronger.
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Scarifar, alright, your CS is accepted. That's three spots already, including my own character, I think I may have two or three more spots open.

Redwing, just saw the link that you had posted. Again, it only shows the logo of the site and not the actual picture. Unless the picture is the logo of the site?
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No it isn't the logo. Let me try getting it from a different website.

Edit: Try this one. Does it work? Priestess
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I've weakened his conjuration to food, jewels, and servants, and added the ability to be trapped in something when it's sealed.
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You can update your CS with it since I've already linked your CS into the "Accepted Characters" hider.
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i beefed up my guy's equipment making him a BAMF and added to his powers.
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Redwing, yes, that works. Be sure to update your CS with that image then.

The15thSpycrab, hmm, can your character be forcefully trapped into containers and such? Like with really strong magic or technology?

Nyther, looks great now. Accepted~
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Blu said
The15thSpycrab, hmm, can your character be forcefully trapped into containers and such? Like with really strong magic or technology?


Yes, although he hasn't come across any.
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Alright, just one more question, since his normal appearance is a lamp, will he still be able to talk and move?
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Blu said
Alright, just one more question, since his normal appearance is a lamp, will he still be able to talk and move?


He doesn't really have a normal appearance. I just put the lamp because that's where he spends much of his time. If he's out of the lamp, he'd be in his hero look, or something else i come up with. I'll probably put a picture or description if he's anything else.
To answer your question, no, he can't move or talk from the lamp. He can still hear, however, and rubbing the lamp is the equivalent of ringing a doorbell.
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In any case, you're accepted Spycrab.

Alright, that brings us to five characters now. I'll wait a little bit more to see if CorruptedShadow replies.
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Alright, well, my last defense to see if I can keep him the way he is: Does he absolutely have to be a S.U.P.E.D. member and not an independent superhero who just helps them? If not, then I guess I'll just have to make him more powerful(qq.)
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Hmm, how about have your character be S.U.P.E.D.'s sidekick? Then later, when he develops into a really powerful superhero, he becomes a full-fledged member.
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Is there still a spot for me to join?
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I would say no, since we're already at 5-6, but it's Blu's decision really.
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