[OOC] Starfire

[Guess Who]

Hello are you guys still accepting people?

@Eviledd1984

We have several people who haven't posted in weeks despite several mentions and PMs so you can take one of their spots.

[Eviledd1984]

Awesome i will make my character right away.

[Guess Who]

Awesome i will make my character right away.

@Eviledd1984

A few things about your character. First off, it's always a good idea to post your sheet in the OOC then, after getting permission, to move it to the Character Tab. Two, there's a few things in her background that bother me. For example, whose military did she work for? Military is really vague considering there's thousands of independent solar systems all with their own systems of government. Also, who are the Kilwrathy? Finally, just to make sure this is what you want, you said your character is working under a Captain Ahab, so then is she not a part of Starfire? There's no rule that you have to be a part of the team, but everything is going to be revolving around them so by not being with them you're going to be missing out on a lot.

[Eviledd1984]

@Guess Who Okay im gonna edit something on my character to your liking,After i eat of course :P

[Eviledd1984]

Name: Kimberly "Keke" Chambers

Appearance: Face:

Armor:

Race: Human

Gender: Female

Age: 24

Background: At a young age Kimberly was involve with the sky and space wanting to be a pilot,At a young age she worked to becoming a pilot and after she graduated high school she enlisted in the A.C.U (Called Arial Combat Unit) as a ship pilot. At the age of twenty she became a pilot and was known as one of the best in the galaxy.During one her flights on the Janus II at the age of twenty-three her ship was attacked by bandit ships and was invaded and the crew killed and the ship destroyed thanks to Kimberly blowing up the ship with most of the bandits inside.

Kimberly was the only known survivor of the attack chopping and shooting her way into the escape pod armed only with a double barrel shotgun and a chainsaw,She escaped to the near by planet called Phobos calling a distress call to the near by station of Medusa.Now she is aboard the Starfire her only friend a small A.I named Ahab.

Personality: Kimberly is a foul mouth alcoholic that loves to shot and kill alien scum,She also loves her job as a pilot and loves flying her ship in space and in the sky.She is friendly to people she like which is few because of the trauma form a few years ago.Because of the trauma she has a rabbit of talking to herself and even slapping her head if she had done something wrong and mostly acting childish when something isn't going her way or acting crazy and blood thirsty in that situation.

Gear:

3x Laser grenade [+}

2x EMP grenades [+]

1x Laser shotgun [+]

1x Laser Pistol [+]

1x Laser Minisaw [+]

1x Elite Space Corp Tactical body armour (capable of stopping most small arms and laser bullets)

Personal Ship:
"Queequeg"-

[Eviledd1984]

Edited my character,If their anything i can change then ask an i will change :)

[Guess Who]

Edited my character,If their anything i can change then ask an i will change :)

@Eviledd1984

Looks good. Just move it to the Character Tab and be sure to put it in a hider like everyone else.

P.S. You might want to check it for spelling and punctuation errors though. For example, I think you meant she has a habit of talking to herself, not a talking rabbit.

[Eviledd1984]

Good point thank you i will change that,I posted it.

[Guess Who]

By the way @Eviledd1984, you can post in the IC whenever you want. We'll just say you showed up on the same ship as Yoko. Maybe you were on a different side or you fell asleep on the flight here. It's up to you.

[Eviledd1984]

@Guess Who Sure i can do that no problemo.

[Guess Who]

Hey @Eviledd1984, just a few things about your post. First, The ship Yoko was in had already landed and he had left. The reason I had suggested having your character be asleep was to explain why so much time had passed between when Yoko left the ship and when your character left. I apologize for not making that clear. Second, I'd like to point out that this is a Casual RP and not a Free RP. I know I've been lenient in the past but I have to draw the line somewhere*. Please proofread your post, put spaces after your punctuation, fix the beginning of the first sentence, etc. Lastly, I'm not too sure about the inclusion of so many NPCs. A simple, unnamed doctor like Abillioncats and Prince of Seraphs is fine but you've gone a bit overboard.

*[@Everyone] I'm not going to name names but Evil isn't the only one who hasn't been following the rules of Casual RPs. You know who you are. I'm not asking for a mind blowing 20 page thesis, but please use correct grammar and spelling.

[Eviledd1984]

@Guess Who very well then i will edit the post.

[Lady Seraphina]

Have we had any sort of time skip since landing on the planet? Cause my characters out for the eight hours following the Alamo's landing and returning to his regeneration chamber. Which doesn't leave a lot for me to do.

[Guess Who]

Have we had any sort of time skip since landing on the planet? Cause my characters out for the eight hours following the Alamo's landing and returning to his regeneration chamber. Which doesn't leave a lot for me to do.

@Prince of Seraphs

Yeah, I was already planning on doing a time skip in my next post. I'll probably wait for @Eviledd1984 to edit their post before doing so though, in case Evil has something planned.

[Eviledd1984]

@Guess Who For now im thinking of standard arriving on the ship late,If that is cool with ya?

[Trevor1001]

Going to post as soon as I get home. Also I'm going to leave stuff about my ability up in the air so others people (not just PCs) can have it.

[Eviledd1984]

For now im thinking of standard arriving on the ship late,If that is cool with you?

[Guess Who]

For now im thinking of standard arriving on the ship late,If that is cool with you?

@Eviledd1984

Oops, forgot to reply the first time you asked. Yeah, that's fine.

[Eviledd1984]

@Guess Who It's okay thank you i will post as soon as i can,Thank you :)

[Abillioncats]

@Eviledd1984

Your sig is making me visibly cringe everytime I see it, it's awful. XD