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Let's try that...


Oooh, nice character. I like her a lot(Teresa Palmer <3).

But uh, a couple things:
"Broken" and "Lonely" aren't traits. They are simply something a person is, not aspects of their personality. I would like you to replace those two with actual personality traits.

Really, aside that, I can't think of anything else wrong with her. I'll let @HushedWhispers and@XxLyraxX add onto what I've said and see what they think.
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Alrighty then... I will go and do that.

Changed them to Cold and Difficult. I had to look up personality traits. Is that bad? xD
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Let's try that...


Nice character. You do not disappoint when it comes to making characters, I see. ^^ She is accepted when you change whatever @Altered Tundra asked you to change then you can place her in the Character Tab.

Also, you can place your character at the party at Dallas' apartment, if you wish though beware that a time skip post is happening soon to start classes and whatnot. ^^
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Alrighty then... I will go and do that.

Changed them to Cold and Difficult. I had to look up personality traits. Is that bad? xD


And no, that's not bad, I do the same for all of my characters. Honestly. -_-"
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Okay. Will she be late to the party? Like no one really knows her yet? I think that would be fun. :)
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Okay. Will she be late to the party? Like no one really knows her yet? I think that would be fun. :)


Whatever you decide is fine with me. ^^ Beware of a fuming sister though as your character may pass her on her way to the party though.
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Is that Stella? Still try to get caught up... At least with the party portion.
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Is that Stella? Still try to get caught up... At least with the party portion.


Yes but feel free to interact with her, if you wish. She is quite friendly, just do not mess with her the wrong way or her brother then your character is safe. ^^
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Great... Though Raven is kind of a bitch herself.... xD

BTW, I'll see if I can get a quick post up before I go to bed... Though it is doubtful...
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Great... Though Raven is kind of a bitch herself.... xD

BTW, I'll see if I can get a quick post up before I go to bed... Though it is doubtful...


I can see them being the sort of mean girls on campus. Though, Stella is nicer. Haha.

And take your time with a post. No rush. ^^
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Alrighty then... I will go and do that.

Changed them to Cold and Difficult. I had to look up personality traits. Is that bad? xD


No haha, it's not bad. I took a personality test for my character lmao,b ut not those half-assed ones. The ones that are the real deal that give you the ENFJ types. They work wonders for in-depth personalities. :3
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@HushedWhispers Funny, I've yet to see Stella's nice side. XD Peter will be joining you both on your way out, so let's hope another enemy isn't made today.
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Curious how that will go. Perhaps Zeke and Cori will bump into that trio on their walk. I guess that must cause some form of confusion. yay :D
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@HushedWhispers Funny, I've yet to see Stella's nice side. XD Peter will be joining you both on your way out, so let's hope another enemy isn't made today.


Well, she has to claim her dominance over the Academy first then she'll be nice. Haha. Although, @WhiteStar19 character might give her run for her money in the bitch department. Haha.

Curious how that will go. Perhaps Zeke and Cori will bump into that trio on their walk. I guess that must cause some form of confusion. yay :D


Let's just hope Zeke doesn't hear about what Stella did at the party.
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Also, I'll get a Stella post up today after work, which will be 6 PM central time. I know it's a long wait but I usually make it worth it. ^^
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Oh yeah. Sorry if I'm stepping out of line by pointing this out, but Raven's bio has some discrepancies in it. There's no way in hell that a hospital would let non-medical personnel - especially a child - pull the plug on another human being, even if it was that dying persons last wish.
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Alrighty. I'll change that.
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